Drops of Tenderness
Three Line Poem Entry20 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats again on your prize June--glad I caught up to this delightful poem--lovely and elegant imagery==raindrops on new petals == alliteration ==sWeet Words Whispered. Cheers. LIZ
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Congrats again on your prize June--glad I caught up to this delightful poem--lovely and elegant imagery==raindrops on new petals == alliteration ==sWeet Words Whispered. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you for your kind words!
Comment from dragonpoet
June,
This succinctly states the feeling of a person who had a bad beginning find the kind of love that can heal the pain and open the heart for real love.
Good metaphor. Well chosen artwork.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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June,
This succinctly states the feeling of a person who had a bad beginning find the kind of love that can heal the pain and open the heart for real love.
Good metaphor. Well chosen artwork.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2020
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Thank you so much for your encouraging words!
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You are most kindly welcome, June.
Joan
Comment from Raul1
This is Beautiful writing and awesome piece of poetry. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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This is Beautiful writing and awesome piece of poetry. I have enjoyed reading it. Excellent work! No grammatical errors. Thanks for sharing! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2020
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Thank you for your supportive review!
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You're welcome, my friend! :)
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow.... got part of the way into it and felt as though I should be whispering, June -- almost like the red is too 'harsh' for the words... :) :) :) Just beautiful and so gentle yet filled with, perhaps, a new love welcome after much time without...? :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Wow.... got part of the way into it and felt as though I should be whispering, June -- almost like the red is too 'harsh' for the words... :) :) :) Just beautiful and so gentle yet filled with, perhaps, a new love welcome after much time without...? :) Thanx for sharing and best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this piece. Always happy to hear your thoughts. Thank you for dropping by! I appreciate it.
Comment from Sally Law
Words of love are so important and must be sincere. They are life giving to the love. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the 3 line poetry contest.
Sally xo
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Words of love are so important and must be sincere. They are life giving to the love. Sending you my best today as always, and best wishes for the 3 line poetry contest.
Sally xo
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece! I appreciate your sharing your insights.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image
and presentation, June.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-Effective alliteration and
comparison with words and raindrops.
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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-Nice image
and presentation, June.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-Effective alliteration and
comparison with words and raindrops.
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing your insightful comments. I do appreciate it.
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You are very welcome, June. Hope you are doing well.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written three line poem about sweet words whispered landing like raindrops on petals in our ears that will open and caress our hearts.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A very well-written three line poem about sweet words whispered landing like raindrops on petals in our ears that will open and caress our hearts.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts! It is appreciated.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, romantic poem. Personification and metaphor are vivid enhancements to the message conveyed.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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You have made excellent use of all of your syllables in this lovely, romantic poem. Personification and metaphor are vivid enhancements to the message conveyed.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts! It is appreciated.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Hello there, June, wow, this is a stunning 3 line poem. It's so sweet and pretty, very well-chosen words for this contest. Good luck! Nicely done!
~Kerry
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hello there, June, wow, this is a stunning 3 line poem. It's so sweet and pretty, very well-chosen words for this contest. Good luck! Nicely done!
~Kerry
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts! It is appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Those raindrops certainly perk up the flowers, just like sweet words when whispered tenderly, I liked your metaphor here June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Those raindrops certainly perk up the flowers, just like sweet words when whispered tenderly, I liked your metaphor here June, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your thoughts! It is appreciated.
