Delighting In Devilish Deeds
Ticking sins off my list.16 total reviews
Comment from JudyE
Slippery slope indeed! You'll end up in a pile at the bottom on day - but won't you have had fun on the way? (That rhymes - did you notice?) lol oohh not enough characters. :(
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Slippery slope indeed! You'll end up in a pile at the bottom on day - but won't you have had fun on the way? (That rhymes - did you notice?) lol oohh not enough characters. :(
Comment Written 26-Jun-2019
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2019
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Hahaha, being bad is so much fun! Thanks for reviewing this one too.
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You're very prolific. I had to scroll down pages and pages!!!
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I get something on nearly every day; I am in a writing binge and i figure if it's coming out of me I might as well put it on the site... it does mean I have to review a lot though to get some $$$.
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If you're on a roll, go for it. I joined here to try to restoke the fire and get me writing again. It's sort of working. Any writing is better than no writing I guess.
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That's right. I have found that the more I write, the more I write. It's got a bit obsessive. But I am also a competitive person and like to see that I am progressing up the 'charts'.
Comment from Kamisah Karim
A nice one.Kinda cynical too. Good job Lisa. Eating whatever we want, be as lazy and to be controlled by greed too.Then, lust, wrath and pride except envy.You covered almost all. I like the way you wrote it.A very clever idea indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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A nice one.Kinda cynical too. Good job Lisa. Eating whatever we want, be as lazy and to be controlled by greed too.Then, lust, wrath and pride except envy.You covered almost all. I like the way you wrote it.A very clever idea indeed.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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I'm glad you realised it was cynical and satirical. I'm a 'nice girl' really, I am!!
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Yes I know Lisa.It was just your clever thoughts.No worries.
Comment from poetwatch
There's a devil on the air such a joy of despair. Having fun at peoples needs and all you do is plant the seeds. :) You're either having fun today or wishing for some, LisaMay. We all live in this mud ball siding and slipping and wanting it all. :)
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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There's a devil on the air such a joy of despair. Having fun at peoples needs and all you do is plant the seeds. :) You're either having fun today or wishing for some, LisaMay. We all live in this mud ball siding and slipping and wanting it all. :)
Comment Written 27-May-2019
reply by the author on 27-May-2019
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Gee, you should be a poet sometime.
I love mud!!
Comment from Heather Knight
I love this. It's so much fun. I also love your adorable artwork and the great title.
I think there's a typo: anyone is just one word.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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I love this. It's so much fun. I also love your adorable artwork and the great title.
I think there's a typo: anyone is just one word.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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Thanks for commenting on the typo. I think I initially kept it separate to help with the reading rhythm, but you are right - it is incorrect, so I fixed it.
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHA--well, off-meter or not, this poem is a charmer. Yep (re: your notes), slippery slope, but SO much fun. *grin*
So tell me, what's for din-din?
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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HAHAHAHAHA--well, off-meter or not, this poem is a charmer. Yep (re: your notes), slippery slope, but SO much fun. *grin*
So tell me, what's for din-din?
Comment Written 26-May-2019
reply by the author on 26-May-2019
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It's fun to be naughty, even if only in a poem.
Din-din is too much of everything, and then back for second helpings and a double-dose of dessert.
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Dessert first. :))
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Indeed... life is short, eat pudding first!!
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Pie. But pudding is good too. :) And cherry cheesecake. And macadamia, white chocolate cookies. And apple crumble. And pineapple squares, and strawberry shortcake. Did I mention pie? :))))))))))
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Stop stop stop... my tummy is rumbling and I'm drooling.
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:)) Key lime.
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Pineapple upside down cake with lots of whipped cream -- the real stuff, not the edible oil, imitation junk :)
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Mmmmmm. How fat are YOU??
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HAHAHAAHAAAA! Fat. Chubby. Cute. HAHAHAHAHA! My cat is fat too. :)) It's genetic. HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAHA!
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Really.
Comment from WryWriter
LOL! This poem is most humorous! The easy path seems so much fun until the day of reckoning and judgement. I love the little devil figure you chose for this theme. Good job on this one!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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LOL! This poem is most humorous! The easy path seems so much fun until the day of reckoning and judgement. I love the little devil figure you chose for this theme. Good job on this one!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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I'm pleased it brought you enjoyment. I had fun enjoying all those naughty sins... NOT. Please don't think me evil. I'm a good girl really I am.
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LOL! I plead the fifth myself!! LOL!
Comment from LG Wolfe
This was soooo funny! Thanks for my Saturday evening laugh. On my second read, I decided Gluttony was my favourite verse. And then I got to lust and just howled. Your word choices are so vivid! Great work.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This was soooo funny! Thanks for my Saturday evening laugh. On my second read, I decided Gluttony was my favourite verse. And then I got to lust and just howled. Your word choices are so vivid! Great work.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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So, the hot saucy, sinful lust is howl-inducing?? You wicked woman.
Thanks for enjoying my poem and reviewing it.
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I also laughed that this was labelled 'Commentary and Philosophy' rather than 'Satire.' It may have lead to some confusion.
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Thanks for pointing that out... I didn't scroll down far enough to find 'satire'. I changed it now. But the other category of 'commentary and philosophy' is true enough too, just not my personal philosophy of life, but it might fit other people.
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Ah yes, that's true. It's just that I noticed some of the comments.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lively, rollicking piece makes excellent use of specific examples to describe the person who delights in his/her sin--relishes bad behavior; the worse, the better. The end, though, is cautionary!
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This lively, rollicking piece makes excellent use of specific examples to describe the person who delights in his/her sin--relishes bad behavior; the worse, the better. The end, though, is cautionary!
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Retribution is waiting in the wings! I like how you describe my satirical poem... 'rollicking' is such a bouncy word.
Comment from Ricky1024
This was so Evily penned on the hems of your skirt!
But beautifully created.
You mounted each sin so perfectly.
Then blended it sexually.
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As I saw the first one in large print, I said she going to do it and yes you did.
Well worthy of my Sinful six!
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And, as a Latter-Day Saint, we all believe that pride is what's wrong with this Earth today.
Envy should have been first.
Doctor Ricky and Jason.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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This was so Evily penned on the hems of your skirt!
But beautifully created.
You mounted each sin so perfectly.
Then blended it sexually.
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As I saw the first one in large print, I said she going to do it and yes you did.
Well worthy of my Sinful six!
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And, as a Latter-Day Saint, we all believe that pride is what's wrong with this Earth today.
Envy should have been first.
Doctor Ricky and Jason.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you so much for this star-bright review Ricky. Much appreciated. I was somewhat anxious when I wrote this that folks might think I am a debauched sinner! I am glad you recognised it's satire. "Pride goeth before a fall" is a slightly inaccurate interpretation of the Biblical reference but still suits the situation in the world today... so many people are wobbling on the brink.
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Tolearn more on this thoight?
Read this...
"The Strange, Deranged, and Demented?"
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from RodG
Ah, Lisa, you appear to be having lots of fun writing this poem about your sinful doings. You do a great job of listing your "devilish deeds" and it's obvious you don't regret any of your actions--yet. Rod
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Ah, Lisa, you appear to be having lots of fun writing this poem about your sinful doings. You do a great job of listing your "devilish deeds" and it's obvious you don't regret any of your actions--yet. Rod
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Just as well I am not really a wayward hedonist and have written satire: I'd be a bit worried about myself otherwise!
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Ah, glad to hear the Speaker is only your alter ego. I enjoyed the satire. Rod
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My alter ego is such an egoist she hogs the page in most writes of mine.
