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Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4

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Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis

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Comment from susand3022
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Hi Sandra! I don't see any nits in this one, but I'm just dying to see what happens when they get to the next planet! I wonder if they'll check out that Univers' Earth? I wonder what stage it will be in?

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for this lovely review, Susan. I'm so pleased you are still enjoying it. Have are lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Mistydawn
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I imagine mindreading could be bad for a mischievous child, lol. The kid would get into trouble for things he'd thought about but hasn't done. Imagine what help it'd be in solving crimes even stopping them before they began. Your chapter is well-written, very interesting as always.

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you, dear Misty, for this lovely review. No, no one will be looking into my mind! LOL, Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by Mistydawn on 27-Apr-2020
    They wouldn't want to look into my mind, it's utter confusion, chaos in there.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
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Sandra, hello! So they are arriving soon! Let's hope it is indeed the planet the aqua beings need. I think it is!
I liked the way Eric praised the Sunday dinner his mother makes, and of course, that he could get it in this spaceship.
As always...looking forward to the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for your continued support, Marjon, I really appreciate it. Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
reply by Marjon van Bruggen on 27-Apr-2020
    Sandra, welcome.
Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
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Hi Sandra, this story is just so delightful, and now Eric has persuaded to have his mother's Sunday roast. I love it. What an imagination. And now they're approaching the coordinates. What will happen when they reach the mysterious fold? A big hug. Ulla xxx

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Thank you so much for the golden star, Ulla, that is so nice of you. I'm glad you enjoyed the Sunday roast! LOL Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I do very much like this story. I am glad they could replicate Eric's mom's cooking. That was a fun part. I can't wait to see about this almost parallel universe. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 26-Apr-2020


reply by the author on 27-Apr-2020
    Good morning, Barbara, thank you so much for the six stars and the lovely review. I do so appreciate you support! Have a lovely day, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx