Eric's Epic Adventures Bk 4
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "First Contact"Eric And The Lost City of Atlantis
36 total reviews
Comment from juliaSjames
You surprised me, Sandra. I wasn't expecting the denizens of Atlantis to be sea creatures. Well, maybe they aren't. Maybe these are Atlantean "pets".
For the rest it's a delightful chapter. Eric is a likeable boy, outgoing and brave.
Waiting for more. :-))
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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You surprised me, Sandra. I wasn't expecting the denizens of Atlantis to be sea creatures. Well, maybe they aren't. Maybe these are Atlantean "pets".
For the rest it's a delightful chapter. Eric is a likeable boy, outgoing and brave.
Waiting for more. :-))
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 29-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Thank you so much for reading this part after the promotion finished, Julia. I'm glad you enjoyed it. What is going on will become clearer as the we go forward. I like your idea! lol. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from wordsfromsue
Alright, I'm keeping my eyes open for any Jason Momoa sightings! Hubba hubba... back to the story.... exciting stuff. :-) I look forward to learning more about the creatures Eric is interacting with.
This sounds like a promising adventure and I'm already hooked. :-)
One possible correction:
A stunning waterfall could be seen frothing and churning as it hit the river below, only to be caught up and dragged away by the current. Eric had never seen water as clear and blue as this one. (I'm not sure 'one' sounds right. Possibly omit 'one'.)
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Alright, I'm keeping my eyes open for any Jason Momoa sightings! Hubba hubba... back to the story.... exciting stuff. :-) I look forward to learning more about the creatures Eric is interacting with.
This sounds like a promising adventure and I'm already hooked. :-)
One possible correction:
A stunning waterfall could be seen frothing and churning as it hit the river below, only to be caught up and dragged away by the current. Eric had never seen water as clear and blue as this one. (I'm not sure 'one' sounds right. Possibly omit 'one'.)
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 29-Feb-2020
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Oh, how I wish I could get Jason to play in my upcoming movie of Eric and the Atlanteans. He'd be perfect for the part. I'll send him a message. I'd obviously have to personally interview him, check out his muscles etc! lol. Thank you so much, Sue, for your lovely comments, and for pointing out that. You're right, (of course) and I've taken the 'one' out. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xx
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
A fun and exciting new adventure for Eric and Herbie. Atlantis has always been a place of curiosity and mystery. A great platform for the new adventure. Didn't see any errors. Well done as always. I've been ill so haven't been on too much. Rox
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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A fun and exciting new adventure for Eric and Herbie. Atlantis has always been a place of curiosity and mystery. A great platform for the new adventure. Didn't see any errors. Well done as always. I've been ill so haven't been on too much. Rox
Comment Written 28-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2020
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I'm sorry to hear you've been ill, Rox, how are you feeling now? It's so nice of you to drop in on the start of my new adventure for Eric. I can get away with lots of imaginative stuff in Atlantis, as no one can dispute it! lol. Thank you, my friend, and take care of yourself! Big hugs. Sandra xxxx
Comment from tfawcus
Another fine instalment in this new adventure. I liked your description of the waterfall at the beginning.
The alien creatures are intriguing. Just enough detail to allow your readers to build their own picture in their minds. It sounds as though they might be friendly enough, but those strange knives they had in their belts are a bit of a worry. It sounds as though the sensible thing to do is to keep smiling!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Another fine instalment in this new adventure. I liked your description of the waterfall at the beginning.
The alien creatures are intriguing. Just enough detail to allow your readers to build their own picture in their minds. It sounds as though they might be friendly enough, but those strange knives they had in their belts are a bit of a worry. It sounds as though the sensible thing to do is to keep smiling!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, Tony. I'm so pleased you liked my description of the waterfall. Eric is in for a huge surprise when he goes inside. It was so nice of you to take the time to read and review this part, especially knowing how busy you are. I really appreciate it. Big hugs, my friend. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
Well written and smooth reading. I got to the end before I knew it. Sure want to know what happens. Your writing style is engaging and professional.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Well written and smooth reading. I got to the end before I knew it. Sure want to know what happens. Your writing style is engaging and professional.
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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What a lovely review, thank you so much, Thaities, it means so much to me to know you enjoyed this part. Sending you a big hug. :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from alexisleech
Fabulous! You've done it again, Sandra. This might be a book for your grandson's age group, but you've got me hooked. With so many possibilities, my head is reeling. Knowing you, it will be like Dr Who - for every age group, and everyone who has a vivid imagination - Well done!
Alexis xxx
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Fabulous! You've done it again, Sandra. This might be a book for your grandson's age group, but you've got me hooked. With so many possibilities, my head is reeling. Knowing you, it will be like Dr Who - for every age group, and everyone who has a vivid imagination - Well done!
Alexis xxx
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you so very much for the lovely six stars, and for the fabulous review, my dear friend. What a lovely review you've given me, I really appreciate you, my friend. Big hugs! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from Pam (respa)
-A good image and very good chapter, Sandra.
-Effective description of Atlantis as Eric and
Herbie first see it, as well as the inhabitants.
-I also like the inclusion of Eric's reference to
The Garden of Eden, and that you keep us
reminded of the paper he has to write, too.
-You show how Eric and Herbie proceed very
cautiously since they know nothing
of their surroundings or how the people would react.
-It will be interesting to learn more about them,
and the houses they live in. Good description of those, too.
-Then we are left to wonder about this domed building.
-A lot seems to go on in Atlantis!
-Well done!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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-A good image and very good chapter, Sandra.
-Effective description of Atlantis as Eric and
Herbie first see it, as well as the inhabitants.
-I also like the inclusion of Eric's reference to
The Garden of Eden, and that you keep us
reminded of the paper he has to write, too.
-You show how Eric and Herbie proceed very
cautiously since they know nothing
of their surroundings or how the people would react.
-It will be interesting to learn more about them,
and the houses they live in. Good description of those, too.
-Then we are left to wonder about this domed building.
-A lot seems to go on in Atlantis!
-Well done!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Pam, and for all the shiny stars. I'm so pleased you liked my descriptions of the houses and the image I've chosen for Eric's first glimpse of Atlantis. Now to :see what is inside the dome! :)) Big hugs, my dear friend. :)) Sandra xxx
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You are very welcome and deserving of the stars and review, Sandra. I wonder what will be inside that dome?!
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Hmm, I can't wait for Eric to go inside and let us know! Lol. :)
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It does make one wonder what he will find there!
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Sandramitchell,
What a FANTASTIC piece of General Fiction this is!
It has impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, highly captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicts the theme.
The most remarkable part is 'Presentation of Eric as a Character, and A brief synopsis.'
Interesting INDEED, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next Part.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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Hello Sandramitchell,
What a FANTASTIC piece of General Fiction this is!
It has impressive phraseology, smooth, spontaneous, highly captivating flow throughout from the beginning to the end, and beautifully depicts the theme.
The most remarkable part is 'Presentation of Eric as a Character, and A brief synopsis.'
Interesting INDEED, and I'm eagerly waiting for the next Part.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2020
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What a wonderful review to wake up to this morning! Your words have put the biggest smile on my face and then you top it off with the beautiful array of all those stars. Thank you so very much! You've set me off for the day! Thank you. Sending you a big hug. :)) Sandra xxx
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Sandra, Most Welcome!
You really deserve it.
With best wishes,
~ RP
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Sandra, Most Welcome!
You really deserve it.
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Soooo.... we're in Atlantis now, eh? Well, at least you get free 'fantastical' reign on this on, my lady: no history or other such facts to slow you down - LOL! ;) A great beginning to the latest saga -- keep 'em coming!! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Soooo.... we're in Atlantis now, eh? Well, at least you get free 'fantastical' reign on this on, my lady: no history or other such facts to slow you down - LOL! ;) A great beginning to the latest saga -- keep 'em coming!! ;) Thanx for sharing! :) Yvette
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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That's the good thing about it, no one knows if it even existed. Fortunately, my trio will find out the truth, you can rely on them. :)) lol. Thank you my dear friend, I'm so pleased you are coming along again. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
Comment from Marilyn Lou Berry
I've so enjoyed this post's adventure and getting to know Eric, Herbie, and Gizmo. In fact, I can't wait for the next installment; you left the reading hanging off a mysterious cliff. What will those people do? Is our trio safe?
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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I've so enjoyed this post's adventure and getting to know Eric, Herbie, and Gizmo. In fact, I can't wait for the next installment; you left the reading hanging off a mysterious cliff. What will those people do? Is our trio safe?
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Aw, what a lovely review, Marilyn Lou, thank you so much! I really appreciated this encouraging review. Thank you! :)) Sandra xxx