Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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31 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've done well with this acrostic form of Vessel of your .....turning it into a spiritual prayer. With some rhyme and alliteration, your words blend well.
cheers.
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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You've done well with this acrostic form of Vessel of your .....turning it into a spiritual prayer. With some rhyme and alliteration, your words blend well.
cheers.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 05-Mar-2020
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Pearl thank you for your review and comments.
Comment from Minglement
What a beautiful spiritual write in acrostic poem form. It would have been a great entry for the acrostic poem contest. Very touching with beautiful presentation. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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What a beautiful spiritual write in acrostic poem form. It would have been a great entry for the acrostic poem contest. Very touching with beautiful presentation. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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MInglement, thank so very much!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a lovely uplifting poem done in the format. I possibly would have given it six stars if your syllable count of six syllables per line was correct. This may be quite easy to correct.
I find it so important to be right with the I Am.
Patricia
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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This is a lovely uplifting poem done in the format. I possibly would have given it six stars if your syllable count of six syllables per line was correct. This may be quite easy to correct.
I find it so important to be right with the I Am.
Patricia
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Patricia, thank you. I did, however, just now with your message double check with syllable counter and I am sixes across all stanzas.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Vessel of Your Prayer", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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"Vessel of Your Prayer", is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is definitely a six.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2020
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Duchess you have made me smile with great gratitude with your six star review, thank you!
Comment from Boogienights
This is a fantastic acrostic. My first thought was...I wish I could do that. My second was that I loved the content of your poem and its inherent truth. I have prayed before not knowing if I were heard, but it always made me feel better. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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This is a fantastic acrostic. My first thought was...I wish I could do that. My second was that I loved the content of your poem and its inherent truth. I have prayed before not knowing if I were heard, but it always made me feel better. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Boogienights, thank you and yes, I believe that you can do it. Personally I have come to believe that every prayer from our heart is heard in his ears and while we not seem to know are heard, I believe that simply putting the prayers out to the universe that we know in our deepest souls that the Divine is working.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Another brilliant example of your ability to become master over complex poetic forms, and not only excel in the format but also in the power your words convey. Wonderful... ...ec
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Another brilliant example of your ability to become master over complex poetic forms, and not only excel in the format but also in the power your words convey. Wonderful... ...ec
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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EC thank your for taking the time to review and comment on my poem, I am appreciative of your validation.
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You're welcome... ...ec
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and
formatting of your acrostic, JLR.
-The notes are appreciated.
-You have used the form very well.
-Each example flows smoothly
from one to the next.
-Effective use of rhyme
in the final section,
and good concluding lines.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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-Nice image and
formatting of your acrostic, JLR.
-The notes are appreciated.
-You have used the form very well.
-Each example flows smoothly
from one to the next.
-Effective use of rhyme
in the final section,
and good concluding lines.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Pam, Thank your for taking the time to review and comment on my poem, I am appreciative of your validation.
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You are very welcome, JLR.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written vessel acrostic poem. We are the vessel of our soul and everywhere we go we expose our soul to whatever we surround ourselves where we are hanging out.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A very well-written vessel acrostic poem. We are the vessel of our soul and everywhere we go we expose our soul to whatever we surround ourselves where we are hanging out.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Sandra, I am so grateful for your review and comments.
Comment from Mastery
A fabulous presentation from top to bottom, Jim. Very inspiring poetry here. I liked these lines in particular:
"Provided to all
Realizing the call"
(But many do not)
Bless you my friend. :) Bob
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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A fabulous presentation from top to bottom, Jim. Very inspiring poetry here. I liked these lines in particular:
"Provided to all
Realizing the call"
(But many do not)
Bless you my friend. :) Bob
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Bob, my dear friend happy Sunday! I'm so grateiful for your six-star validation, Jim
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: ) Bob
Comment from Aussie
Whatever you choose to send out will return to you threefold. Be it good or bad. This is a wonderful poem, where are these hands in America? Hands are so tactile and I'm sure His hands were so soft and healing when He touched the sick and lame. A great poem, most enjoyable. Thanks for telling us about Spirit's Vessel. Well done friend.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Whatever you choose to send out will return to you threefold. Be it good or bad. This is a wonderful poem, where are these hands in America? Hands are so tactile and I'm sure His hands were so soft and healing when He touched the sick and lame. A great poem, most enjoyable. Thanks for telling us about Spirit's Vessel. Well done friend.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Aussie, thank you for the comments and the unexpected six-star review. I delight that you enjoyed this poetic style, as I did.
