Silence
Reprieve for the soul9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, Silence, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives to lead us to this still, noiseless place.
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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This cinquain, Silence, has the proper 2-4-6-8-2 formatting and follows the specific parts of speech directives to lead us to this still, noiseless place.
Comment Written 13-May-2020
reply by the author on 14-May-2020
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Thanx for your review on this one, Bill - take care, sir! ;) Yvette
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
I enjoyed this well written cinquain, my friend. This is the traditional cinquain form which has been lost in most of them written today. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Stay safe~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I enjoyed this well written cinquain, my friend. This is the traditional cinquain form which has been lost in most of them written today. Best wishes in the contest, my friend. Stay safe~Debbie
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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The honor of starshine - how wonderful! Thank you so very much for your review and stars, Debbie!! May you find Sunshine and smiles throughout your upcoming week!
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Mystery Writer,
How I wish I had six stars for your lovely cinquain. Not only is the form PERFECT, but so is the sentiment. I long for silence from the media, politics, and the arguments I have in my head with reviewers who cannot review with fairness... or intelligence!
Your offering is beautiful!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Hello Mystery Writer,
How I wish I had six stars for your lovely cinquain. Not only is the form PERFECT, but so is the sentiment. I long for silence from the media, politics, and the arguments I have in my head with reviewers who cannot review with fairness... or intelligence!
Your offering is beautiful!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Oh, my goodness gracious yes!! And they're very 'snowflaky'... anything below a five and they're in 'revenge review' mode.... the more and more 'new folks without a clue' there are, the more I may just stick to the folks I know - it's really just not worth being honest anymore. They want an echo chamber of how wonderful their writing is and that's all.... sigh.
Comment from Amanda Louise Davis
I liked it, but it doesn't follow the prompts. The title should have been 'Silence.' The 2nd line has the wrong amount of syllables also. It's good but not fitting in with the instructions.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I liked it, but it doesn't follow the prompts. The title should have been 'Silence.' The 2nd line has the wrong amount of syllables also. It's good but not fitting in with the instructions.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Comment from Puzzle
Oh this is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed this piece. I felt calm while I was reading it! Great job with this. I don't see any errors. I even love the picture you chose.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Oh this is absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed this piece. I felt calm while I was reading it! Great job with this. I don't see any errors. I even love the picture you chose.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!
Comment from tfawcus
A well-constructed cinquain that fulfils all of the requirements of the form. Your presentation and your word choices help to create an atmosphere of quiet. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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A well-constructed cinquain that fulfils all of the requirements of the form. Your presentation and your word choices help to create an atmosphere of quiet. Nicely done.
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I value peace and quiet so much in this noisy world and I find peace in the early hours or late at night as during the day many of my neighbours are noisy, you brought much tranquility here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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I value peace and quiet so much in this noisy world and I find peace in the early hours or late at night as during the day many of my neighbours are noisy, you brought much tranquility here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh this is just so serene. Your entire presentation an expression of calm, cool, quiet.
Stunning in every way and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Oh this is just so serene. Your entire presentation an expression of calm, cool, quiet.
Stunning in every way and I wish you great luck in the voting booth.
Gloria
Comment Written 09-May-2020
reply by the author on 09-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for your review!
Comment from Lucy de Welles
Very nice. Beautiful photo that perfectly matches the text. The poem is wonderful. Beautiful word choice. The colors are soothing and smoothing. Nothing to change.
Thank you for the opportunity to review this poem. Well done!
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Very nice. Beautiful photo that perfectly matches the text. The poem is wonderful. Beautiful word choice. The colors are soothing and smoothing. Nothing to change.
Thank you for the opportunity to review this poem. Well done!
Comment Written 08-May-2020
reply by the author on 08-May-2020
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Thank you so much for your review!