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Daydreams from the Ashes

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Poems and meditations

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Comment from samandlancelot
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K,

It is nice that your breakup and the new love in his life didn't leave you bitter. You both hurt each other, but you will hold onto your ability to love.

It's beautiful!

Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you very much. Definitely an old flame, but we both came out of it able to love.
Comment from LisaMay
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The passage of time can work wonders on acceptance, self forgiveness, and softening of past hurts, as evidenced in your poem. It sure shows how "open-hearted" the writer has become. Well done. Not always easy where love is concerned, even a past love.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you very much. I figured sharing the poem wouldn?t hurt, if other people are going through the same thing.
Comment from January L'Angelle
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This is beautiful. I love the way you have put into words the way a break up should be. This is well penned. I really enjoyed reading your poem. Respectfully- January L.

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 28-Apr-2020
    Thank you very much. I?m glad it came across as it was, which was net positive.