Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "Givers and Takers"My Collection of Love Poetry
8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
And so give and take at same time
Help love and lust become sublime
This is so true Trisha. A well written poem about the basics we want and deserve in our relationships.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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And so give and take at same time
Help love and lust become sublime
This is so true Trisha. A well written poem about the basics we want and deserve in our relationships.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Many are unequal. Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Givers are kind and do good deeds for others without wanting anything in return, while Takers try to get as much as they can from other people - it's all about getting their own needs met. Is your poem talking about lust?
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Givers are kind and do good deeds for others without wanting anything in return, while Takers try to get as much as they can from other people - it's all about getting their own needs met. Is your poem talking about lust?
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2020
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Yes. Primarily lust, been there done that as a giver. Don?t want another T shirt LOL. Also, the idea does carry over to life in general
Hugs, Trisha, thanks
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Definitely a sign of the times with the attitudes you address here in Dolly's form, Trish -- love the colors you've used to help gentle the mood of confronting some hard truths you've chosen! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Definitely a sign of the times with the attitudes you address here in Dolly's form, Trish -- love the colors you've used to help gentle the mood of confronting some hard truths you've chosen! ;) Thanx for sharing! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I thank you sincerely for your loyal reviews. Life has thrown me a curve ball to catch lately. Hugs, Trisha
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May you find the strength to not only catch it, Trisha, but to get a good handle on it and throw it right back! ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your perfect rhyming here as you met with all the rhyming requirements Trisha. Your poem is not iambic and so the flow jars a little. Nevertheless, I loved the sentiments, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed your perfect rhyming here as you met with all the rhyming requirements Trisha. Your poem is not iambic and so the flow jars a little. Nevertheless, I loved the sentiments, love Dolly x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I never get the hang of the iambic. I wanted to try the style, but can only cope with ? see Jane run ? I appreciate your kind review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Hey,
I really loved this Tetravalent, newly invented and enjoyed reading your poem. The way you delivered your message of about five and take is truly admirable. I really hope you'll win. Wishing you loads of luck.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hey,
I really loved this Tetravalent, newly invented and enjoyed reading your poem. The way you delivered your message of about five and take is truly admirable. I really hope you'll win. Wishing you loads of luck.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Thank you so much, Aagib. Your review was so supportive, it made my day.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tetravalent about relationships that need a balance of give and take on both sides. When one always gives and the other only takes the relationship is doomed.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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A very well-written Tetravalent about relationships that need a balance of give and take on both sides. When one always gives and the other only takes the relationship is doomed.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I appreciate your review, have a great weekend.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from A Little Bird
Congratulations on this deep and meaningful piece. I applaud your sentiment. The artwork you've selected complements your poem well. Have you considered adding a font and background color?
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Congratulations on this deep and meaningful piece. I applaud your sentiment. The artwork you've selected complements your poem well. Have you considered adding a font and background color?
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2020
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Yes, it was a good suggestion, now implemented. I appreciated your thoughtful review
Hugs, Trisha
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Yes, it was a good suggestion, now implemented. I appreciated your thoughtful review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from susand3022
Hi Trisha, ... Are you sure you're not related to Dr. Ruth? LOL Sex education is right up your alley, isn't it? You ought to teach a class, maybe in elementary school... not necessarily about sex, but the give and take applies to everything doesn't it? ;)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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Hi Trisha, ... Are you sure you're not related to Dr. Ruth? LOL Sex education is right up your alley, isn't it? You ought to teach a class, maybe in elementary school... not necessarily about sex, but the give and take applies to everything doesn't it? ;)
Comment Written 08-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2020
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A life of learning, hindsight and a desire to help others is what drives me. Knowledge is power! they say. Thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
