Those Eyes
13 Word Horror Contest Entry22 total reviews
Comment from Maria Millsaps
Truly this is an exceptional poem. There is so much implied with so little words. Bravissimo. The photo of the sinister eye complements the poem. I appreciate your creativity.
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Truly this is an exceptional poem. There is so much implied with so little words. Bravissimo. The photo of the sinister eye complements the poem. I appreciate your creativity.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer, Maria. Yeah, I lucked out when I came across this picture when looking for one. I really appreciate the generous rating, M. I'm glad you liked this dark little piece. Thank you again. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from Joan E.
I can see why you won the contest with your dramatic description and presentation. I relished the final line (and actually posted a poem on the theme). The picture you selected is mesmerizing. Kudos- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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I can see why you won the contest with your dramatic description and presentation. I relished the final line (and actually posted a poem on the theme). The picture you selected is mesmerizing. Kudos- Joan
Comment Written 16-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 16-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the great review and generous stars, Joan. Yes, I lucked out when I came across this picture and just had to use it. I'm glad you liked this dark little piece. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Ron
Comment from dragonpoet
The line breaks and use of space adds to the eeriness of the poem's theme. The person murderer looking in the mirror knowing he/she
looks different now. The eye in the artwork almost looks like a wild animal's eye.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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The line breaks and use of space adds to the eeriness of the poem's theme. The person murderer looking in the mirror knowing he/she
looks different now. The eye in the artwork almost looks like a wild animal's eye.
Congrats on winning the contest.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Joan. I really appreciate the generous stars and congrats. I'm glad you liked this dark little piece. Have a great night.
Ron
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You're welcome on all accounts.
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Congratulations on your win with this poem! A chilling few words to send shivers down the spine here! The eyes are the windows of the soul and the glare of evil is in these eyes, much enjoyed, a well deserved win, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Congratulations on your win with this poem! A chilling few words to send shivers down the spine here! The eyes are the windows of the soul and the glare of evil is in these eyes, much enjoyed, a well deserved win, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and congrats, Dolly. I really appreciate it. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a wonderful night.
Ron
Comment from Raul1
Congratulations on winning the contest! An excellent contest entry. Deservedly won. I like this poem. It is an exceptional poem. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Congratulations on winning the contest! An excellent contest entry. Deservedly won. I like this poem. It is an exceptional poem. Thanks for sharing! Nice job.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Raul. I really appreciate the generous stars and congrats, friend. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a great day.
Ron
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You're welcome.
Comment from Venessa Lee-Estevez
I love the twist at the end! Congratulations on winning the contest! I love the graphic that you chose. It really makes the poem even more effective.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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I love the twist at the end! Congratulations on winning the contest! I love the graphic that you chose. It really makes the poem even more effective.
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Venessa. I really appreciate the generous stars and congrats. Yeah, I got lucky when I came across this picture. I just had to use it. I'm glad you liked this dark piece, V. Thank you again. Have a great night.
Ron
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 13-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2019
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Wow, thank you so much for the giant 7, FS, and for choosing my piece. I'm glad you liked this dark little entry. Have a great day.
Ron
Comment from patcelaw
This is a chilling post of horror. May I never see in the mirror anything that resembles evil eyes. Good luck in the contest.
Patricia
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is a chilling post of horror. May I never see in the mirror anything that resembles evil eyes. Good luck in the contest.
Patricia
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Yes, hopefully none of us ever will. Thank you for the great review, Patricia. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes.
Ron
Comment from Gloria ....
Spooky indeed when the killer realizes it is none other than him or herself who is the evil one. Denial can be such a powerful force.
Excellent entry into the contest, Ron and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Spooky indeed when the killer realizes it is none other than him or herself who is the evil one. Denial can be such a powerful force.
Excellent entry into the contest, Ron and best of luck to you with the Contest Committee. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 10-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Hey, Gloria, hello. Thank you for the great review. Yeah, that would be a rude awakening. I really appreciate the generous stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you liked this dark piece.
Ron
Comment from CrystieCookie999
This is delightfully disturbing. The photo definitely incited a reaction. Internal rhyme of 'eyes' and "Lies" is great. This would be a compelling beginning to a longer work, too! Great entry.
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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This is delightfully disturbing. The photo definitely incited a reaction. Internal rhyme of 'eyes' and "Lies" is great. This would be a compelling beginning to a longer work, too! Great entry.
Comment Written 09-Nov-2019
reply by the author on 10-Nov-2019
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Thank you for the fantastic review, Crystie. I dearly appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked this dark little contest offering. Have a wonderful day.
Ron
