Life's new Breath
using words12 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
I hope this didn't include health problems. It's a loving ode to the subject person. I loved your poetry and the dynamic picture. It was artfully woven with the given word to use. Thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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I hope this didn't include health problems. It's a loving ode to the subject person. I loved your poetry and the dynamic picture. It was artfully woven with the given word to use. Thanks for sharing
Hugs, Trisha
Comment Written 07-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
First, that is beautiful artwork which gives the appearance of fire and ice.
-I love the rhyme in the 1st two and last two verses;
-it's interest how you used the required words, pulling them all together with the 4 line stanza;
-this poem made me feel good about the love, caring and attention given to the one in need, and the maintaining of that support.
Best wishes in the contest; this is really a well-penned poem.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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First, that is beautiful artwork which gives the appearance of fire and ice.
-I love the rhyme in the 1st two and last two verses;
-it's interest how you used the required words, pulling them all together with the 4 line stanza;
-this poem made me feel good about the love, caring and attention given to the one in need, and the maintaining of that support.
Best wishes in the contest; this is really a well-penned poem.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
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My pleasure :)
Comment from Janetsue
The artwork truly is glorious and it connects very well to your message. You've included the prompt words, fire - cold - ice - breath, in a poem praising a special person who has been able to lift the poet up into a higher realm of happiness. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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The artwork truly is glorious and it connects very well to your message. You've included the prompt words, fire - cold - ice - breath, in a poem praising a special person who has been able to lift the poet up into a higher realm of happiness. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much for this for this thoughtful review and reading it as I meant
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You're very welcome!
Comment from Sylvia Page
This caught my attention. The words are well crafted to rhyme and it does incorporate the required words, fire - cold - ice - breath. Best wishes,
Sylvia
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This caught my attention. The words are well crafted to rhyme and it does incorporate the required words, fire - cold - ice - breath. Best wishes,
Sylvia
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Joan E.
I relished the way you seamlessly wove the required words into your love poem, along with your rhymed couplets. Your title and artwork selection established the mood perfectly and your use of alliteration intensified it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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I relished the way you seamlessly wove the required words into your love poem, along with your rhymed couplets. Your title and artwork selection established the mood perfectly and your use of alliteration intensified it. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Wow! Thank you very much, much appreciated
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you use the required words to their full potential. The content is soft and serene throughout making for an enjoyable read. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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This meets the contest requirements splendidly as you use the required words to their full potential. The content is soft and serene throughout making for an enjoyable read. Good luck in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Use of the prompt words is appreciable, there is good flow of thoughts and word imagery, this tells about life's new breath from her options; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Use of the prompt words is appreciable, there is good flow of thoughts and word imagery, this tells about life's new breath from her options; well said, well done. Liked and enjoyed the read. Write-Inspire --DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem with the prescribed words perfectly incorporated in monorhyme verses and explaining life's new breath when we light a fire to drive the cold away.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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A very well-written poem with the prescribed words perfectly incorporated in monorhyme verses and explaining life's new breath when we light a fire to drive the cold away.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is so well done and barvo on the way you used the four required words. I love the last two line. Really well done. I didn't see any errors and I hope you will do well in the contest. Rox
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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This is so well done and barvo on the way you used the four required words. I love the last two line. Really well done. I didn't see any errors and I hope you will do well in the contest. Rox
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your concise, beautiful poem makes excellent us of specific and vivid
details to convey the timeless theme that love is SO very powerful and life-affecting. Dazzling artwork!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Your concise, beautiful poem makes excellent us of specific and vivid
details to convey the timeless theme that love is SO very powerful and life-affecting. Dazzling artwork!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2019
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Thank you very much
