Love Long Distance
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "No Poppies, Please! - Chapter 4"A Wartime Romance
27 total reviews
Comment from Natalie Goodwin
I enjoyed reading this chapter. I haven't read the previous chapters so now I will go back and start at the beginning. I can feel the connection between Cathy and Bill, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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I enjoyed reading this chapter. I haven't read the previous chapters so now I will go back and start at the beginning. I can feel the connection between Cathy and Bill, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2020
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2020
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Hi Natalie! So sorry for the delay. We've been writing away! Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review this revised chapter. So glad you feel the connection between Bill and Cathy. Also that you'll be reading more. We currently have 21 chapters posted and Chapter 22 has just been written and will be posted soon. Wishing you a great weekend. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Mia Twysted
I just love the letter theme to this. The love that is felt for the one she misses is felt through each and every word. I love how she takes the time to put in the tiniest of detail when she writes to him. You do this so well.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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I just love the letter theme to this. The love that is felt for the one she misses is felt through each and every word. I love how she takes the time to put in the tiniest of detail when she writes to him. You do this so well.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2020
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Hi Mia! Thanks so much for stopping by to read our revised Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. Glad you enjoyed it! We hope you continue to follow along. We have 21 chapters posted right now, and Chapter 22 is in the works and coming soon. Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Aaqib Naeem
Wow! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts and feelings in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed reading it and I'm taking the meanings with me that you conveyed. I hope you'll go far in this contest. Keep it up, wishing you luck.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Wow! You've written this piece so beautifully and executed your thoughts and feelings in such a wonderful way. I enjoyed reading it and I'm taking the meanings with me that you conveyed. I hope you'll go far in this contest. Keep it up, wishing you luck.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2020
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Hi Aaqib, Much appreciate you reading and reviewing our revised Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. So glad you enjoyed it! We have 21 chapters currently posted, and Chapter 22 is coming soon. Hope you continue to read along. Have a great week!
Blessings,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Lu Saluna
I have started reading from the beginning of the book now and so far there are no errors I have seen. I am really enjoying the story of the two young lovers. You can really feel the pain of their separation and the fear of what can happen during war. The detail is really excellent.
I only noticed a few items in this chapter:
divorced Eddie Fisher less than two week(s) ago! - add the "s"
"Glad All Over", - add quote marks
I'm sure you wish you were() too. - comma not necessary
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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I have started reading from the beginning of the book now and so far there are no errors I have seen. I am really enjoying the story of the two young lovers. You can really feel the pain of their separation and the fear of what can happen during war. The detail is really excellent.
I only noticed a few items in this chapter:
divorced Eddie Fisher less than two week(s) ago! - add the "s"
"Glad All Over", - add quote marks
I'm sure you wish you were() too. - comma not necessary
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2020
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Hi Lu! Sorry it has taken so long to respond. We want to thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. Also, thank you for the edits. We truly appreciate the help and support. So glad you are enjoying this novel and following along. Chapter 21 has just been posted, and we are already working on Chapter 22. So Wishing you all the best. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Iza Deleanu
This chapter is constructed as a diary in a letter format, and it makes sense because of the situation the heroes are currently, apart for nine month, but what about the baby? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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This chapter is constructed as a diary in a letter format, and it makes sense because of the situation the heroes are currently, apart for nine month, but what about the baby? Thank you for sharing and good luck with the next chapter.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2020
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2020
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Hi Iza! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing our revised Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. The baby wasn't conceived yet at this point. We are revising some of our past chapters and posting them as well as we get closer to preparing the novel for publication. We just finished Chapter 21 which will be posted soon. Have a wonderful Sunday. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Dihalia
I like your story so far, but I have a question: Isn't classified information the things they do in the airforce for him to tell Angel? I was woundering about that since I began reading.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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I like your story so far, but I have a question: Isn't classified information the things they do in the airforce for him to tell Angel? I was woundering about that since I began reading.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2019
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2019
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Hi Dihalia! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. We are very happy you are enjoying this book. To answer your question, once information is classified by the Secretary of the Air Force, it's not to be disclosed with anyone without prior approval from the Secretary (AF). We hope that helps. Enjoy the next chapters (up to Chapter 16). We are currently working on Chapter 17, and it will also be available soon. Wishing you all the best. Happy Holidays. God Bless.
Respectfully with Admiration,
Bill & Cathy
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Oh, ok. Thank You! :)
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Such a warm story. I do see that it's fiction. It seems like it's easier to write fiction instead of non fiction. The characters are easier to write about, too. I'll keep reading. Thank you for such a great novel.
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Such a warm story. I do see that it's fiction. It seems like it's easier to write fiction instead of non fiction. The characters are easier to write about, too. I'll keep reading. Thank you for such a great novel.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 18-Sep-2019
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Hello Again! Thank you, once more, for reading and reviewing these chapters of Love Long Distance. Yes, it is fiction, but certain facts are contained within the fiction. That you call it a "great novel" means so much to us!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
Comment from Sam Frearson-Tubito
Hi Bill and Cathy, this is absolutely wonderful. I really enjoyed reading your love letters. How special they are, beautifully written and so romantic. Thank you for sharing your love with us.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Hi Bill and Cathy, this is absolutely wonderful. I really enjoyed reading your love letters. How special they are, beautifully written and so romantic. Thank you for sharing your love with us.
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Hi Sam!
Welcome to FanStory! :) Thanks so much for stopping by to read and review this chapter. So glad you enjoyed it and found it beautifully written and romantic. We'll continue to share the love so we hope you will continue to follow along. Chapter 5 is in the works and coming soon.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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A SALUTE FOR THE SIX STAR RATING!
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
The story strikes a cord with me because it takes place at around the same time I was drafted and received orders for Vietnam. Reading the letters between the two remind me of similar events that happened during that time for me. I'm not going to tell my story in this review I will just say that I enjoyed the read and we'll look for the other chapters. The other event in the story that stands out is related to the puppies. I recall as a child seeing everyone wear poppies to commemorate those lost in war. -Robert-
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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The story strikes a cord with me because it takes place at around the same time I was drafted and received orders for Vietnam. Reading the letters between the two remind me of similar events that happened during that time for me. I'm not going to tell my story in this review I will just say that I enjoyed the read and we'll look for the other chapters. The other event in the story that stands out is related to the puppies. I recall as a child seeing everyone wear poppies to commemorate those lost in war. -Robert-
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Hi Robert!
Thank you so much for reading and reviewing Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. Thank you also for sharing why this strikes a chord with you. It means so much to know that you enjoyed this and will read other chapters. Chapter 5 is in the works and coming soon!
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
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You're very welcome.
Comment from estory
I like how you put in all kinds of personal touches in these letters to give us a glimpse of these two lovers long distance; the perfume sprayed on the letter, the details about the job, and buying clothes. The part about the dream was strongest; we get that ominous shadow of impending danger, and an intuition that is a bit scary, also the feeling of helplessness in confronting it by the girl. The details of the explosives unit also casts a bit of a shadow. Some elements of the background culture (Elizabeth Taylor) are not really necessary, I think. The story is really about these two and how they confront the separation in their relationship and the danger of the war. We know its Vietnam. estory
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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I like how you put in all kinds of personal touches in these letters to give us a glimpse of these two lovers long distance; the perfume sprayed on the letter, the details about the job, and buying clothes. The part about the dream was strongest; we get that ominous shadow of impending danger, and an intuition that is a bit scary, also the feeling of helplessness in confronting it by the girl. The details of the explosives unit also casts a bit of a shadow. Some elements of the background culture (Elizabeth Taylor) are not really necessary, I think. The story is really about these two and how they confront the separation in their relationship and the danger of the war. We know its Vietnam. estory
Comment Written 11-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2019
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review Chapter 4 of Love Long Distance. Your review is AWESOME! Much appreciate how you mention in detail what you like. As for Elizabeth Taylor reference, it really is a trivial fact, but each chapter will share some historic details, even small ones like this. As you say, though, the main part of the story is about their separation and the danger of the war. Stay tuned for Chapter 5. It will be coming soon. We hope you will continue to follow along.
God Bless,
Bill & Cathy
