Whispered on the Winds of Change
Acrostic of a lifetime...52 total reviews
Comment from Cindy Decker
Yvette,
Your poem is very deep and meaningful; It's an excellent acrostic poem.
It is a little about growing up too fast. The last stanza is revealing. The last line is beautiful--the reader can find comfort in it.
Have a nice week.
Best Wishes,
Cindy
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reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Yvette,
Your poem is very deep and meaningful; It's an excellent acrostic poem.
It is a little about growing up too fast. The last stanza is revealing. The last line is beautiful--the reader can find comfort in it.
Have a nice week.
Best Wishes,
Cindy
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Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thanx much, Cindy, for your wonderful comments - always good to hear from you over hear! ;) Be sure enjoy some sun on your face and enjoy the week ahead!! ;) Yvette
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
Nice job on this contest entry. Good use of the words that you spelled out and turned into poetry. True that life's changes do not last, in fact nothing really does. Thank you for sharing this piece.
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reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Nice job on this contest entry. Good use of the words that you spelled out and turned into poetry. True that life's changes do not last, in fact nothing really does. Thank you for sharing this piece.
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Comment Written 17-May-2020
reply by the author on 18-May-2020
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Thanx, A-Louise, for dropping by for the review on this one!! Be sure stop in again sometime! ;) Yvette
