Dixie Pixie
a Pix fix8 total reviews
Comment from Aliene
A fun, funny poem. Meter maintains consistancy throughout and rhymes are rock solid. A creative chronical in the day of an imagined pixie. The red neck ending is clever.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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A fun, funny poem. Meter maintains consistancy throughout and rhymes are rock solid. A creative chronical in the day of an imagined pixie. The red neck ending is clever.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2019
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thanks so much for your very kind review.
Comment from James W. Reynolds
This is a fun, light-hearted poem that's enjoyable to read. The rhythm is strong and the rhymes work well. It's a fun story too. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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This is a fun, light-hearted poem that's enjoyable to read. The rhythm is strong and the rhymes work well. It's a fun story too. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2019
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Thanks so much. I really appreciate your neat comments.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about the mythical creature we know as a pixie. Very little people saw them, but when strange things happen like things falling out of your hands or your glasses are not exactly where you put it you can know there was a pixie around you.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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A very well-written poem about the mythical creature we know as a pixie. Very little people saw them, but when strange things happen like things falling out of your hands or your glasses are not exactly where you put it you can know there was a pixie around you.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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Thanks. I must have one around constantly!
Comment from Mistydawn
This is a cute little poem, a fun read. Very interesting start to finish, and your character really came to life. I really enjoyed all the southern slang. Great job, good luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This is a cute little poem, a fun read. Very interesting start to finish, and your character really came to life. I really enjoyed all the southern slang. Great job, good luck with your contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thanks so much! I really appreciate your comments and good wishes.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Dixie Pixie, presents a charming little spite with a penchant for playing tricks on others. Her eventual Red-neck handle might fit her well. ......
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This poem, Dixie Pixie, presents a charming little spite with a penchant for playing tricks on others. Her eventual Red-neck handle might fit her well. ......
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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well, her red neck is supposed to be because of the beet juice - however, you never know. She's been writin' country lyrics - lookin' for a song.
Thanks for readin' and for your comments.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This poem speaks a story about a girl who is mischievous, she got a new name, and sometimes she commits mischief even open; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This poem speaks a story about a girl who is mischievous, she got a new name, and sometimes she commits mischief even open; well said, well done. Write to inspire, change -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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thanks so much for your review of my post. It is much appreciated.
Comment from Michele Harber
This poem is adorable, and such a fun way to start my day. The southern dialect is so true (i.e., you sound just like my friend from Louisiana - although you did forget "Isn't that special?"), and used well to help create your characters. I enjoyed that both your main character and her father have personalities that come across in the lines you have them say, and that, without saying it in so many words, you've even established the close relationship between the father and daughter. That the daughter getting sprayed with beet juice was greeted by her father not with anger but with a head shake, a laugh and cute endearing nicknames speaks volumes. This is a very enjoyable read, and I wish you luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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This poem is adorable, and such a fun way to start my day. The southern dialect is so true (i.e., you sound just like my friend from Louisiana - although you did forget "Isn't that special?"), and used well to help create your characters. I enjoyed that both your main character and her father have personalities that come across in the lines you have them say, and that, without saying it in so many words, you've even established the close relationship between the father and daughter. That the daughter getting sprayed with beet juice was greeted by her father not with anger but with a head shake, a laugh and cute endearing nicknames speaks volumes. This is a very enjoyable read, and I wish you luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2019
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my goodness, that is a wonderful and very detailed review, and very much appreciated! Many thanks for it, for the beautiful 6 and the good wishes!
Bless your heart!
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You're very welcome, on all counts!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A bit of a nonsensical poem using rhymes that fit but don't make much sense, but then again this is a mythical creature so I expect this is all acceptable, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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A bit of a nonsensical poem using rhymes that fit but don't make much sense, but then again this is a mythical creature so I expect this is all acceptable, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 31-May-2019
reply by the author on 31-May-2019
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hmmm - I'll maybe have to do some editing if you don't think the rhymes make sense. thanks for the tip and for the good luck.
