A Picture On My Wall
A FreeVerse Club entry...63 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
you have written very well of a time gone by seen through the eyes of still photography
a beautiful pictured image and a beautiful poem which has captured every emotion and detail of life back when'
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
you have written very well of a time gone by seen through the eyes of still photography
a beautiful pictured image and a beautiful poem which has captured every emotion and detail of life back when'
have a smiley day
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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thanks, appreciate you enjoyed this!! xoxox
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A lovely old family photograph Diana and a good choice of topic for the time freeze challenge.
Not rich, not poor just sharing love - great lines, and what family is all about. Nice one Diana, cheers Valda
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
A lovely old family photograph Diana and a good choice of topic for the time freeze challenge.
Not rich, not poor just sharing love - great lines, and what family is all about. Nice one Diana, cheers Valda
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Valda! This is a rare one to have both of sets of my great-grandparents in the same picture! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What a precious memory for you and your family. It always touches the heart to see members of a family; even thou you never met them. They are still part of your family; your past. Love your poem.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
What a precious memory for you and your family. It always touches the heart to see members of a family; even thou you never met them. They are still part of your family; your past. Love your poem.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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I have so few of them and yes, so precious! especially of my dad. Don't have too many as I didn't get to grow up with him around. My grandparents were my rock though :) appreciate you enjoyed this. xoxo
Comment from Bichon
I really enjoyed this poem. Your descriptions of the old photograph flowed well and really let the reader see the photograph through their own eyes. Photographs are amazing things, especially when they bring you back to good times.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
I really enjoyed this poem. Your descriptions of the old photograph flowed well and really let the reader see the photograph through their own eyes. Photographs are amazing things, especially when they bring you back to good times.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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thanks so much! Love old pictures!! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Ogden
I'm convinced. Your poem is authentic. That ancient photograph leaves no doubt about it. (You might consider bequeathing it to the Smithsonian Institution.)
Ogden (Don)
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
I'm convinced. Your poem is authentic. That ancient photograph leaves no doubt about it. (You might consider bequeathing it to the Smithsonian Institution.)
Ogden (Don)
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Hahaha! It is rare for sure! It?s the only one we have of both sets of great-grandparents in the same picture! Appreciate your feedback! xoxo
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It is remarkable, Diana!
Don
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about a photo of yesteryear that becomes a scene frozen in time to be enjoyed for generations to come every time we see that picture.
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
A very well-written free verse poem about a photo of yesteryear that becomes a scene frozen in time to be enjoyed for generations to come every time we see that picture.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thank you! I?m so blessed to have it to be able to show my great-grandchildren a picture with two sets of their great, great, great, great-grandparents! Wow! That sound so far in the past!! LoL! Appreciate you enjoyed! xoxo
Comment from Alchera
Five nostalgic stanzas. Three heartfelt generational photographically ancestral memories that pushes the poetess towards a flash back family research that cloudy flows throughout her childhood's epiphanies. Some photos really take us in a pensive mood of time lack that often make the sensitive soul nostalgically to a teardrop. I like it. Great work.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
Five nostalgic stanzas. Three heartfelt generational photographically ancestral memories that pushes the poetess towards a flash back family research that cloudy flows throughout her childhood's epiphanies. Some photos really take us in a pensive mood of time lack that often make the sensitive soul nostalgically to a teardrop. I like it. Great work.
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Good morning, thank you so much for taking time to read and leave me this awesome feedback! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxox
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Good evening, sorry for my delay and have a splendid evening with your beloved ones! You are always welcomed and I hope we become good cultural sincere and honest
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Friends. Blessings. Tony.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a memorable photograph Diana as time is always frozen within a photograph and no one ages within it. The moment the camera has clicked, time has aged the moment. Your choice words are endearing here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
This is a memorable photograph Diana as time is always frozen within a photograph and no one ages within it. The moment the camera has clicked, time has aged the moment. Your choice words are endearing here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 04-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Good morning, thank you so much for taking time to read and leave me this awesome feedback! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxox
Comment from Gloria ....
What a smart idea using a photograph to represent the free verse "Time Freeze" challenge.
A photograph is perfect, a fun free verse full of great imagery moments frozen in time.
A most enjoyable read today.
Gloria
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
What a smart idea using a photograph to represent the free verse "Time Freeze" challenge.
A photograph is perfect, a fun free verse full of great imagery moments frozen in time.
A most enjoyable read today.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Good morning, thank you so much for taking time to read and leave me this awesome feedback! appreciate you enjoyed! xoxox
Comment from Susan Larson
I love seeing those old family photographs and I love to see people appreciate them the way you do, especially when you write such a descriptive poem to accompany it. Will you frame that, too?
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
I love seeing those old family photographs and I love to see people appreciate them the way you do, especially when you write such a descriptive poem to accompany it. Will you frame that, too?
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 04-May-2020
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Thanks for checking this out! I didn't think about framing this, but what a great idea! thanks for that! :) xoxoxo