A Glass Heart
The nothingness of a lost love.41 total reviews
Comment from John Ciarmello
Beautifully done, Mike. I love the simplicity of the words; they all say so much individually. I hope you have healed, and you were able to pick up the pieces.
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Beautifully done, Mike. I love the simplicity of the words; they all say so much individually. I hope you have healed, and you were able to pick up the pieces.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Wow, you went way back on that one. Thank you for your kind words!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment from sunnilicious
Great artwork choice for overall presentation. We all have love woes. You expressed yourself well. Excellent flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice contempory work.
Be careful, Stay safe and strong. God bless you :)
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Great artwork choice for overall presentation. We all have love woes. You expressed yourself well. Excellent flow of rhythm and rhymes. Nice contempory work.
Be careful, Stay safe and strong. God bless you :)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Hello, my friend! Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Rmocruz
Very free flowing, well chosen words present this broken heart.
The visual art selection has well complimented your twenty words.
An excellent contest entry.
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Very free flowing, well chosen words present this broken heart.
The visual art selection has well complimented your twenty words.
An excellent contest entry.
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2020
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Thank you, my friend for hunting that poem down.
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You're welcome Mike.
Blessings as well!
Rich
Comment from dragonpoet
What a sad and clear poem about heartbreak. It is very metaphoric and emotional. I like the background color because it is the color of the heart and the blood it is pumping. In time that emptiness will be filled again.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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What a sad and clear poem about heartbreak. It is very metaphoric and emotional. I like the background color because it is the color of the heart and the blood it is pumping. In time that emptiness will be filled again.
Congratulations on placing third in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy,
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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You are most kindly welcome, Mike. Same to you.
Joan
Comment from Debbie Perry
Indeed a glass heart is very fragile, it breaks with little or no pressure.
It's hard picking up the shards of a broken heart.
Starting over requires bravery and forgiveness when your world is totally destroyed.
Congratulations on your win.
Very well done indeed it is.
Enjoyed,
Debbie Perry
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Indeed a glass heart is very fragile, it breaks with little or no pressure.
It's hard picking up the shards of a broken heart.
Starting over requires bravery and forgiveness when your world is totally destroyed.
Congratulations on your win.
Very well done indeed it is.
Enjoyed,
Debbie Perry
Comment Written 01-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2020
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Many thanks, for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
There is some sadness in these words as our hearts can only take so much strain before they break and become inconsolable, words from the heart here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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There is some sadness in these words as our hearts can only take so much strain before they break and become inconsolable, words from the heart here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
There is nothing as sad as a failed love. We nurture our broken heart day after day. But, you know, suddenly you will take notice of how great the world around you is and be grateful to be still alive.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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There is nothing as sad as a failed love. We nurture our broken heart day after day. But, you know, suddenly you will take notice of how great the world around you is and be grateful to be still alive.
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Mike: I like the red glass heart. Sorry she broke your heart or
maybe, she died. Treasure the good times and enjoy every day.
You can dream again. flylikeaneagle Stay well
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Mike: I like the red glass heart. Sorry she broke your heart or
maybe, she died. Treasure the good times and enjoy every day.
You can dream again. flylikeaneagle Stay well
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all twenty words in this vividly descriptive
piece about the devastation of heartbreak. As you say, failed relationships can make us feel like a failure.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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You have made excellent use of all twenty words in this vividly descriptive
piece about the devastation of heartbreak. As you say, failed relationships can make us feel like a failure.
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your lines are formatted in a great way. I like the shattered/battered rhyme, the image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words, and the story told, while poignant, flow well. Good job with the exact word count, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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I enjoyed reading your contest entry. Your lines are formatted in a great way. I like the shattered/battered rhyme, the image is a great pairing with your well-chosen words, and the story told, while poignant, flow well. Good job with the exact word count, too. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 28-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2020
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Many thanks for your kind words!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike