Comment from royowen

Excellent

I like the upbeat, expectant, optimistic tone of this great free verse post Ronni. A well expressed message of hope contained within. The language is eloquent and rich in texture. It is beautifully written a expressed. I loved the tone of hope contained in its rhetorical walk, well done, blessings Roy
Typo : Beyond Yesterday(')s gloom.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019

Thanks Roy, so pleased you enjoyed and shared with your
thoughtful and most generous compliments. Always a
high when you peek in, an extra perk in day. Sincerely
appreciated you are indeed.
Gratefully, Ronni

reply by royowen on 18-Sep-2019

Good job

Comment from Sallyo

Exceptional

Delightful! I think joys needs an apostrophe but apart from that, it's perfection. I especially like the homely touches of the places, and these lines... a surprised heart
a castle of dreams

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Hi Sallyo,
Thank you for your most gracious and generous comments and
compliments, so pleased you enjoyed! Thanks for note on
apostrophe, will fix, appreciate the notice, and the extra star...
I am truly grateful.
Best wishes always, Ronni

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Ronni

You have the way of it. Love finds its mark best when not looking at all. Then you think you are in love and boom you aren't and should we think it a waste of time? I think not. Love is the epitome of life, at least for this reader it is. Lovely writing. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Hi There,
You are right on in your most insightful and perceptive read and assessment of this poem, and your own personal love reflections
so wisely and intuitively conveyed. Have a sensational week,
and thanks for sharing so poignantly.
Gratefully, Ronni

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

An interesting view or overview for the eternal Love. I really liked how you explained this part :"love
suddenly brings
a surprised heart
a castle of dreams
a wish come true
soul's gladdened smile anew"
Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Hi Iza,
So pleased you enjoyed and appreciated this, and highlighting
your favorite features noted, most uplifting and inspiring to
note, and I sincerely appreciate it. And your good luck wishes
too. Have a most fantastic week aglow in love's simple joys.
Best wishes, Ronni

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

There is much sweet love in these words Ronni and when love does find us, keeping it in our hearts is the hardest part, your words are a joy to read, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 17-Sep-2019

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019

Hello Dear Dolly!
Thank you for your thoughtful and affirmative comments on this
dear, and so pleased it was a joyful read. As your reviews are
always too dear, and a pleasure peak indeed for me as well.
Have a gorgeous week dear...
Blessings, Ronni