A Woman Scorned
Be careful of the pranks you pull25 total reviews
Comment from beizanten
an enticing title and beautiful picture. An intriguing opening stanza. A good second stanza. The emotion flow strong in third stanza. A good closing stanza. Keep up the great work.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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an enticing title and beautiful picture. An intriguing opening stanza. A good second stanza. The emotion flow strong in third stanza. A good closing stanza. Keep up the great work.
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thank you..
Comment from Alex Rosel
This is a neat take on the Locate club challenge. It has echoes of Ruth Ellis, who was the last person in England to be hanged for murder.
The detective sat listening with her eyes glistening -- I like the internal rhyming here {smiles}.
Nicely done!
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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This is a neat take on the Locate club challenge. It has echoes of Ruth Ellis, who was the last person in England to be hanged for murder.
The detective sat listening with her eyes glistening -- I like the internal rhyming here {smiles}.
Nicely done!
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Alex, thank you, it was fun to play with this.
Comment from Sally Law
A sad tale, indeed. Jealousy is equal to death says the Bible. It certainly was for Rachel's beau. You did a great job with this prompt, J.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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A sad tale, indeed. Jealousy is equal to death says the Bible. It certainly was for Rachel's beau. You did a great job with this prompt, J.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal :)
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Sal, it was fun to play a bit with this.
Comment from humpwhistle
I'm a afraid the 'loaded with blanks' ploy is unlikely to convince anyone.
I hope her lawyer knows some better tricks.
I like the noir-ish atmosphere. A typical Hammett-esque opening--
'A victim, or a vixen. At first glance, I couldn't swear.'
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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I'm a afraid the 'loaded with blanks' ploy is unlikely to convince anyone.
I hope her lawyer knows some better tricks.
I like the noir-ish atmosphere. A typical Hammett-esque opening--
'A victim, or a vixen. At first glance, I couldn't swear.'
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Thanks Lee
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello JLR my friend, hope this review finds you well. I guess the old saying holds true, Hell has no fury like a woman scorned. Good rhymes, good flow, good poem, and good job as always!
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reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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Hello JLR my friend, hope this review finds you well. I guess the old saying holds true, Hell has no fury like a woman scorned. Good rhymes, good flow, good poem, and good job as always!
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Comment Written 22-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2019
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My good friend, I enjoyed the challenge, nice to play around a bit...
