A Woman Scorned
Be careful of the pranks you pull25 total reviews
Comment from June Sargent
You've spun quite a tale from this pix this challeng! Good job. I can see this as an old 1940's movie with Betty Davis as the vixen trying to charm her way out of a murder charge...with those eyes. There have been quite a few responses to this challenge. I really liked yours.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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You've spun quite a tale from this pix this challeng! Good job. I can see this as an old 1940's movie with Betty Davis as the vixen trying to charm her way out of a murder charge...with those eyes. There have been quite a few responses to this challenge. I really liked yours.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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June, thank you, it was fun to throw in a little twist to the scene :)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned to go with the Pix This Challenge picture. You used very good words, but I was a bit confused with this one line. Please check this out:
to Rachel reveal she felt so forlorn
Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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This is a very well written poem you have penned to go with the Pix This Challenge picture. You used very good words, but I was a bit confused with this one line. Please check this out:
to Rachel reveal she felt so forlorn
Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Teri, you were so correct! Thanks goes to you!
Comment from Raul1
I like how you structured this poem. It is a very interesting and unique poem. I like the poetry you wrote. Excellent work! No grammatical errors! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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I like how you structured this poem. It is a very interesting and unique poem. I like the poetry you wrote. Excellent work! No grammatical errors! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2019
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Thank you
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You're welcome.
Comment from Elaine Chiodi
Lovely on so many levels: the story line, the rhyming, the internal rhyme and, of course, the image. I'm unfamiliar with the "group entry," so if it's more than one writer, you all deserves kudos. ...ec
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Lovely on so many levels: the story line, the rhyming, the internal rhyme and, of course, the image. I'm unfamiliar with the "group entry," so if it's more than one writer, you all deserves kudos. ...ec
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Elaine, thank you the Pix challenge club is an open group, weekly or biweekly a photo, picture or graphic is posted and the club members each write what the object creates into words...you should join. It is fun.
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi JLR,
the lady in the picture looks like she believes she is right and that her motives and actions were every one else's fault. A kind of "He made me do it" scenario.
This was a clever take on the task required.
Well done.
Brenda.x
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi JLR,
the lady in the picture looks like she believes she is right and that her motives and actions were every one else's fault. A kind of "He made me do it" scenario.
This was a clever take on the task required.
Well done.
Brenda.x
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Brenda thanks.
Comment from BeasPeas
Hi JLR. Good take on the interpretation of the image for this post of Picture This. Well, he done her wrong--as they say--so she got rid of 'em. Nice rhyming and story telling. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Hi JLR. Good take on the interpretation of the image for this post of Picture This. Well, he done her wrong--as they say--so she got rid of 'em. Nice rhyming and story telling. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2019
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Marilyn, thank you much, it was fun to put a different spin to the graphic.
Comment from sunnilicious
This was a great story for suicide prevention and gun control. The story unfolded excellently. Well thought out. Nice rhyming in the last two stanzas. Great work. Good luck in the competition :)
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This was a great story for suicide prevention and gun control. The story unfolded excellently. Well thought out. Nice rhyming in the last two stanzas. Great work. Good luck in the competition :)
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Thanks
Comment from royowen
It's been so fascinating reading these excellent interpretations of these ekphrastically generated poems, I love the vamp like appearance of this lady that has evoked a Mona Lisa like response from so many excellent writers, well done, great scribing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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It's been so fascinating reading these excellent interpretations of these ekphrastically generated poems, I love the vamp like appearance of this lady that has evoked a Mona Lisa like response from so many excellent writers, well done, great scribing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Roy, thanks it was fun to twist this around a bit.
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Good job
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, A Woman Scorned, gives me the sense that Rachael has ventilated her cheating boyfriend and his trollop. She didn't think the gun was loaded -- after she emptied into her targets. Take her away sheriff.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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This poem, A Woman Scorned, gives me the sense that Rachael has ventilated her cheating boyfriend and his trollop. She didn't think the gun was loaded -- after she emptied into her targets. Take her away sheriff.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Roger! Book her Dano!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I liked your overall interpretation of this picture, we all have different thoughts when we see these images and I always find it interesting what others think.
I struggled with this line as it didn't make sense:
"Rachel comes across a vixen."
Maybe:
"Rachel comes across as a vixen."
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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I liked your overall interpretation of this picture, we all have different thoughts when we see these images and I always find it interesting what others think.
I struggled with this line as it didn't make sense:
"Rachel comes across a vixen."
Maybe:
"Rachel comes across as a vixen."
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Oct-2019
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2019
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Dolly yes, of course, your are more precise in your edit, thank you so much.
