Muse Of Love
Come read about my muse...22 total reviews
Comment from Larry5000
Another great poem and one written about the influence we often share with our muse. Your rhyming scheme was very good in this poem, the only thing I may have changed was the third line in the first verse and added the word "with" to "in" to make "within" Also last line in the first verse.
I may have went with: Spills magic out from the start. Dropping the word the. So you would have :
Imagination within my heart --
Spills magic out from the start.
That has a better flow of the sentence, other then that, the rest flowed very well.
As always that is just me, I know it is an older poem by now so change if you wish and if not that is fine, just thought I would point that out.
Interesting picture by the way. :-)
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Another great poem and one written about the influence we often share with our muse. Your rhyming scheme was very good in this poem, the only thing I may have changed was the third line in the first verse and added the word "with" to "in" to make "within" Also last line in the first verse.
I may have went with: Spills magic out from the start. Dropping the word the. So you would have :
Imagination within my heart --
Spills magic out from the start.
That has a better flow of the sentence, other then that, the rest flowed very well.
As always that is just me, I know it is an older poem by now so change if you wish and if not that is fine, just thought I would point that out.
Interesting picture by the way. :-)
Comment Written 22-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 22-Sep-2019
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Thank you! I did change this per you suggestion and it reads much better now! xoxo
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That is great, glad you did it reads much better now. :-)
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Xoxo!
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Well I tried copy and pasting the link and it doesn?t come up?? Not sure why
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The link to my poem??
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If you are talking about my link you should have been able to just click on it to bring it up?
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It does not show up as a hyperlink in my phone. I?ll check it from work tomorrow on my computer :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Muse of Love", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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"Muse of Love", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I very much look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 05-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Awe! Thanks Duchess, so happy you appreciated this piece! xoxo
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What an exquisite photograph. And your poem is just lovely. It truly captures the flow that occurs when we are in touch with and embracing our creative gifts.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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What an exquisite photograph. And your poem is just lovely. It truly captures the flow that occurs when we are in touch with and embracing our creative gifts.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Appreciate you enjoyed! I love these contests because they really draw from me poems I?d never think of writing otherwise! Grateful for your feedback! xoxo
Comment from June Sargent
I do like your muse who inspires with whispers of love. Creating pieces with music from the heart and magic from the stars above would definitely surpass common speech. Glad you bonded!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I do like your muse who inspires with whispers of love. Creating pieces with music from the heart and magic from the stars above would definitely surpass common speech. Glad you bonded!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you June! I appreciate you enjoyed and your precious feedback! xoxo
Comment from Sugarray77
My favorite line... delicious verses filled with light surpass the common speech and sight.
You have done a fantastic job with this entry and I just love it. Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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My favorite line... delicious verses filled with light surpass the common speech and sight.
You have done a fantastic job with this entry and I just love it. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much! I?m so happy that you enjoyed it! I loved writing it! xoxo
Comment from Tootie
The artwork and color choices for this poem are amazing. Well written, great title and smooth flow throughout. The notes share some important and very interesting information, too, and are much appreciated. Wishing you the best in the contest.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
(Commando & Tootie)
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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The artwork and color choices for this poem are amazing. Well written, great title and smooth flow throughout. The notes share some important and very interesting information, too, and are much appreciated. Wishing you the best in the contest.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
(Commando & Tootie)
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for your precious review! It didn?t do so well in the contest but I really enjoyed writing it and I think that?s what?s most important! xoxo
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Agree! And many enjoyed reading it!
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Thank you so much! I am honored xoxo
Comment from Mastery
Interesting background and poetry combined here, author. It's all Greek to me. (oooh) Bad pun, I know. Your notes helped your muse with the entire piece from beginning to end. I wish you good luck in the contest. : ) Bob
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Interesting background and poetry combined here, author. It's all Greek to me. (oooh) Bad pun, I know. Your notes helped your muse with the entire piece from beginning to end. I wish you good luck in the contest. : ) Bob
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Actually that was a great pun! I love it! There are many good muses in this contest! That?s why we have so many good writers on this site! I just love having something that makes me think creatively! Thanks so much for your wonderful comment! xoxo
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You are welcome, my friend. : ) Bob
Comment from Iza Deleanu
The muse of love had enchanted your verse bringing new layers of tenderness through "the spirit's splendor from above". ..
Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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The muse of love had enchanted your verse bringing new layers of tenderness through "the spirit's splendor from above". ..
Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for reviewing it for your precious comment. I chose Erato as a way of symbolizing my inspiration which is love. It?s hard to find a picture that can visually express love inspiring one. And love isn?t just about romantic love it?s all the levels of love that inspire! xoxo
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is the second muse poem I have read. Both are very good. Both approach the subject from different directions. May the best muse win. Unless someone has an evil muse.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This is the second muse poem I have read. Both are very good. Both approach the subject from different directions. May the best muse win. Unless someone has an evil muse.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Ha! Well I surely hope no evil news is inspiring anyone! Thanks so much for reading and thank you for your feedback and for appreciating my little muse. xoxo
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I Like the artwork you choose t go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Wow I can feel the compassion you have with your muse.
That is some we don't have, sometimes I don't like what he puts in my head and refuse to write.
Then when I'm in bed those word taunt me until I have to pen them.
To my surprise they weren't that bad after all.
Cookie
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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I Like the artwork you choose t go with your poem, they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Wow I can feel the compassion you have with your muse.
That is some we don't have, sometimes I don't like what he puts in my head and refuse to write.
Then when I'm in bed those word taunt me until I have to pen them.
To my surprise they weren't that bad after all.
Cookie
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thank you so much for reading and your precious comment! Muses are a fickle thing sometimes LoL xoxo