Farewell, Bast
animal crackers story10 total reviews
Comment from Lobber
Hello,
I'm wordless!
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-Lobber
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Hello,
I'm wordless!
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-Lobber
Comment Written 06-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, and most especially for the sixth star. Sorry I took so long to reply, but I have been truly wordless for a long while...
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This account is delightful. I love how you wove history or geography into this adventure of the Basties. Your humor is one of my favorites, tongue-in-cheek. Well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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This account is delightful. I love how you wove history or geography into this adventure of the Basties. Your humor is one of my favorites, tongue-in-cheek. Well orchestrated.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 07-Apr-2020
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Bast, the Egyptian cat goddess, gave my clever felines the name.
Sorry I am so slow in replying. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Very well-written prose about the Animals and how they react to water coming from oceans or rain, they all have different reactions and most will find shelter away from the wetness.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Very well-written prose about the Animals and how they react to water coming from oceans or rain, they all have different reactions and most will find shelter away from the wetness.
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from Gloria ....
Such a well-told retelling of Noah's Ark and what happened to the Basties. I guess the fact is being too smart might be a wee bit of liability if one doesn't have access to the mainframe.
Your narrative is lean, highly descriptive with vivid imagery and the story line direct and easy to follow.
Superb writing, Ellijay and a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Such a well-told retelling of Noah's Ark and what happened to the Basties. I guess the fact is being too smart might be a wee bit of liability if one doesn't have access to the mainframe.
Your narrative is lean, highly descriptive with vivid imagery and the story line direct and easy to follow.
Superb writing, Ellijay and a pleasure to read and review. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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The story of my life-"without access to the mainframe." I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good story about a bad decision. Should have stayed on the ark. I still miss the unicorns, who dallied and missed the boat. I wonder what others missed it. Dinosaurs were just too big and heavy and would sink it, so we know why they weren't included. LOL! :)
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Good story about a bad decision. Should have stayed on the ark. I still miss the unicorns, who dallied and missed the boat. I wonder what others missed it. Dinosaurs were just too big and heavy and would sink it, so we know why they weren't included. LOL! :)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from damommy
Wow! What great imagery of the storm blowing up to take the ark on it's way. The creaking of the boards and the sounds of frightened animals really brings this to life. Poor Basts. They should have stayed.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Wow! What great imagery of the storm blowing up to take the ark on it's way. The creaking of the boards and the sounds of frightened animals really brings this to life. Poor Basts. They should have stayed.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post. Hopefully I am ready to get back
to serious business.
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I'm so glad to see you back!
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I'm so glad to see you back!
Comment from Cindy Warren
Oh-oh, that was a dumb move. I guess that's why there are no more Basties. I always wondered how Noah got all those animals onto the ark. Polar bears, penguins, kangaroos, lions, none lived where Noah did. How could he have managed it?
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Oh-oh, that was a dumb move. I guess that's why there are no more Basties. I always wondered how Noah got all those animals onto the ark. Polar bears, penguins, kangaroos, lions, none lived where Noah did. How could he have managed it?
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I had not seen the new movie about Noah when I wrote this. The
screenwriters did well. I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is an interesting "take" on the story of Noah's ark. You speculate as to what some of the animals really felt in a unique personification. I enjoyed reading this short, short story.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is an interesting "take" on the story of Noah's ark. You speculate as to what some of the animals really felt in a unique personification. I enjoyed reading this short, short story.
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written short story you have penned for the animal Crackers event. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is a very cute and well written short story you have penned for the animal Crackers event. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing this. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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Bast was a cat goddess in ancient Egypt. Hence the name...I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
This is an excellently penned story, my friend. The ending is perfect. I haven't seen you post anything for quite sometime, but I have been away from Fanstory for some lengthy periods of time. Good to read your work again~Debbie
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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This is an excellently penned story, my friend. The ending is perfect. I haven't seen you post anything for quite sometime, but I have been away from Fanstory for some lengthy periods of time. Good to read your work again~Debbie
Comment Written 15-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2020
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I apologize for the long delay in replying. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my post. I, too, have been away from the site for some time.