An Angel in the Meadow
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28 total reviews
Comment from BethShelby
Another chapter that ends in a cliff hanger. Every chapter it seems you get pretty badly, injured, but you always pull though so I don't have to worry because in the next chapter you'll be recovered and ready to get injured again.
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Another chapter that ends in a cliff hanger. Every chapter it seems you get pretty badly, injured, but you always pull though so I don't have to worry because in the next chapter you'll be recovered and ready to get injured again.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2020
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This book is going to be a winner. The character are believable and the conversation runs smoothly and naturally. I grew up in Alabama so the southern talk brings back memories.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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This book is going to be a winner. The character are believable and the conversation runs smoothly and naturally. I grew up in Alabama so the southern talk brings back memories.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2020
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Hello again, our dear friend! Thanks for the reviews, kind words and taking time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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You all are doing a great job together and I'm enjoying it!
Comment from Ulla
Hi there to both of you. So here we go again and on familiar ground. I'll read along to see where this one takes us.
Laying back on the blanket, = lying back on the blanket,
Lay is something you lay on a table. Lying is to lie down
All best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi there to both of you. So here we go again and on familiar ground. I'll read along to see where this one takes us.
Laying back on the blanket, = lying back on the blanket,
Lay is something you lay on a table. Lying is to lie down
All best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hi there, Ulla! A "SALUTE" for the review, kind words and taking the time to read "An Angel in the Meadow," Chapter 1. We appreciate your help as well. Hope to see you in Chapter 2. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Bill and Cathy. I remember reading this the first time, but I'm going to say, I think I like this version even better. You have a great way of making the read relevant and in this one I feel a bit more passion leak into the story. For me, it makes it more believable as in love, passion, trust, honor and forgiveness are key features for things to work. Well done, well thought out ... good luck for future chapters in and out of FanStory :)
xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Hello Bill and Cathy. I remember reading this the first time, but I'm going to say, I think I like this version even better. You have a great way of making the read relevant and in this one I feel a bit more passion leak into the story. For me, it makes it more believable as in love, passion, trust, honor and forgiveness are key features for things to work. Well done, well thought out ... good luck for future chapters in and out of FanStory :)
xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2019
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Greetings, Kiwi! A "SALUTE" for the Exceptional Review, kind words and taking the time to read "An Angel in the Meadow", Chapter 1. All of which is an honor. We hope to see you in Chapter 2. Best wishes for an awesome week ahead and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, very interesting and witty, amazing Characters, consistent and well written, leaves the reader eager to know whats going to happen in the following chapter, could just be fun and games as it being witty, however, i'm pleased to read the chapter i did and great ending. Thank you for sharing.
Well done and Good Luck!
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Good read, very interesting and witty, amazing Characters, consistent and well written, leaves the reader eager to know whats going to happen in the following chapter, could just be fun and games as it being witty, however, i'm pleased to read the chapter i did and great ending. Thank you for sharing.
Well done and Good Luck!
Comment Written 16-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2019
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Greetings, Angela! Are you looking? Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the "EXCEPTIONAL REVIEW," kind words and taking the time to read Chapter 1 of "An Angel in the Meadow." As to your words, "good read, very interesting and witty," we say, "ya, ya, ya, thanks for making our day!" Great hearing from you our friend. Hope to see you in Chapter 2. Best wishes for an awesome week and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
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you're welcome, yes... hope i get to spot chapter 2!
Comment from Darlene Franklin
You've definitely picqued my curiosity . . . God sends Brett an angel who's of the earthly kind, and she's as in need of an angel as he is. Am I reading that right? Brave of you to try to rewrite the story.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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You've definitely picqued my curiosity . . . God sends Brett an angel who's of the earthly kind, and she's as in need of an angel as he is. Am I reading that right? Brave of you to try to rewrite the story.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2019
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Greetings, Darlene! Cathy and I are honored to meet you. A "SALUTE" for the review, kind words and taking the time to read to read "An Angel in the Meadow, Chapter 1." Oh, yes! You are reading that right! We hope to see you in Chapter 2. Best wishes for an awesome weekend and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill
Comment from Sandra Montanino
I love inspirational stories. We all need them, even if we think we don't--which is usually when we need Him the most. Nicely done.
P.S. So sorry to realize your Dad died the year you were born. Such a great sacrifice for our country and his family.
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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I love inspirational stories. We all need them, even if we think we don't--which is usually when we need Him the most. Nicely done.
P.S. So sorry to realize your Dad died the year you were born. Such a great sacrifice for our country and his family.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2019
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Hi, Sandra! Thanks for the condolences. Cathy and I read your profile, quite impressive. A "SALUTE," you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. It's great hearing you say, "Nicely done!" We hope you will follow along with "An Angel in the Meadow." Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from flylikeaneagle
Stars for you, precious Bill and Cathy. I love angels. Please note
the scripture is misquoted -- NIV -- Do not forget to show hospitality to strangers, for by so doing some people have shown hospitality to angels without knowing it.
Maybe, you can say what year this is when Brett was young with his grandpa and then when he is older. Where is the setting?
I think it is funny that God is going to take a nap. Angel and Brett are moving fast in the love department - lol. God sees and hears all. God spoke things into creation. On the seventh day, he breathed in and rested. Yes, the youth will like your humor in this story. Stars for you both. I'll fly back. I was on vacation with my daughters. Monica and Annie are both teachers. ********************** flylikeaneagle
God's blessings on your stories.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Stars for you, precious Bill and Cathy. I love angels. Please note
the scripture is misquoted -- NIV -- Do not forget to show hospitality to strangers, for by so doing some people have shown hospitality to angels without knowing it.
Maybe, you can say what year this is when Brett was young with his grandpa and then when he is older. Where is the setting?
I think it is funny that God is going to take a nap. Angel and Brett are moving fast in the love department - lol. God sees and hears all. God spoke things into creation. On the seventh day, he breathed in and rested. Yes, the youth will like your humor in this story. Stars for you both. I'll fly back. I was on vacation with my daughters. Monica and Annie are both teachers. ********************** flylikeaneagle
God's blessings on your stories.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2019
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Greetings, our dear friend! Cathy and I "SALUTE" you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Thank you as well, for alerting us that some of the words in Hebrews 13:2 were wrong. Please extend our congratulations to Monica and Annie on their "Teachers Certification." We know you are very proud of them. Our reply to you saying, "God's blessings on your stories" is "YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
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Cathy and Commando: I'm so excited to read more of your stories. I'll be posting more once I start editing my NaNoWriMo of true colors. I have to figure out how to make my bad guy bad. So much to learn. Enjoy your time together writing and relaxing. flylikeaneagle - nancy
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Cathy and I will be reviewing your work, Nancy. Best wishes and God Bless. Cathy and Bill
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a really fun read. It skips along at a good pace keeping the reader engaged and entertained. The dialog is down to earth and natural throughout. I enjoyed it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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This is a really fun read. It skips along at a good pace keeping the reader engaged and entertained. The dialog is down to earth and natural throughout. I enjoyed it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2019
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Greetings, our friend! A "SALUTE" to you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. May we say, "YA--thanks for making our day!" Best wishes and God Bless. Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill.
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute chapter you have written . You used very cute and very good descriptive words and dialogue. I look forward to the next chapter. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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This is a very cute chapter you have written . You used very cute and very good descriptive words and dialogue. I look forward to the next chapter. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2019
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Hi, Teri!
Cathy and I "SALUTE," you for the review, kind words and taking the time to read our work. All of which is an honor. Our reply to you for saying, "I look forward to the next chapter" is "YA--thanks for making our day!" Respectfully with Admiration, Cathy and Bill