Faith healing (dialogue only )
Should have gone to the pub instead17 total reviews
Comment from A. Louise Robertson
A well-written piece and great use of the sixty word maximum. Your sense of humor was appreciated! Thank you for sharing this story.
Congratulation's on your well deserved win.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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A well-written piece and great use of the sixty word maximum. Your sense of humor was appreciated! Thank you for sharing this story.
Congratulation's on your well deserved win.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Stephanie Paige
I enjoyed reading this short story. The humorous twist at the end made me laugh. You did a great job with the sixty word limit. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading this short story. The humorous twist at the end made me laugh. You did a great job with the sixty word limit. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Many thanks. Jen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This made me smile, I loved the clever irony and you hit the spot for me here, a clever story and faithful words say it all, much enjoyed, this is a winner, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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This made me smile, I loved the clever irony and you hit the spot for me here, a clever story and faithful words say it all, much enjoyed, this is a winner, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks Dolly. X
Comment from Minglement
Now that's a good flash fiction. Wish I had a six to award this great contest entry. Very nicely done with a nice set up - then, wham! I loved the dialogue only approach! I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Now that's a good flash fiction. Wish I had a six to award this great contest entry. Very nicely done with a nice set up - then, wham! I loved the dialogue only approach! I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Many thanks. So glad you like it. X
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
The thought you put into this is obvious. You came up with a real winner.
What with the picture and the wheelchair statement, it is a well composed presentation.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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The thought you put into this is obvious. You came up with a real winner.
What with the picture and the wheelchair statement, it is a well composed presentation.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Many thanks
Comment from Louise Michelle
Hahaha - how clever is this! You did a terrific job with this writing challenge. There were no wasted words and each paragraph packed a punch. The ending is perfect! Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Hahaha - how clever is this! You did a terrific job with this writing challenge. There were no wasted words and each paragraph packed a punch. The ending is perfect! Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Thanks. I'm so glad you like it.
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Hahaha this is too funny!! And has two separate and opposite interpretations! One where the faith session actually worked a miracle and the man walked out and the other where the session was so bad that even the handicapped guy stood up to walk out of there!
Brilliant story told in just 60 words or fewer! You should be really proud of this one and I really liked it too! Definitely voting for this one! Best wishes for the rest of the contest as well! Have a good day :-)
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hahaha this is too funny!! And has two separate and opposite interpretations! One where the faith session actually worked a miracle and the man walked out and the other where the session was so bad that even the handicapped guy stood up to walk out of there!
Brilliant story told in just 60 words or fewer! You should be really proud of this one and I really liked it too! Definitely voting for this one! Best wishes for the rest of the contest as well! Have a good day :-)
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanks a lot for your great review and vote. I really appreciate it.
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Just voted! Hope you win :-)
Comment from LisaMay
This is funny - I hope the participants enjoyed a good laugh at the pub afterwards, then they could use the wheelchair to carry more drinks home to continue the celebration. I hope they invited the faith healer, he might not have been such a failure after all.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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This is funny - I hope the participants enjoyed a good laugh at the pub afterwards, then they could use the wheelchair to carry more drinks home to continue the celebration. I hope they invited the faith healer, he might not have been such a failure after all.
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Thanks a lot LisaMay for your fun review.
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like this and the message conveyed in it. I guess that you're using some very clever wording here. If the man in a wheelchair got up and walked out, something was happening good there. I enjoyed reading this inspirational, well thought out and well written work. Well done!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I like this and the message conveyed in it. I guess that you're using some very clever wording here. If the man in a wheelchair got up and walked out, something was happening good there. I enjoyed reading this inspirational, well thought out and well written work. Well done!
Comment Written 12-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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So glad you like it Jeffrey. Thanks a lot for the great review.
Comment from BethShelby
This is really funny. If you made up this joke you are clever. If you repeating one you've heard before it still made me laugh out loud and you deserve some credit of smooth dialogue.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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This is really funny. If you made up this joke you are clever. If you repeating one you've heard before it still made me laugh out loud and you deserve some credit of smooth dialogue.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2020
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So glad you like it. Thanks.
