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Aiona's Poems

Viewing comments for Chapter 58 "Co-dependant Fee"
Because my portfolio is too messy and I have OCD.

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Comment from susand3022
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Hi Aiona, I definitely think that this can be called a love poem. Now, I'm probably the only Rhode Islander that doesn't LOVE coffee, and probably doesn't bleed coffee when they're cut! (I bleed Coke mixed with Chocolate... bring on the sugar Baby!) But I'm feeling your vibe, and if your other half does that for you... well then, the more power to ya'! ;)

 Comment Written 09-May-2019


reply by the author on 12-May-2019
    Thanks, Susan. Sorry it took me so long to get back to you. I'm on a boat in Deception Pass right now. Sailing from May 11 to 27. So I may not have internet access along Johnstone Strait. I brought coffee on this trip!!!!
reply by susand3022 on 12-May-2019
    Damn!!! I can't believe you didn't take me with you!!! I'm a really great travel buddy!!! I swear!!!! (if you don't mind the snoring!) lol
Comment from humpwhistle
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Hmmm. A love poem? Yes . . . with a poleaxe intimated.
Humorous and a bit scary at the same time.
What do you think about a comma after 'Oh'?
Just a suggestion. Don't hurt me.

Peace, Lee

 Comment Written 07-May-2019


reply by the author on 07-May-2019
    LOL!!!!! Yeah, a comma sounds good. I've had two cups so far.
Comment from 24chas
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I think it definitely qualifies as a love poem on two hands. One for your husband, if he makes the coffee, and secondly, for the coffee. Good job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 07-May-2019


reply by the author on 07-May-2019
    Thanks, 24chas. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, the caffeine hit in the morning to wake the senses eh? Glad I don't have this addiction! You made me smile here, goof luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-May-2019


reply by the author on 07-May-2019
    Thanks, Dolly :) I hope you have a good day too.