Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Hi Aiona, Is this your boat? I love the lights! It's a real beauty and if I ever get out your way... lol... I'm going to come out and join you for a beer and I'm coming out for a ride if it isn't too choppy! :)

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2020

We went out today! Flew the mainsail and jib sail (storm jib). Gusting 15-20 knots in Rosario Strait. :) It was good! Yes, whenever you're out here, we should sail!

Comment from heavenempress

Excellent

hi, excellent piece of work. I liked the idea behind the poem and how you managed to come up with it. Simple but powerful, I liked it. Keep it up and I highly recommend your work to others.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020

Thanks!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your rhyming contest entry, Aiona. Good job on the rhymes--the main focus for the contest. I like your little story, too. Your lines flow smoothly with good imagery. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020

Thanks, Jan.

Comment from May 1

Excellent

I liked this poem, I think it's fun to read and well-written. It sounds like a good entry for the contest. All in all, I really enjoyed reading this fun poem.

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2020

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2020

Thank you.