Comment from C. Gale Burnett

Excellent

I really love this entry. If everyone would heed this advice, imagine how it could change the world.
An overall beautiful presentation, with an exceptional message within the well thought senryu. Wishing you all the best in the contest!

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019

Thank you for your encouraging words and your review.

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This meets the contest requirements splendidly with a correct line and syllable count. The content reflects the theme of human nature well and provides the reader with some valuable advice. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thanks much for your review and comments.

Comment from LeftHandedScribe

Excellent

This theme taps into my own feelings about standing for yourself and the truth in the face of many who live half false lives. The photo is also stunning. Well done!

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thanks much for your review and comments. Know what you mean about half-false lives.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-That is quite an image,
and a nice presentation.
-The syllable count and
topic are good.
-I like the message, too.
-If you don't seek the truth,
you only have yourself to
blame, as they say.
-We need more truth seekers
more than ever!
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2019

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019

Thank you for your read and review. Too many people blinded by ignorance these days.

reply by Pam (respa) on 04-Aug-2019

You are very welcome, and I agree!