Joined at the Hip
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "The Ol' Wood Bridge"Bill and Cathy's hearts beat as one!
16 total reviews
Comment from Tootie
Hello Co-Author! I love the flirting between Billy and Cathy in this chapter. Only two chest hairs, huh? :))) Oh, dear, a wild boar is in their path! We shouldn't have flirted so much because wild animals come out after dusk! I sure do hope Grandpa is right about wild animals being afraid of fire and water. We will see . . . It's so much fun writing with you and letting our imaginations run free. 1-2-3, I bet you can't catch me! Speaking of 3, as you know, Chapter 3 is almost written and coming soon. HURRAH! You are an AWESOME writer and, as I've said before, I am HONORED to write by your side! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Tons & Tons of Love,
Cathy
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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Hello Co-Author! I love the flirting between Billy and Cathy in this chapter. Only two chest hairs, huh? :))) Oh, dear, a wild boar is in their path! We shouldn't have flirted so much because wild animals come out after dusk! I sure do hope Grandpa is right about wild animals being afraid of fire and water. We will see . . . It's so much fun writing with you and letting our imaginations run free. 1-2-3, I bet you can't catch me! Speaking of 3, as you know, Chapter 3 is almost written and coming soon. HURRAH! You are an AWESOME writer and, as I've said before, I am HONORED to write by your side! God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration and Tons & Tons of Love,
Cathy
Comment Written 15-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2020
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A "SALUTE," Co-Author! Quite an "Astonishing" review. Too often, when sitting at your side, I underestimate the "Magnificent talent and flare" God gave you for writing. Many times I have watched you smile, heard you say kind words, offer a listening ear, then give me your honest thoughts on the events of our stories. May I say, "It is an honor having an awesome writer (YOU) to share your inkwell with me." C'mon, it's time that I stop lollygagging around, 'cause we have 5 novels to finish writing. So, let's climb on our horses, yell "Getty-up," and go write 'em! Respectfully with Admiration and a Train load of Love, Bill
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Such sweet words! Thank you! Again, the HONOR is all mine to have the privilege of writing by your side. I hope some of your great talent rubs off on me 'cause I think you're the BEST! God Bless. A "SALUTE!" XOX
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Right back at ya, Co-Author; yet, you're "THE BEST" . . . and "BEAUTIFUL TOO!" God Bless. A "DOUBLE SALUTE!" XOX
Comment from Bluesatinbutterfly
Such a great story and I particularly liked the fact that although I'm Scottish I could see the accent and it was as if I could hear it leaping from the page and straight into my hears. Very well done.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Such a great story and I particularly liked the fact that although I'm Scottish I could see the accent and it was as if I could hear it leaping from the page and straight into my hears. Very well done.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A "Salute," our friend! Happy St. Pattie's Day, and welcome to FanStory. It is an honor meeting you. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. We're glad you enjoyed chapter 2 and hope you will follow along with future chapters. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Rattlesnakes and rabid boars--oh my! Very believable snappy dialog and good descriptions. Cute bit about hearts beating as one (normally trite) then comes the clever punchline about sharing clothes. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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Rattlesnakes and rabid boars--oh my! Very believable snappy dialog and good descriptions. Cute bit about hearts beating as one (normally trite) then comes the clever punchline about sharing clothes. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 17-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," LIZ! Happy St. Patrick's Day, our dear friend. Great hearing from you again. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read Chapter 2 of "Joined at the Hip." It is an honor having an "Awesome" writer such as yourself to express admiration for our work. As always, best wishes for a great week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What I like about this book is the language is taking you into that time. I feel like reading Tom Sawyer all over again. So glad that Billy dodged the bullet, Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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What I like about this book is the language is taking you into that time. I feel like reading Tom Sawyer all over again. So glad that Billy dodged the bullet, Thank you for sharing and good luck with your next chapter.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Iza! Great hearing from you. Thanks for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Tom Sawyer? Ha, ha! Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Another great chapter to read. I noticed you were from Gatlinburg, TN. We visited there twice and so I really enjoy your Smokey Mountain Background/Southern drawl.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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Another great chapter to read. I noticed you were from Gatlinburg, TN. We visited there twice and so I really enjoy your Smokey Mountain Background/Southern drawl.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Rosemary! Thank you for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Born and raided in Pigeon Forge, TN. Best wishes for an awesome week ahead and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This did not come into my PM box. I was checking to see how my post was doing and found it. I'm glad I did. I don't understand why I only get some of things you post. I enjoyed reading, as usual. LOL Last week a 10 year old boy killed a 7 foot long wild boar that weighted 438 pounds here in this area of Texas.
""Shucks! I'll promise you now; yet, my fingers will be crossed behind my back!" (very minor, but one too many beginning quotation marks)
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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This did not come into my PM box. I was checking to see how my post was doing and found it. I'm glad I did. I don't understand why I only get some of things you post. I enjoyed reading, as usual. LOL Last week a 10 year old boy killed a 7 foot long wild boar that weighted 438 pounds here in this area of Texas.
""Shucks! I'll promise you now; yet, my fingers will be crossed behind my back!" (very minor, but one too many beginning quotation marks)
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Barbara!
Thank you for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for "Joined at the Hip" is an honor. Best wishes and God Bless.
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Ulla
As usual, a lot happens and rapidly after each other. First a rattle snake and now the wild boar. I have to say that where I live the wild boar is a plaque and cause a lot of damage, but they hardly ever attack, unless you walk out after dark A pretty foolish thing to do in the mountains.
Just found one thing: Quickly jumping from bed =Quickly jumping from the bed. All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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As usual, a lot happens and rapidly after each other. First a rattle snake and now the wild boar. I have to say that where I live the wild boar is a plaque and cause a lot of damage, but they hardly ever attack, unless you walk out after dark A pretty foolish thing to do in the mountains.
Just found one thing: Quickly jumping from bed =Quickly jumping from the bed. All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Ulla!
Thank you for the excellent review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. Having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for "Joined at the Hip" is an honor. Best wishes and God Bless.
Cathy and Bill
Comment from Shirley McLain
An excellent chapter. Full of anxiety over the rattlesnake and then the wild hog. I'm always ready to read more. I didn't find any errors, just your usual quality. Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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An excellent chapter. Full of anxiety over the rattlesnake and then the wild hog. I'm always ready to read more. I didn't find any errors, just your usual quality. Shirley
Comment Written 15-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," Shirley!
Thank you for the "Exceptional Review," kind words and taking the time to read our work. Having an awesome writer such as yourself to express admiration for "Joined at the Hip" is an honor. Best wishes and God Bless.
Cathy and Bill
Comment from RShipp
"Goody, goody, my friend! I'll always keep my window open enough so you can fly in!" I called. ... My favorite line.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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"Goody, goody, my friend! I'll always keep my window open enough so you can fly in!" I called. ... My favorite line.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," our friend!
Thanks for the review, kind words, and taking the time to read "The Ol' Wood Bridge." Having an "Awesome Writer," such as yourself to express admiration for our work, and follow along is an honor. For your information, since I left the Smoky Mountains I haven't seen the first hoot owl. So, I just close my window, eat the snakes, then chase 'em down with Moonshine Whiskey. Do you believe this? I didn't figure you would. Best wishes for a great weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration,
Cathy and Bill.
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moonshine might attract more rattlesnakes than it repels ,,,
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Oh, that's okay, 'cause it's more food for the tummy--yummy, yummy!!!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Bill & Cathy,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
""Oh, Lord! As you know, I don't beg much; yet, I'm begging now. Please send down a miracle to save my little man. Are you listening, Jesus?"
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"...and I could smell the sweet fragrance of Cathy's body--yummy, yummy!"
Interesting Indeed!
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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Hello Bill & Cathy,
Lovely piece of Romance Fiction having impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicting its theme.
These lines are particularly noteworthy:
""Oh, Lord! As you know, I don't beg much; yet, I'm begging now. Please send down a miracle to save my little man. Are you listening, Jesus?"
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"...and I could smell the sweet fragrance of Cathy's body--yummy, yummy!"
Interesting Indeed!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2020
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A "SALUTE," RP!
It's great hearing from you, 'cause Cathy and I thought we had been deserted. What an honor! Thanks for the "Exceptional Review, Kind Words, and taking the time to read our work." Your thoughts matter to us and we appreciate your sharing them. Having an "Awesome Writer" such as yourself express admiration for our work is deserving of a 2nd "SALUTE!" Best wishes for an "ASTONISHING WEEKEND AND GOD BLESS.!" Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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Cathy & Bill, Most Welcome!
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Thanks for your words which have put before me a TARGET that I'll try my best to achieve.
With best wishes,
~ RP