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In Vase of Blue

Nonet: Memory's Essence

68 total reviews 
Comment from evesayshi
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In my opinion, an emotionally rendered sentiment in tribute to one's beloved who has ventured beyond, leaving only memories and tears in an unforgettable essence - in perfect adherence to the promp's definition. Best wishes in the contest...

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 19-Feb-2020
    Hello Eve,
    So pleased you enjoyed!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by evesayshi on 23-Feb-2020
    You are so welcome, Diane, such a beautiful poem and written in such heartfelt grace. Thank you for sharing...Eve
Comment from Gloria ....
Exceptional
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This is such a delicate nonet written perfectly to form. Even without the amended artwork, your words breathe life into this fine tribute in honour of your mother.

Love everything about this, including the photograph.

I wish you much luck with the contest committee with this gem. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Gloria,
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
    My mother was such a dynamic and positive force in my life. Such a creative individual born far "before her time." Everything I know about flowers, gardening, and beauty I learned from her...
    She would be 97 on February 27th. Her favorite flowers were daffodils, and every February, when daffodils begin to appear in our grocery stores, I purchase two bunches weekly. Seven to a bunch. I carefully bring them home and arrange them in a blue vase she gave me years ago. And I remember...

    Thank you again, friend.
    diane
Comment from rspoet
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Hello Diane,
This is a wonderful poem in honor of your mother.
The nonet flows nicely down to the last word.
My mother was born in 1921 and also passed away in the 2007,
so they had similar lives.
Perfect picture to match your words.
Best wishes to you
Robert

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Robert,
    Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review.
    My mother was such a dynamic and positive force in my life; she is never more than a thought away...

    Thank you again!
    diane
Comment from Minglement
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This lovely tribute to your mom is as perfect as it gets. Perfect presentation of a beautiful poem. Great form and a smooth. melodic read. I wish you luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Minglement!
    I am honored by your exceptional rating and complimentary review.
    My mother was such a dynamic force of inspiration in my life; I miss her every day!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by Minglement on 18-Feb-2020
    You are most welcome :) I know what you mean :) Take care, Marcia
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Thank you, Marcia!

    diane
reply by Minglement on 18-Feb-2020
    :)
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
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A brilliant loving tribute to your mom. All one's senses blend to bring the memory of a loved one back. Imaging the days of sunshine and flowers that were spent together brings peace and comfort to a saddened heart. Good luck with your tribute poem... ...ec

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Elaine!
    So pleased my words resonated with you!
    Thank you!
    diane
reply by Elaine Chiodi on 19-Feb-2020
    they surely did. I remember Grandma every lilac season... ...ec
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is a very lovely little Nonet poem and an excellent contest entry. It's a touching tribute to your late mother and it makes me think of my own mother.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Susan!
    Thank you!

    diane
Comment from Bichon
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Such a beautiful and stunning poem. I know your mother would love it. I also like how the poem itself combines sad tones with brighter ones, like the golden sunshine.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Chloe!

    So pleased you enjoyed!

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Exceptional
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What a delightful and uplifting poem. It is very lovely and speaks towards Spring, which I so eagerly await. The presentation is a great touch, also. It is elegant, indeed. Well done. Bruce.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Bruce!
    Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
    I, too, am eagerly awaiting spring...as I sit snowbound here in northern Michigan = a wicked storm all day today!
    So pleased my words resonated with you!

    Thank you!
    diane
Comment from Poetofheart2013
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A very beautiful and graceful poem.
I could the flowers as I read it .
It really is so full of life and it made
me feel as I read it.
Keep up the good work.


 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Poetofheart!
    So pleased you enjoyed!

    Thank you!
    diane
reply by Poetofheart2013 on 18-Feb-2020
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

A very touching tribute to your mother. Your poetry is so sentimental. I love to read the storylines. You sure can tell you're a teacher in spirit. Your students must love to be in your class.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2020


reply by the author on 18-Feb-2020
    Hello Rosemary!
    Thank you for your exceptional rating and complimentary review!
    So pleased my words resonated with you!

    Thankyou!
    diane