Mousse
Fuzzy vision12 total reviews
Comment from Alchera
I loved the narrative storyline throughout it whole structured dialogued and prose presentation. I also laughed aloud which doesn't happen very often. Perfectly penned and joyfully read. Thank you for sharing this well-deserved victory. Congratulations and cheers again, my friend!Blessings from Italy. Tony
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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I loved the narrative storyline throughout it whole structured dialogued and prose presentation. I also laughed aloud which doesn't happen very often. Perfectly penned and joyfully read. Thank you for sharing this well-deserved victory. Congratulations and cheers again, my friend!Blessings from Italy. Tony
Comment Written 26-Apr-2020
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2020
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Buongiorno Tony,
I hope you are doing well.
Thank you for the encouraging review and kind comment about the writing. I enjoyed writing this one.
Debi
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You are always welcomed and blessings. Tony
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You are always welcomed and blessings. Tony
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. A fun story and I'm glad that the mysterious note led to a party after all covering all the possible mooses that could have been implied. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Lol. A fun story and I'm glad that the mysterious note led to a party after all covering all the possible mooses that could have been implied. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging comments and best wishes.
Comment from Drew Delaney
Nice writing here! I thought the end was so cute. Your writing is clear and concise. It also ends with a bit of humour. What's not to like? Best wished in the contest.
Drew
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Nice writing here! I thought the end was so cute. Your writing is clear and concise. It also ends with a bit of humour. What's not to like? Best wished in the contest.
Drew
Comment Written 24-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2020
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Thank you, Drew. I appreciate the encourage comments and good luck wishes.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 20/20 Vision Story contest.
This short story tells of trying to read a smudged note and getting it wrong. This is a funny story.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the 20/20 Vision Story contest.
This short story tells of trying to read a smudged note and getting it wrong. This is a funny story.
Well done and I wish you luck with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 23-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 23-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments and the good luck wishes.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
This is an excellent story and I found myself smiling and nodding a lot as I read. I make a mean mousse too, so I'm told, but would be useless if asked for hair mousse as I have none!
Anyways, it's a great story; good luck in the votes!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This is an excellent story and I found myself smiling and nodding a lot as I read. I make a mean mousse too, so I'm told, but would be useless if asked for hair mousse as I have none!
Anyways, it's a great story; good luck in the votes!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the encouraging comments and the good luck wishes. I am glad your enjoyed the story.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute story. I can see how that could happen. I've often tried to read water soaked material. It is easy to make out the letters. Who would have thought there would be some many different Mousse definitions. I'm glad some school kids are still trying to write in script. I hate to think it's a loss art.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This is a cute story. I can see how that could happen. I've often tried to read water soaked material. It is easy to make out the letters. Who would have thought there would be some many different Mousse definitions. I'm glad some school kids are still trying to write in script. I hate to think it's a loss art.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind words and encouragement.
Comment from Marjon van Bruggen
In a way, it is a 20-20 vision story, and in that way, a very funny and entertaining one too. I smiled at the terrible mix-up of all the mousses and mooses, and wished I could have been present at the table when they ate the chocolate mousse. I love mousse, although it is not the very best
for my all too round figure!
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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In a way, it is a 20-20 vision story, and in that way, a very funny and entertaining one too. I smiled at the terrible mix-up of all the mousses and mooses, and wished I could have been present at the table when they ate the chocolate mousse. I love mousse, although it is not the very best
for my all too round figure!
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments and good wishes. I am glad you enjoyed the story. I am tempted to make some chocolate mousse. I haven't had any in a while.
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You are welcome. And I THINK you are winning!
Comment from damommy
This was so enjoyable to read. I like how she got things mixed up and ended with an invitation for dinner. Just goes to show how things can turn out. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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This was so enjoyable to read. I like how she got things mixed up and ended with an invitation for dinner. Just goes to show how things can turn out. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments and good luck wishes. I am glad to hear you enjoyed reading this poem.
Comment from Gideon300
A charming story of miscommunication. It is still a wonderful plot device and myself and an army of others still love it when it is well done. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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A charming story of miscommunication. It is still a wonderful plot device and myself and an army of others still love it when it is well done. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments and good luck wishes. I appreciate the comment on the plot device. I am happy you enjoyed the story.
Comment from May 1
Ah, I know the feeling. Sometimes it feels like the bags cutting into my flesh might draw blood. Haha, yeah I don't think a mouse is what they need. Haha, honestly I would have thought chocolate mousse was what people needed not, hair mousse would have never occurred to me. Haha, I love the ending.
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Ah, I know the feeling. Sometimes it feels like the bags cutting into my flesh might draw blood. Haha, yeah I don't think a mouse is what they need. Haha, honestly I would have thought chocolate mousse was what people needed not, hair mousse would have never occurred to me. Haha, I love the ending.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2020
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Thank you for the kind comments. I am happy you enjoyed the story.
