Cracks Made in The March of Me
The war going on while I was in the process of getting saved6 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a heartfelt story and feeling broken is something I have been familiar with and living alone is something I am used to now. Addiction is a different ball game and can end in great misery, I am pleased to hear you are beating it, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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This is a heartfelt story and feeling broken is something I have been familiar with and living alone is something I am used to now. Addiction is a different ball game and can end in great misery, I am pleased to hear you are beating it, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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It's all thanks to God! God bless you ma'am In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Divine, Holy, Majestic Name, The Name Above All Names I pray, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
Comment from V McCrary
First congrats on your 6-months sobriety. The poem is raw emotion and I am a witness of their devastation. Just one word of advise, while a move may be in order, wherever you go, there YOU are. Thanks for sharing. V
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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First congrats on your 6-months sobriety. The poem is raw emotion and I am a witness of their devastation. Just one word of advise, while a move may be in order, wherever you go, there YOU are. Thanks for sharing. V
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Very true thank you for that! =)
Comment from Sandra Ludwick
Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. I found it to be very interesting. I also read your notes and wanted to say congrats on being clean for six months. I hope you have a support group in place to continue.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Thank you for sharing your thoughts through your poetry. I found it to be very interesting. I also read your notes and wanted to say congrats on being clean for six months. I hope you have a support group in place to continue.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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Yes I do ma'am they are amazing and are truly Gifts from God!!! =)
Comment from poetwatch
You know, I'll let you on a little secret, Author, because I see myself in your mind. My Lord Jesus saves. He is always there for us. I believe we are the chosen and the devil knows it. So at an early age, horns and tail, starts turning us into whatever he wants because we belong to the Lord. You keep your head up and smile, believe in yourself and when feeling weak as strength from the Most High. We are few, yet, we are many. :)
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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You know, I'll let you on a little secret, Author, because I see myself in your mind. My Lord Jesus saves. He is always there for us. I believe we are the chosen and the devil knows it. So at an early age, horns and tail, starts turning us into whatever he wants because we belong to the Lord. You keep your head up and smile, believe in yourself and when feeling weak as strength from the Most High. We are few, yet, we are many. :)
Comment Written 10-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2019
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amen, Amen, AMEN to that!!! =)
Comment from Patty Palmer
So proud you should be! Being sober like that has to be a miracle for sure. I'm glad that you've found strength in Jesus
and know that if you are with Jesus, no one can be againsyou. Keep on writing, it's great therapy!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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So proud you should be! Being sober like that has to be a miracle for sure. I'm glad that you've found strength in Jesus
and know that if you are with Jesus, no one can be againsyou. Keep on writing, it's great therapy!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much for the critique ma'am and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Holy, Majestic, Divine Name, The Name Above All Names, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!
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You're welcome!
Comment from Nike23
Your poem is amazing and congratulations for your 6 months sobriety. I know first hand what it feels like to battle with addiction. This poem is honest and true. Good job.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Your poem is amazing and congratulations for your 6 months sobriety. I know first hand what it feels like to battle with addiction. This poem is honest and true. Good job.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanks so much and God bless you In Jesus's Almighty, All Powerful, Holy, Majestic, Divine Name, The Name Above All Names, amen, Amen, AMEN!!!