Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "THE LAST CHAPTER of Book 4"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
36 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
Eric seems like a humble hero, and he has made numerous friends along the way. How exciting to go through a fold in space and to see new planets.
Your writing is creative and clear. The use of telepathy and thoughts makes communicating fun and its own sort of adventure.
I'm sure Eric will have more adventures and meet many more types of interesting people.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Eric seems like a humble hero, and he has made numerous friends along the way. How exciting to go through a fold in space and to see new planets.
Your writing is creative and clear. The use of telepathy and thoughts makes communicating fun and its own sort of adventure.
I'm sure Eric will have more adventures and meet many more types of interesting people.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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I'm sure there will be more, I've loads of ideas going around my head. But not yet. Thank you so much for your really nice comments, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your prize, Sandra! Quite an imaginative story! I see this is the last in book four--how many books about Eric's adventures all together? Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Congrats on your prize, Sandra! Quite an imaginative story! I see this is the last in book four--how many books about Eric's adventures all together? Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 11-Jun-2020
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2020
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Thank you, Liz. There are just the four books, I've posted the cover pictures on my last post to show everyone. I'll probably be writing more adventures later, but I want to finish the ABC book first and then decide on where Eric will be going next. It's fun writing them. Thanks again, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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The alphabet books are superb!
Comment from Veenbee
Very well done. I felt like I took a journey to a far away planet. I was able to get that even through the last chapter. That says a lot. Everything was very clear and understandable. I even understood that this adventure Eric was on, because of its' secrecy, meant that he must have been taken, unaware by his family. I enjoyed your story very much.
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Very well done. I felt like I took a journey to a far away planet. I was able to get that even through the last chapter. That says a lot. Everything was very clear and understandable. I even understood that this adventure Eric was on, because of its' secrecy, meant that he must have been taken, unaware by his family. I enjoyed your story very much.
Comment Written 07-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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That has to be my biggest compliment, thank you so very much! For you to be able to see all that in my last chapter, and get it right, has put a huge smile on my face! The six stars are a bonus, and I really appreciate them. Thank you! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Bravo, Bravo, take a bow my amazing friend...I can't wait to see it in a book Sandra...another one for the library...
I'm so happy Eric and Herbie, and his other friends got to go into the fold...and see a whole new galaxy...this one will be hard to beat...what could be more exciting???...
a wonderful story told sweet girl...an awesome chapter...
now everyone will be in their homes soon...and don't forget Eric's bike...I can't wait for the next one you...CONGRATULATIONS...your my hero...soooooo very well written...and I love your picture...I can just see Eric in there...loveeeeeeee your story told...love you bunches beautiful girl..Linda xxoo
how is everyone doing???...has Ian lost his mind staying home???...LOL...I have...it won't be long and this to shall pass...God Bless...xxoo say I to Ian for me...
Kristy and the kids are doing well...but I don't think she will ever go out again...so protective...xxoo
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Bravo, Bravo, take a bow my amazing friend...I can't wait to see it in a book Sandra...another one for the library...
I'm so happy Eric and Herbie, and his other friends got to go into the fold...and see a whole new galaxy...this one will be hard to beat...what could be more exciting???...
a wonderful story told sweet girl...an awesome chapter...
now everyone will be in their homes soon...and don't forget Eric's bike...I can't wait for the next one you...CONGRATULATIONS...your my hero...soooooo very well written...and I love your picture...I can just see Eric in there...loveeeeeeee your story told...love you bunches beautiful girl..Linda xxoo
how is everyone doing???...has Ian lost his mind staying home???...LOL...I have...it won't be long and this to shall pass...God Bless...xxoo say I to Ian for me...
Kristy and the kids are doing well...but I don't think she will ever go out again...so protective...xxoo
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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LOL!! Linda, you are amazing, I love your reviews, they put such a humongous smile on my face. :))
I'm busy at the moment getting Noah's book ready for publication. So, hopefully, it won't be long now. :)) I'm looking for a few more pictures. I can't wait to hear what he thinks of it.
I can quite understand Kristy, I'm a bit like that at the moment. I haven't been able to have a cuddle from Eric or my other grandchildren for such a long time, they'll all be married by the time I see them next! LOL!
Ian is fine, bored, because he can't see his grandchildren. They and his football are his life. Maggie always says she comes a close third! She's great, though and does anything for Ian and he loves her for it. She's not not Ian's daughter's mother. I think you know Bev died when Sarah was 6 years old. They've had a tough life, but at last things seem to be stabilising for him. I'm hoping he's going to have a better year. Fingers all crossed!
You take care, my sweet friend, love you such a lot, so stay strong. Say hi to your mother, I hope she's doing okay? Biggest hugs to you all.. xxxxx
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Hi Sandra, I wish I could get so pictures...but Kristy has lost her mind...LOL...I told her I was getting ready to leave here soon...and she said she didn't want me to come...LOL...if I didn't know her so well it would hurt...but I do...she said the people over here go out to much...and I could get corona...have it two weeks before we would know...she is so worried about Abby...but she called the doctor...and the doctor told her to keep her in...away from people for a little longer...Abby has a heart condition...and her 1 diabetes...so I do understand...I told her when thing settle down I would be back...but I do need to get home...it's been almost three months...
mom is doing better...but still has to be watched...but there are people here to watch her...it's a little harder without me...they will have to take turns coming and going...but they will work it out...and Jim can bring someone in if he has to...I told him to give me a little time...and if he needs help...I will be back...she's healthy enough to walk...and get her tv dinners if she wants them...she prefers them...because there over cook...soft...and she loves pot pies...those are lunch...they cook for dinner...I know it will be fine...and I can leave Illinois and be back in Florida the next day...
I am so glad to hear Ian is doing better...just bored...yes I did know about Bev...passed when Sarah was younger...they truly have had a rough life...I pray they all have a better year...
well!!!....you and Graham have a wonderful evening...or morning...LOL...biggerest hugs back at you...lots of smiles...love you in bunches...be safe ...Linda xxoo
Comment from richie b
Sandra,
I am impressed with your writing. When writing
full length novels quality can suffer in the mix. Not in your
case, your characters and dialogue remain strong and
constant. Your descriptions keep the reader informed as
story changes evolve.
You cover the complexities of space travel in a
realistic vein that doesn't leave the reader unsure
and keeps the story moving.
Congratulations on well written story!
Peace,
Richie b
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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Sandra,
I am impressed with your writing. When writing
full length novels quality can suffer in the mix. Not in your
case, your characters and dialogue remain strong and
constant. Your descriptions keep the reader informed as
story changes evolve.
You cover the complexities of space travel in a
realistic vein that doesn't leave the reader unsure
and keeps the story moving.
Congratulations on well written story!
Peace,
Richie b
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 07-May-2020
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What a really lovely review to wake up to, Richie, thank you so very much. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. My hardest critics will be my grandson and his friends. I've got all my fingers crossed! lol. Have a wonderful day, and please stay safe. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from S.M.E.Schultz
A great ending! I have loved reading the story and I am sure it will be a hit with all the kids who will read it. It also is a good read-aloud story..I tried it! Congrats!!
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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A great ending! I have loved reading the story and I am sure it will be a hit with all the kids who will read it. It also is a good read-aloud story..I tried it! Congrats!!
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review and all the stars! I'm delighted you enjoyed my story, now to get it ready for my grandson and his school. I'm hoping they will enjoy it. Thank you for being such a supportive reader. I really appreciate you. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Franklin Dillard
Good day to you Ms Sandra, this is a real wonderful arrangement of words. It gives the reader the excitement reading from the very to the last. you did a remarkable job. It kept me until the last word
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Good day to you Ms Sandra, this is a real wonderful arrangement of words. It gives the reader the excitement reading from the very to the last. you did a remarkable job. It kept me until the last word
Comment Written 06-May-2020
reply by the author on 06-May-2020
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Aw, thank you so very much, Franklin, I really appreciate this review. I'm delighted you enjoyed the final part. Thank you for the 6 lovely stars, you are so very kind. Have a wonderful day, you have started mine on a big smile! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Coming to the end of an adventure is indeed melancholy. This was an adventure young Eric is bound to never forget. Leaving friends behind is never easy. Interesting story.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Coming to the end of an adventure is indeed melancholy. This was an adventure young Eric is bound to never forget. Leaving friends behind is never easy. Interesting story.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you, Brett, for reading this final part and the nice comments. I hope he'll like it. I'll be reading it to him and his friends at his school. By the time lock down is finished, I'll hopefully have this one ready. Thanks again, Brett. I'm so pleased you liked it. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
Bravo! I'm sorry to see the story end, but I'm sure Eric will be off on his travels again soon. I also hope the 'real' Eric enjoys this book as much as the last two, and his school encourages all the children to read it. - Well done, my clever friend!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Bravo! I'm sorry to see the story end, but I'm sure Eric will be off on his travels again soon. I also hope the 'real' Eric enjoys this book as much as the last two, and his school encourages all the children to read it. - Well done, my clever friend!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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Thank you so much, Alexis, for another wonderful review, and for awarding this part a six stars! So happy you enjoyed it. Take care, my friend. Sending you a hug. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great image, Sandra, it looks very real.
-Congratulations on completing the story, too.
-I have enjoyed it and will miss the Aqua-beings.
-A very good ending chapter- The Aqua-beings get
to see their new home for the first time, and
Kon is overcome with emotion.
-You describe the maneuvering to get there very well.
-Eric is obviously excited, and why not?
Kon even thanks him at the end for having
mentioned what his planet was like in the future.
-My favorite scene is when Kon goes
in the water and decides to take a swim.
-It is very touching and shows how
much this means to him and his people.
-The ending is bittersweet because Eric would
never see them again, but you just never know
when something will turn up and surprise you!
-It is fitting that Eric thinks of his
mum and dad and Chloe at the end.
-Well done, my friend.
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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-Great image, Sandra, it looks very real.
-Congratulations on completing the story, too.
-I have enjoyed it and will miss the Aqua-beings.
-A very good ending chapter- The Aqua-beings get
to see their new home for the first time, and
Kon is overcome with emotion.
-You describe the maneuvering to get there very well.
-Eric is obviously excited, and why not?
Kon even thanks him at the end for having
mentioned what his planet was like in the future.
-My favorite scene is when Kon goes
in the water and decides to take a swim.
-It is very touching and shows how
much this means to him and his people.
-The ending is bittersweet because Eric would
never see them again, but you just never know
when something will turn up and surprise you!
-It is fitting that Eric thinks of his
mum and dad and Chloe at the end.
-Well done, my friend.
Comment Written 05-May-2020
reply by the author on 05-May-2020
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What a really lovely review, Pam, thank you so much. I've been thinking about writing a sequel to this story, it's running around my head about checking up on the Aqua-beings. I've some work to do before I start a new adventure but once I'm caught up don't be surprised if you see Eric coming across your screen again!! lol. Thank you so much for the six, that really was kind of you, ;)) and for mentioning all the parts you particularly enjoyed. Sending you a huge hug, my friend, for this and all your support. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the 6 and the review, Sandra. You should be proud of this work; Eric will love the story. Is there actually information out there about Aqua-beings? I think your imagination would do them justice:)