Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "The Aqua-Beings Want Answers"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
33 total reviews
Comment from wordsfromsue
I'm glad you went back to the italics. My mind could grab on to that easier.
Poor Jason Momoa's kinfolk aren't getting any encouraging answers here. :-(
I hope Herbie and Gizmo come up with something great. :-)
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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I'm glad you went back to the italics. My mind could grab on to that easier.
Poor Jason Momoa's kinfolk aren't getting any encouraging answers here. :-(
I hope Herbie and Gizmo come up with something great. :-)
Comment Written 08-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 08-Apr-2020
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Thank you so much, Sue, for reading this part. That is so nice of you. No, Jason's ok! He's already on the new planet, he and Drozig met up recently, and he's perfectly happy. LOL :)) Sandra xxxxx
Comment from alexisleech
Another perfectly written chapter, and one that has me begging for more. I have a couple of ideas, but I'm probably completely wrong, so I won't even attempt to work out what Herbie is going to suggest to Eric to solve the problem of a place to live for the people of Atlantis. Your imagination shows no bounds - well done!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Another perfectly written chapter, and one that has me begging for more. I have a couple of ideas, but I'm probably completely wrong, so I won't even attempt to work out what Herbie is going to suggest to Eric to solve the problem of a place to live for the people of Atlantis. Your imagination shows no bounds - well done!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 02-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2020
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Thank you so very much, Alexis, for all the lovely stars and the fabulous review. I really appreciate you coming along on this adventure with Eric and Herbie. Stay safe, my friend. :)) Sandra xxxx
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece of General Fiction having lucid as well as matching the theme wording, smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
The last two lines being CATCHY are particularly noteworthy. Like Eric, I'm also VERY curious to know what's going to happen next?
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hello Sandramitchell,
Nice piece of General Fiction having lucid as well as matching the theme wording, smooth and captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end.
The last two lines being CATCHY are particularly noteworthy. Like Eric, I'm also VERY curious to know what's going to happen next?
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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What a really nice review! Thank you so much, RP. I'm really pleased you want to read the next part, that's a very encouraging compliment, thank you. Stay safe, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
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Sandra, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image for the chapter, Sandra.
-You have shown a wide range of emotions in this one.
-There is Eric's concern over letting the Aqua-beings
read his thoughts, and what they learn when they do.
-You bring in a good connection with Herbie's comment
about the Wise One's and their impression of Earth.
-The saddest one is at the end when Kon says he knows
there isn't a planet big enough for all of them, and how Eric
feels horrible that there doesn't seem to be a way to help them.
-In between these issues, I like how gentle Kon is with Eric,
and how he explains what will happen.
-It also makes me wonder what they saw,
but then again, it sounds sad.
-But you give us hope at the end when Herbie
and Gizmo "began whining and flashing at each other.
He knew they were chatting in their strange language."
-I am guessing that if we put the knowledge the
Wise One's had, and what the Aqua-beings learned
as they read Eric's thoughts that Herbie and Gizmo
have the beginnings of a very good plan!
Well done!
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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-A good image for the chapter, Sandra.
-You have shown a wide range of emotions in this one.
-There is Eric's concern over letting the Aqua-beings
read his thoughts, and what they learn when they do.
-You bring in a good connection with Herbie's comment
about the Wise One's and their impression of Earth.
-The saddest one is at the end when Kon says he knows
there isn't a planet big enough for all of them, and how Eric
feels horrible that there doesn't seem to be a way to help them.
-In between these issues, I like how gentle Kon is with Eric,
and how he explains what will happen.
-It also makes me wonder what they saw,
but then again, it sounds sad.
-But you give us hope at the end when Herbie
and Gizmo "began whining and flashing at each other.
He knew they were chatting in their strange language."
-I am guessing that if we put the knowledge the
Wise One's had, and what the Aqua-beings learned
as they read Eric's thoughts that Herbie and Gizmo
have the beginnings of a very good plan!
Well done!
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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You've picked up on so much in this part, Pam, even I'm amazed at how much I put into it. LOL. Thank you so very much for this brilliant review, and for all the lovely stars. It was so lovely to wake up to, my friend. I'm hoping to be able to do a bit more today, my head had a drum roll banging away in it yesterday. Now to find out if Eric's learnt what Herbie and Gizmo have planned so he can tell me! Sending you a big hug, my dear friend, please take care and stay safe and well. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving, Sandra, and I appreciate your reply. I'm glad you learned what it is you do! Sorry to hear about your banging head, but hopefully that is better today. I am sure Herbie and Gizmo will fill you in:)
Comment from rspoet
Hello Sandra,
An excellent addition to the story of Atlantis.
Eric's pretty brave to let them into his mind, I don't think I'd want anyone
messing around in my mind. Who knows what horrors they might find.
Mankind's history would scare anyone, earthling or alien,
it's amazing we've even survived as a species this long.
Maybe Drozig knows of a place where the Atlanteans can go,
like to his own planet.
Love the interactions between Kon and Eric.
Another great chapter, my friend
Well done
Stay safe.
Robert
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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Hello Sandra,
An excellent addition to the story of Atlantis.
Eric's pretty brave to let them into his mind, I don't think I'd want anyone
messing around in my mind. Who knows what horrors they might find.
Mankind's history would scare anyone, earthling or alien,
it's amazing we've even survived as a species this long.
Maybe Drozig knows of a place where the Atlanteans can go,
like to his own planet.
Love the interactions between Kon and Eric.
Another great chapter, my friend
Well done
Stay safe.
Robert
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2020
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I agree with you, Robert, I wouldn't want people taking a stroll around my mind, either. LOL, there are too many cobwebs hanging around in mine! Thank you so very much for your lovely review and the six shining stars. I'm so pleased you're still enjoying my story. Sometimes I wonder if you can get into my mind! Are you an aqua-being by any chance, or perhaps one of Drozig's people!! Stay safe, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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I've been maneuvering through the cobwebs of your mind for some time. LOL As far as being an aqua-being, me mum was an aqua-woman. so mum's the word.
Have a great day.
Robert
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How exciting! LOL!! Enjoy your day, too. :))
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The classical story of evil meets good, innocence overthrown all the plans for invasion from an outer space species :"That's what the Wise Ones on my planet saw, and the reason they wanted to destroy Earth. When they met you, they realised not all Earth's beings were like these dangerous people you've just seen. It was only your strong defence of the people that convinced them to give Earth another chance."
Thank you for sharing yet another captivating story from Eric's saga.
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reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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The classical story of evil meets good, innocence overthrown all the plans for invasion from an outer space species :"That's what the Wise Ones on my planet saw, and the reason they wanted to destroy Earth. When they met you, they realised not all Earth's beings were like these dangerous people you've just seen. It was only your strong defence of the people that convinced them to give Earth another chance."
Thank you for sharing yet another captivating story from Eric's saga.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 31-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Aw, thank you, Iza. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this part. Things aren't going to well at the moment. So it's down to Herbie and Gizmo to come up with a plan. :)) Did you mean to give me a four, it's okay, but you didn't say what needed doing. Stay safe and well, my friend. Big hugs. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from l.raven
Hi Sandra, I hate it when someone whispers...and you can't hear what they are saying....just say it out loud...unless they can change the plant...or come up with a safe plant for them to live on...Eric is right...what can they do my wonderful friend ???...just keep Eric's bike safe...it will be interesting to see how they solve this problem...oh sweet girl...I loveeeeee this story told you...ask Graham what is going to happen...he'll tell me...very well written my amazing friend...ya know I love it...I never get bored reading about Eric...well I have to get off here...love you the mostest...Linda xxoo
how is every one doing???...are you staying home...and do you go out shopping???...I go out to pick up what we need...but come straight back...I us wipes when I go out...and wash my hands when I come home...Please take care ...and stay safe...Ian too...say hi for me...love xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra, I hate it when someone whispers...and you can't hear what they are saying....just say it out loud...unless they can change the plant...or come up with a safe plant for them to live on...Eric is right...what can they do my wonderful friend ???...just keep Eric's bike safe...it will be interesting to see how they solve this problem...oh sweet girl...I loveeeeee this story told you...ask Graham what is going to happen...he'll tell me...very well written my amazing friend...ya know I love it...I never get bored reading about Eric...well I have to get off here...love you the mostest...Linda xxoo
how is every one doing???...are you staying home...and do you go out shopping???...I go out to pick up what we need...but come straight back...I us wipes when I go out...and wash my hands when I come home...Please take care ...and stay safe...Ian too...say hi for me...love xxoo
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much, Linda, for the lovely 6 stars and your wonderful, funny review! lol. I hate whisperers too, I always think they're talking about me, and check to see if my skirt isn't tucked into my knickers!! lol.
We're all fine, keeping safe indoors, and checking on each other daily on the phone or Skype. It's such a worrying time. I hope it doesn't go on for as long as they are predicting, I worry about abused children and wives, they have no way out and are stuck with their abusers. All we can do is pray they are safe. I'm having deliveries on line, our supermarkets are all doing that now, it stops us going out. There are some really brave, kind people around, and this virus is bringing out more heroes than ever. I hope you and all your family stay safe, I worry so much. You are my family. Thank goodness I can send you a virtual hug, so I'm sending loads of them. Take care, my friend. Love you all so much. :)) Sandra xxxxxxx
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Hi Sandra, I pray every night for everyone...my family...and that would be you and yours as well...and everyone in the world...
I feel like this my sweet friend...God knows when we are going to be born...and He knows when we are going to die...I don't believe satan has a hand in that...only that some will be going his way...but I believe the people passing now...if they didn't die from this virus...they still would have passed...God set the date...I don't like anyone to pass away...but it is part of life...so I believe God will get us through this...I believe we are pretty much to the end of our days...just not yet...you all just keep in touch as much as you can...and stay safe...I still go out...but I keep my distance...and I have Clorex wipes in my car...I went out to get something for the one eye that wont give up...I got home...and it must have fallen out of the bag...or I left it in the cart...I'm trying not to read...but my brother said I am losing the battle...so I'm on for an hour now...and then I well get off for two...
I feel so bad for so many who are going through really hard times...I hope this is over soon...all of you take care...and stay safe...and sending you a world of hugs and love...love you so much as well...smiling back at you...big...were in God's hands...He won't forsake us...xxxxxxxxxxxxoooooooooo pass them around....
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, dear.... what on Earth (lol - no pun intended!) are those two up to? Oh, I could speculate, but I'm thinking I'll wait 'til next time to see!! ;) Loved this one, Sandra - the 'latent species memories' has always been an intrigue that other authors have touched, but I like that you don't dwell on it, just that it's simply there.. ;) ;) Looking forward to the next installment... Thanx for the 'detour' from STUFF today! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Oh, dear.... what on Earth (lol - no pun intended!) are those two up to? Oh, I could speculate, but I'm thinking I'll wait 'til next time to see!! ;) Loved this one, Sandra - the 'latent species memories' has always been an intrigue that other authors have touched, but I like that you don't dwell on it, just that it's simply there.. ;) ;) Looking forward to the next installment... Thanx for the 'detour' from STUFF today! :) Yvette
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 31-Mar-2020
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Thank you my dear Yvette. I have no idea what those two rascals are up to! Even Eric doesn't know. I guess we will have to wait and hope they know what they're doing! LOL. Thanks for your lovely review, my friend. Stay safe and well. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Drew Delaney
Another well written chapter here and deserving of a six in my mind. I have not noticed any nits. It is early in the morning and my eyes are in need of new glasses. Your story is intriguing and I am sure ERIC will be especially Fascinated.
Be safe!
Drew xx
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Another well written chapter here and deserving of a six in my mind. I have not noticed any nits. It is early in the morning and my eyes are in need of new glasses. Your story is intriguing and I am sure ERIC will be especially Fascinated.
Be safe!
Drew xx
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Aw, thank you, Drew! What a lovely review, and a huge hug for the six stars! Eric won't let me show him the stories until they're finished. He hates waiting for the next part! lol. He'd be no good on here. I'm a bit worried that he'll slip back with the progress he's made with his dyslexia, Sue, his mum, is keeping the lessons up, but children aren't as good with parents as the are with their teachers. I'm hoping this bug doesn't go on for too long. Thanks again, my friend, and you stay safe as well!! :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Bichon
Hi Sandra! This was another excellent chapter to your unique and fascinating story. You have created the scene excellently, and the tension came across clearly. The dialogue itself was very well written too, great work!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Hi Sandra! This was another excellent chapter to your unique and fascinating story. You have created the scene excellently, and the tension came across clearly. The dialogue itself was very well written too, great work!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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What a fabulous review, Chloe! Thank you so much. It really is so encouraging to know that readers get what I'm trying to put across in words and it not look forced. I so appreciate your comments. Thanks, my friend. Stay safe and well! :)) Sandra xxx
