Burning Bush
A Trinet contest poem...4 total reviews
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
what a gracious poem. Congratulations! You got second place! So glad for you poet-writer. I hope that you are having a great day where you live today as the weather here is in the '70s. God's gracious love!
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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what a gracious poem. Congratulations! You got second place! So glad for you poet-writer. I hope that you are having a great day where you live today as the weather here is in the '70s. God's gracious love!
Comment Written 02-May-2020
reply by the author on 02-May-2020
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Thank you so much! I didn?t read the instructions correctly at first and started out with Syllables instead of words but they let me correct it and I really appreciated it. xoxo
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your spiritual Trinet poem. It is well written and well received.
It flows with a profound message about faith. I especially like your last stanza and your last three lines with each sentence starting with s letters and sounds. Your artwork choice is exceptional. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual Trinet poem. It is well written and well received.
It flows with a profound message about faith. I especially like your last stanza and your last three lines with each sentence starting with s letters and sounds. Your artwork choice is exceptional. Best wishes!
Comment Written 01-May-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you very much! So happy you appreciate this! xoxoxo
Comment from amada
Your lines are soft and quiet, like if telling a secret to a dear friend; the story of the burning fire, very well written. It was a pleasure to read it. I liked the spiritual content, especially, we need the divine intervention in tjos to,e pf crisis.
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Your lines are soft and quiet, like if telling a secret to a dear friend; the story of the burning fire, very well written. It was a pleasure to read it. I liked the spiritual content, especially, we need the divine intervention in tjos to,e pf crisis.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Thank you, I was off the mark, so this has been updated. I had structur in syllables, not words and I needed three stanzas of the style! Haha! Appreciate you enjoyed the brief version! LoL! xoxo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I'm not familiar with this form of poetry, you brought a spiritual feeling to these words as we are all in search of the truth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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I'm not familiar with this form of poetry, you brought a spiritual feeling to these words as we are all in search of the truth, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-May-2020
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Dolly, I messed up, had to correct, got it right this time! Haha! Appreciate you enjoyed the brief version. :)