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Missed Deadline Ghost Contest Offering (see author notes)29 total reviews
Comment from Sankey
This was a very interesting read. I am hoping it my progress into something further down the road. Well done a great imagination in all this. Figures through walls and all that. No spags.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This was a very interesting read. I am hoping it my progress into something further down the road. Well done a great imagination in all this. Figures through walls and all that. No spags.
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Wrote this one a few weeks ago for the contest (that i missed..ugh). :) I had teacher meetings all last week (for which I had to prepare the week before) and this week are the parent and student orientations....then school starts next week... So, I'm really just trying to play catch up! Thanx for those beautiful stars, sir! ;) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Tootsie55
This was a great read. Hoping it is going somewhere after this. Loved this interesting word...caricaturish and just one possible spag.....need anything, ya he(a)r[e], Rich man?"
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This was a great read. Hoping it is going somewhere after this. Loved this interesting word...caricaturish and just one possible spag.....need anything, ya he(a)r[e], Rich man?"
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Nah... this was simply a short story entry for a few weeks ago -- no plans beyond this. :) Thanx for this wonderful review, ma'am, and for more bright stars -- I'm slowly digging out of my reponse/review hole, but I fear it may be a losing battle! ;) ;) Take care! ;) Yvette
Comment from susand3022
My Immensely Talented Lady of the South... You really need to put together a book of short stories or something and publish these things. You are such a wonderful writer with a fabulous imagination! I love how these people just started walking through walls and chimneys... lol Good thing she wasn't the type to get freaked out by a seduction scene in the middle of nowhere! I may have turned tail and run for the hills! LOL
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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My Immensely Talented Lady of the South... You really need to put together a book of short stories or something and publish these things. You are such a wonderful writer with a fabulous imagination! I love how these people just started walking through walls and chimneys... lol Good thing she wasn't the type to get freaked out by a seduction scene in the middle of nowhere! I may have turned tail and run for the hills! LOL
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Oh, you are just what I needed to hear, Beautiful Lady!! ;) Been a long weekend and then awful time spent in the medical system all morning...yuck!! But finally taking a break from school prep (and just not even looking at email till later - lol!) this is such a wonderful surprise! ;) So glad you enjoyed the Major and "team" -- they were fun to write! ;) Take care up there this week! ;) Yvette
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
I missed the description that said it was a ghost story, but I began to figure it out part way threw. This is well done, a fun story of matching making and amazing cleaners. I wish I had some of these ghosts at my house. Sorry you missed the deadline. Rox
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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I missed the description that said it was a ghost story, but I began to figure it out part way threw. This is well done, a fun story of matching making and amazing cleaners. I wish I had some of these ghosts at my house. Sorry you missed the deadline. Rox
Comment Written 04-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thanx so much for your review, Rox -- the Major and his team were fun to write! ;) :) Take care! Yvette
Comment from Brenda Henderson
Excellent! Charming engaging narrative. This was a great deal of fun to read. I'm certain your readers will find it enjoyable as well. Excellent character development and great attention to detail. I hope that you continue to expound on this. It has enormous potential as a kind of modern day "Ghost and Mrs. Muir" cable or web series. Good job!
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Excellent! Charming engaging narrative. This was a great deal of fun to read. I'm certain your readers will find it enjoyable as well. Excellent character development and great attention to detail. I hope that you continue to expound on this. It has enormous potential as a kind of modern day "Ghost and Mrs. Muir" cable or web series. Good job!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hooray! I am so very glad that you enjoyed the Major and his "team" -- Rich will certainly have his hands full! ;) :) I will say that they were certainly fun to create! :) :) Thanx for the WONDERFUL encouragement and review, Brenda -- very appreciated! ;) Take care this
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You're very welcome!
Comment from damommy
This is a wonderful story. Full of show, don't tell details. For a while, I was afraid the Major and crew were evil, but it turns out they were matchmakers. I can see Rich being taken aback by the reference to two centuries. I think I would have run! Seems like two people have found each other.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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This is a wonderful story. Full of show, don't tell details. For a while, I was afraid the Major and crew were evil, but it turns out they were matchmakers. I can see Rich being taken aback by the reference to two centuries. I think I would have run! Seems like two people have found each other.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Hooray! I am so very glad that you enjoyed the Major and his "team" -- Rich will certainly have his hands full now! ;) :) I will say that they were certainly fun to create! :) :) Thanx for the awesome review, Yvonne -- very appreciated! ;) Take care this
Comment from erspring
Very interesting story. It reads really well. You caught my attention
To me there were a few misplaced sentences giving back story.
However, it did not pull too much energy from the writing. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece.
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Very interesting story. It reads really well. You caught my attention
To me there were a few misplaced sentences giving back story.
However, it did not pull too much energy from the writing. Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Thank you for your review. :)
Comment from lyenochka
Seems like there were some magical ghosts who came to clean before the actual cleaning lady showed up? Hope she's an eligible bachelorette for Rich. Very likable characters!
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Seems like there were some magical ghosts who came to clean before the actual cleaning lady showed up? Hope she's an eligible bachelorette for Rich. Very likable characters!
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Glad that you enjoyed the Major and his "team" -- they were certainly fun to create! :) :) Thanx for the WONDERFUL review, Helen -- very appreciated! ;) Take care this
Comment from Sally Law
Sweet. Sounds like my in-laws. He wanted a housekeeper at first, then when she held out, she received a marriage proposal.
The match-makers were angels in disguise with a Martha Stewart twist. I thought the romantic settings were leading to something good. Well penned in your unique style.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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Sweet. Sounds like my in-laws. He wanted a housekeeper at first, then when she held out, she received a marriage proposal.
The match-makers were angels in disguise with a Martha Stewart twist. I thought the romantic settings were leading to something good. Well penned in your unique style.
Sending you my best today as always,
Sal xo
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 05-Aug-2019
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LOL! Now there's a story! ;) ;) I am so very glad that you enjoyed the Major and his "team" -- they were certainly fun to create! :) :) Thanx for the wonderful review, Lady Sal -- very appreciated! ;) Take care of you and enjoy the week! ;) Yvette
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I see you are writing away before school starts. :+))
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I'm procrastinating...but don't tell on me...I promise I'll be ready for tomorrow's meeting!! ;)
