Treasure Hunters
A Trinet entry15 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a very skillfully-written, vividly descriptive piece. You have made great use of specific details to describe the versatility of the seas--providing treasures and transportation for sailors and a grave.
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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This is a very skillfully-written, vividly descriptive piece. You have made great use of specific details to describe the versatility of the seas--providing treasures and transportation for sailors and a grave.
Comment Written 03-May-2020
reply by the author on 03-May-2020
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Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on the words and theme of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes. The artwork is engaging and drew me to read this poem.
Hope you are doing well.....
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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The author's words are interesting, descriptive and creative. The reader
pondered on the words and theme of this poem. Thank you for the author's notes. The artwork is engaging and drew me to read this poem.
Hope you are doing well.....
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share your insight!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in great form, June. I enjoyed reading it. The art choice is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words create great imagery for readers. I could see the ships, the broken bottles that become sea glass, and the tragedies that the ocean causes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes if this is still in the booth.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Your contest entry is in great form, June. I enjoyed reading it. The art choice is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Those words create great imagery for readers. I could see the ships, the broken bottles that become sea glass, and the tragedies that the ocean causes. Thanks for sharing and best wishes if this is still in the booth.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello June,
I pray you and your family are doing well. I love the photo you used for your beautiful poem. You met the poem requirement. I never did a Trinet poem before. I have to try this type of poem one day. I like the story of Neptune's victories on the seven seas. I'm sure there were many widows mourning many lost husbands who didn't return from the seas. I always enjoyed reading about Greek Mythology, especially the Greek God Poseidon. I would imagine seafarers were always looking for that gold. Nice story. Thanks for sharing. Good job. Happy writing:-)
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Hello June,
I pray you and your family are doing well. I love the photo you used for your beautiful poem. You met the poem requirement. I never did a Trinet poem before. I have to try this type of poem one day. I like the story of Neptune's victories on the seven seas. I'm sure there were many widows mourning many lost husbands who didn't return from the seas. I always enjoyed reading about Greek Mythology, especially the Greek God Poseidon. I would imagine seafarers were always looking for that gold. Nice story. Thanks for sharing. Good job. Happy writing:-)
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to share deep insights! Glad you enjoyed this trinet.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This trinet poem, Treasure Hunters, has the proper formatting and brings the sea king up to be a part of the remembrance of the brave who went out and still do to the sea.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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This trinet poem, Treasure Hunters, has the proper formatting and brings the sea king up to be a part of the remembrance of the brave who went out and still do to the sea.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you for dropping by to read and review!
Comment from angel123
Your poem about Neptune is most interesting and informative. It flows well with an ancient story that demanded my attention. Your artwork choice enhanced the message of your poem. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Your poem about Neptune is most interesting and informative. It flows well with an ancient story that demanded my attention. Your artwork choice enhanced the message of your poem. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaah... the adventures will forever continue for both man and Neptune!! ;) A wonderful offering for the Trinet contest, anon - best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Aaaaah... the adventures will forever continue for both man and Neptune!! ;) A wonderful offering for the Trinet contest, anon - best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
A Trinet entry
Treasure Hunters
Hello my friend
Cool entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. I always liked Greek mythology. I grew up in Madrid, Spain. We have many fountains and one if for Neptune and another for the female counterpart, Cybeles, mother goddess.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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A Trinet entry
Treasure Hunters
Hello my friend
Cool entry for the Trinet Poetry writing prompt contest. I always liked Greek mythology. I grew up in Madrid, Spain. We have many fountains and one if for Neptune and another for the female counterpart, Cybeles, mother goddess.
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I would love to be a part of a treasure hunt. I believe like taking a good road trip, part of the excitement is the journey. The destination reached is just the icing on the cake. I like this grand adventure you've presented in this well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I would love to be a part of a treasure hunt. I believe like taking a good road trip, part of the excitement is the journey. The destination reached is just the icing on the cake. I like this grand adventure you've presented in this well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this trinet on treasure hunting!
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is an interesting view of the ocean. I suppose there are many treasures on the sea floor, and men will risk life and limb to get them. Those are real tragic treasures.
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This is an interesting view of the ocean. I suppose there are many treasures on the sea floor, and men will risk life and limb to get them. Those are real tragic treasures.
Comment Written 01-May-2020