Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Reality"My Collection of Love Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from pome lover
yes - your poem probably expresses many people's similar thoughts on dating.
When a person has the chance to see their date with family members and kids--how they treat them, are around them, that, to me, is the best way to see what a person is really like. That is not earth shattering news, but still true, IMHO.
Very nice poem expressing true concerns. well done.
pome lover
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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yes - your poem probably expresses many people's similar thoughts on dating.
When a person has the chance to see their date with family members and kids--how they treat them, are around them, that, to me, is the best way to see what a person is really like. That is not earth shattering news, but still true, IMHO.
Very nice poem expressing true concerns. well done.
pome lover
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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I agree! Thanks for a positive review
Hugs, Trisha
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most welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written reverse nonet poem you have penned. I am thankful I am married and happy. Dating would be very hard these says it seems. You used very good words and very interesting and good imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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This is a very well written reverse nonet poem you have penned. I am thankful I am married and happy. Dating would be very hard these says it seems. You used very good words and very interesting and good imagery from the art work you chose. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2019
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It?s kind of scary out there! Thanks for a positive review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sallyo
Aghhh! That sort of thinking does your head in! Very well done, and if you were aiming for a head-spinning bewilderment, then you have succeeded. Now I need a cup of tea.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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Aghhh! That sort of thinking does your head in! Very well done, and if you were aiming for a head-spinning bewilderment, then you have succeeded. Now I need a cup of tea.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2019
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I love that kind of confusion! Have a cup of tea, take two decompressing breaths and carry on! I thank you for your fun review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is a good description of how people 'put on airs' to impress others, Bucketlist. Good job with the nonet form--correct syllables per line. It reads smoothly with good details. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This is a good description of how people 'put on airs' to impress others, Bucketlist. Good job with the nonet form--correct syllables per line. It reads smoothly with good details. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thanks, Jan for your complimentary review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from N. Rabwar
I really relate to the content in this poem. The world can be such a deceptive place. I myself became a prisoner of lies for years and only the truth set me free. I loved the message but the wording might need to be polished for me to give it a six.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I really relate to the content in this poem. The world can be such a deceptive place. I myself became a prisoner of lies for years and only the truth set me free. I loved the message but the wording might need to be polished for me to give it a six.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2019
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I?m glad you enjoyed the style, thanks for your kind review! hugs, Trisha
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
This poem is stunning. First, your structure for the Monet is spot on and so creatively executed. Next, you tell a personal story and actually have a beginning middle and end. Love this!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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This poem is stunning. First, your structure for the Monet is spot on and so creatively executed. Next, you tell a personal story and actually have a beginning middle and end. Love this!
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Wow, thank you Shauna! I felt honored by your complimentary review.,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Yep, always best NOT to blend but to share the same space! ;) ;) This is a really great nonet, Trisha -- thanx for sharing! ;) Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your author notes, Beautiful Lady! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Yep, always best NOT to blend but to share the same space! ;) ;) This is a really great nonet, Trisha -- thanx for sharing! ;) Be sure to pop back in there and remove the gnome graffiti from your author notes, Beautiful Lady! ;) :) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2019
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Thanks Yvette, I appreciate your supportive review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is certainly a well constructed Nonet with correct line and syllable count throughout. It's quite a relevant topic since so much dating seems to be done online these days where it's REALLY easy to fake it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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This is certainly a well constructed Nonet with correct line and syllable count throughout. It's quite a relevant topic since so much dating seems to be done online these days where it's REALLY easy to fake it. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks very much for your review. Im long out of date with all this
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from CrystieCookie999
A riddle in reverse nonet! Very clever. Clever premise. Good subject of honesty. No idea what to improve unless maybe to add an ellipsis at the end of the last line, leaving the reader to fill in what might happen if one condition is not met.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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A riddle in reverse nonet! Very clever. Clever premise. Good subject of honesty. No idea what to improve unless maybe to add an ellipsis at the end of the last line, leaving the reader to fill in what might happen if one condition is not met.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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Thanks for your supportive review,
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jan Anderegg
It might be my tired brain but I had a little trouble wrapping my head around the meaning of your poem. It's probably just me. In any case I found no errors and I have no suggestions for corrections.
All the best,
Jan
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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It might be my tired brain but I had a little trouble wrapping my head around the meaning of your poem. It's probably just me. In any case I found no errors and I have no suggestions for corrections.
All the best,
Jan
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2019
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It?s about the facade people put up when they date. Thanks for your review!
Hugs, Trisha
