Life so precious
Worth the fight20 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
To come so close and then survive is truly a gift and would make you hold that which was almost lost, so precious. You certainly got your message across in a very beautifully crafted poem.
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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To come so close and then survive is truly a gift and would make you hold that which was almost lost, so precious. You certainly got your message across in a very beautifully crafted poem.
Comment Written 25-May-2019
reply by the author on 25-May-2019
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Thank you so very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Gail Denham
No, we mustn't give up - God's not finished with us yet, if we're still here. I want to be ready when God points the way to another action, duty, person to encourage, deed to fulfill.
Thanks for the thinking poem.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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No, we mustn't give up - God's not finished with us yet, if we're still here. I want to be ready when God points the way to another action, duty, person to encourage, deed to fulfill.
Thanks for the thinking poem.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you, and no giving up is not an option****kahpot
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written heartfelt and encouraging poem. Sometimes it is hard to stand against the troubles of the world that seem to escalate and we have no answers anymore, then we know it is time to ask the Lord to take control over our lives.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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A very well-written heartfelt and encouraging poem. Sometimes it is hard to stand against the troubles of the world that seem to escalate and we have no answers anymore, then we know it is time to ask the Lord to take control over our lives.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you and yes at times we all need some help****kahpot
Comment from TPAC
I like your approach in writing, whispering notations expelling feeling softly for the listeners ears to hear presented words placement thrilling to my interests. A good read in my opinion.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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I like your approach in writing, whispering notations expelling feeling softly for the listeners ears to hear presented words placement thrilling to my interests. A good read in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for this excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image, kahpot.
-Your note is appreciated.
-It is nice to see you on FS, too.
-The imagery is very good
as you describe this emotional journey.
-After the "murky grey," you
change direction in the middle.
-You see your life passing by,
but you notice that things
are worth fighting for.
-Finally, the mood changes
to one of hope at the end.
-Thanks for sharing, and
I hope things are good with you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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-Nice image, kahpot.
-Your note is appreciated.
-It is nice to see you on FS, too.
-The imagery is very good
as you describe this emotional journey.
-After the "murky grey," you
change direction in the middle.
-You see your life passing by,
but you notice that things
are worth fighting for.
-Finally, the mood changes
to one of hope at the end.
-Thanks for sharing, and
I hope things are good with you.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you and all will be ok, it is good to be here****kahpot
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You are welcome, and I am very glad to hear that it is good for you to be here and all will be o.k.
Comment from jenintorre
"Life so precious". What a wo derful titlle and so true. This a very moving and thought provoking poem accompanied by perfectly chosen artwork. A very well written poem. Cheers. Jen.
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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"Life so precious". What a wo derful titlle and so true. This a very moving and thought provoking poem accompanied by perfectly chosen artwork. A very well written poem. Cheers. Jen.
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Than you for your very encouraging and inspiring review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a wonderful poem of coming out of the darkness into the light. The pain is so apparent in the beginning, but then the clear thoughts come through seeing life from a different perspective. Well done this was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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What a wonderful poem of coming out of the darkness into the light. The pain is so apparent in the beginning, but then the clear thoughts come through seeing life from a different perspective. Well done this was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you, for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Tootie
AWESOME! Great poem, great presentation. VMarguarite is one of my favorites for artwork. Poem flows so well and what a powerful message! I can so relate to this and I'm sure many others can too. Thank you for sharing it.
Blessings,
Cathy
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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AWESOME! Great poem, great presentation. VMarguarite is one of my favorites for artwork. Poem flows so well and what a powerful message! I can so relate to this and I'm sure many others can too. Thank you for sharing it.
Blessings,
Cathy
Comment Written 24-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you, yes life is so precious****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Hello my friend. You certainly touch on dying in a very vivid way. Your words seem so eerie in their voicing.
One does wonder what lies beyond, do we not? I liked these lines in particular: (Great use of verbs here:)
"I saw the passing of a life once mine
as my will resisted this darkened time
a strength emerged from pain inside
drawing me out like the ebbing tide
reminding me of a wondrous light"
Suggestion: It is "wondrous" not "wonderous"
Blessings Bob
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Hello my friend. You certainly touch on dying in a very vivid way. Your words seem so eerie in their voicing.
One does wonder what lies beyond, do we not? I liked these lines in particular: (Great use of verbs here:)
"I saw the passing of a life once mine
as my will resisted this darkened time
a strength emerged from pain inside
drawing me out like the ebbing tide
reminding me of a wondrous light"
Suggestion: It is "wondrous" not "wonderous"
Blessings Bob
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 24-May-2019
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Thank you for the understanding of this piece, your suggestion will be corrected, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This is a lovely, touching, well-written poem. Your lines smoothly take the reader from the descent to the bottom of a pit to being lifted from it
by desire to return to the love of life.
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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This is a lovely, touching, well-written poem. Your lines smoothly take the reader from the descent to the bottom of a pit to being lifted from it
by desire to return to the love of life.
Comment Written 23-May-2019
reply by the author on 23-May-2019
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Thank you for your excellent words and compliments****kahpot
