A Picture On My Wall
A FreeVerse Club entry...63 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Diana, no my sweet friend...they were rich...look at the love in that picture...exactly what God wanted...I have a few pictures of my grandparent's...and great grandparents...there amazing sweet girl...wonderful memories...I love your poem you....and your picture is priceless...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hi Diana, no my sweet friend...they were rich...look at the love in that picture...exactly what God wanted...I have a few pictures of my grandparent's...and great grandparents...there amazing sweet girl...wonderful memories...I love your poem you....and your picture is priceless...very nicely written...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Yes, absolutely they were rich! haha! appreciate you enjoyed this! xoxo
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appreciate you as well sweet girl...love xxoo
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xoxoxo!
Comment from Bill Schott
This free verse, A Picture on My Wall, is a good look through your heart at those pillars in your past that you may have never met, but know were the best sort, and happy to be alive in your thoughts.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This free verse, A Picture on My Wall, is a good look through your heart at those pillars in your past that you may have never met, but know were the best sort, and happy to be alive in your thoughts.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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thanks Bill, so many stories passed down that it does make you feel like you knew them even if not personally! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from lyenochka
What a family treasure that picture is! Thank you for sharing the strength of your family in your poem depicted in that photograph taken so long ago! How rare it is for both sides of the family and multiple generations to be together.
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What a family treasure that picture is! Thank you for sharing the strength of your family in your poem depicted in that photograph taken so long ago! How rare it is for both sides of the family and multiple generations to be together.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thanks, there are just a few around that I have. Some other family have other pictures that I am trying to get copies of. Love the old ones like this!! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxox
Comment from Tanvi Pauddar
Whoa!!!! This is one of the best poems I've ever read! I really liked how you used that picture and wrote such a good poem about it!!! Once again, I enjoyed your beautiful poem!
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Whoa!!!! This is one of the best poems I've ever read! I really liked how you used that picture and wrote such a good poem about it!!! Once again, I enjoyed your beautiful poem!
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Awe! thanks Tanvi! Glad you could see some of my family through this poem! save all the ones you can for when you grow up!! xoxoxo
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You're welcome! xoxo
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xoxo!!!!
Comment from LisaMay
How lovely to have generational photos such as this, to feel the background of your 'heartbeat family'. Your ability as a poet reflecting on the past is mirrored by photography's ability to catch that moment in time.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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How lovely to have generational photos such as this, to feel the background of your 'heartbeat family'. Your ability as a poet reflecting on the past is mirrored by photography's ability to catch that moment in time.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thanks, there are a few others, but this is the only one I have with so many in the picture at one time. I even have portrait pics of the great-grandparents on my grandfather's side. Amazing to have them for sure! xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Comment from Drew Delaney
A beautiful memory written in free verse and the pic to go with it! It's good to know our roots and to know we belong. They may not be here now, but we are a reflection of the ones who came before. Nicely written!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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A beautiful memory written in free verse and the pic to go with it! It's good to know our roots and to know we belong. They may not be here now, but we are a reflection of the ones who came before. Nicely written!
Drew xx
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thanks Drew! Its the only one I have that has so many family in one picture. appreciate you enjoyed! xoxox
Comment from R56Ma3
The words and sentences has some style and what a great story of the years of childhood memories described in this poem. I enjoyed reading it, it was quite excellent!
R56ma3
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The words and sentences has some style and what a great story of the years of childhood memories described in this poem. I enjoyed reading it, it was quite excellent!
R56ma3
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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thank you so much! so happy you enjoyed!! xoxox
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You're welcome
Comment from June Sargent
I love old photographs -moments in time captured on paper. They are nostalgic pieces of history. And they are extra special when it comes to family. Thanks for sharing yours in a free verse that flows well.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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I love old photographs -moments in time captured on paper. They are nostalgic pieces of history. And they are extra special when it comes to family. Thanks for sharing yours in a free verse that flows well.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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thanks June! i love them too. This is the only one i have with so many family in one picture, especially with three generations! appreciate you enjoyed it! xoxox
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, touching, descriptive poem about family and the peaceful feeling engendered by just looking at a photo. When I look at one family photo book, I know I'm going back to the shelf for another soon! :-)
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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This is a lovely, touching, descriptive poem about family and the peaceful feeling engendered by just looking at a photo. When I look at one family photo book, I know I'm going back to the shelf for another soon! :-)
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you Janice! I know what you mean! when I start pulling them out, i can't stop. Nice to do to show the grandkids too so they know their family! xoxoxo
Comment from patcelaw
A well written free verse about a memory frozen in time. Your notes and your poem are a blessing to read. May your week be filled with wonder and blessings.
Patricia
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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A well written free verse about a memory frozen in time. Your notes and your poem are a blessing to read. May your week be filled with wonder and blessings.
Patricia
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Good morning, thank you so much for taking time to read and leave me this awesome feedback! appreciate you enjoyed! Have a blessed week yourself!! xoxox
