Comment from Dancemom

Exceptional

This is an excellent entry for the 242 poetry contest. Your syllable count is correct. It is amazing that you told such a powerful description of dissociative identity disorder in eight syllables. Fantastic job and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020

Thanks again! The mind is such a fragile thing. So many face some type of mental disturbance from depression to schizophrenia and it is not so easy to understand and treat like diabetes or a heart condition. xoxo

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

Your chaotic effect of this kind of disorder, in picture effect and
vividly impacting summation of the word choices, "shattered"
'mental chaos', 'split mind' is a collosal feat accopmplished
in this 2-4-2 contest entry! Thanks for sharing. Very edifying
the description of Dissociative Identity Disorder to know and
be aware of and how it impairs a person and affects them.
Best wishes in contest!
Ronni


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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2020

Appreciate Ronni! My grandson (23) was recently diagnosed with Bipolar 1 with psychosis disorder and it is close to my heart just how fragile the mind is. It is too soon though to put into words how I?m feeling about this happening to him. It is not as easy to figure these illnesses out as say diabetes or heart condition. Thank you for reading this short piece! xoxo