Comment from Darlene Franklin

Excellent

I love the phrase, "those little lying flowers." Does "he" suddenly appear, or has he been there all along, watching her pull off the petals? I'm glad she found the answer she wanted!

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019

Ha ha, he arrived late and pulled her from the pile of petals with a kiss just in time.Thanks for the review, cheers.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a whimsical and fanciful write filled with romance and promises and the smiles give instant gratification. I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 16-Aug-2019

Thanks for the encouraging review. I can just imagine the girl on a huge hill of petals, frustrated with each result, ha ha. Cheers.