Assassin Nation
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Comment from BethShelby
It seems to me no one was left alive at the training site. Maybe the president should get used to drinking straight from the bottle because what seems to go on in this administration must be a prelude to WWIII.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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It seems to me no one was left alive at the training site. Maybe the president should get used to drinking straight from the bottle because what seems to go on in this administration must be a prelude to WWIII.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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They are a bit single-minded.
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I thought it was all over. My goodness, more mayhem on the hit parade. I am reading Clive Cussler right now so, I can deal with blood and gore. You write many things well. I am jealous :-)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I thought it was all over. My goodness, more mayhem on the hit parade. I am reading Clive Cussler right now so, I can deal with blood and gore. You write many things well. I am jealous :-)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Thank you, Karen
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:-)
Comment from jim vecchio
Interesting. Got me to wonder what will happen next. What is the fate of Connor and Pipes? Who will drink all tht liquor? Will this stretch out to Sunday when I have an extra str?
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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Interesting. Got me to wonder what will happen next. What is the fate of Connor and Pipes? Who will drink all tht liquor? Will this stretch out to Sunday when I have an extra str?
Comment Written 01-Dec-2023
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2023
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I think so, Jim
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I hope so!
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is the beginning of a story that will later tie into A Murder a Month.
The characters here are political and active in some kind of occurrence that is not readily explained. The premise is intriguing.
Ralf
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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This is the beginning of a story that will later tie into A Murder a Month.
The characters here are political and active in some kind of occurrence that is not readily explained. The premise is intriguing.
Ralf
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
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A Murder a Month was an independent story that seemed to fit into this one, so I aimed for this chapter to connect them.
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello again Bill. As you can see I went right to the beginning. I have to say that is one hell of a prologue, if that's how this is starting then it seems I am in for one hell of a read. It really set the tone, good job.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hello again Bill. As you can see I went right to the beginning. I have to say that is one hell of a prologue, if that's how this is starting then it seems I am in for one hell of a read. It really set the tone, good job.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2019
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2019
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Hope you like it. Thanks for reading, 13. Bill
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Hi Bill,
Great to see you writing a book and beginning quite well it seems.
The dialogue is clear, concise and quickly introduces the problem-
missing men.
The ending is open and the situation suggestive of some heavy discussion to follow.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Hi Bill,
Great to see you writing a book and beginning quite well it seems.
The dialogue is clear, concise and quickly introduces the problem-
missing men.
The ending is open and the situation suggestive of some heavy discussion to follow.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 16-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2019
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Thank you, Shirley.
Comment from kahpot
A great start to what is looming as a very interesting story, I like that you have thrown in some intrigue right from the start, the way Samantha stumbles with Mr Pipes name uh..CC.. Mr Pipe will..., I look forward to catching up with this story****kahpot
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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A great start to what is looming as a very interesting story, I like that you have thrown in some intrigue right from the start, the way Samantha stumbles with Mr Pipes name uh..CC.. Mr Pipe will..., I look forward to catching up with this story****kahpot
Comment Written 15-Jul-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jul-2019
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Thanks, kahpot
Comment from Heather Knight
I don't usually like reading about politics, but this is very well written. Wonderful dialogue.
Rusty Pipes is a great name.
I love the last sentence.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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I don't usually like reading about politics, but this is very well written. Wonderful dialogue.
Rusty Pipes is a great name.
I love the last sentence.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks, Maria
Comment from nomi338
Question. Is this a sequel or a prequel? I love how you are going on with te story from another angle, but tied in to the original. I am all strapped in as I anticipate a rather bumpy ride. Let's get at it!
here we go!!
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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Question. Is this a sequel or a prequel? I love how you are going on with te story from another angle, but tied in to the original. I am all strapped in as I anticipate a rather bumpy ride. Let's get at it!
here we go!!
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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My plan is to go forward from the end of Baker's Dozen, but flashback to both Connor's initial actions before he ever met G.I. Joe and throughout a timeline which leads back to the present. In between it should fill in items that were unclear in the first story.
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Good, bring it.
Comment from pbomar1115
I'm assuming that Sonny is the president of the United States who is a nervous wreck and he should be. The job is enormous. The peek into how well the president does under pressure reveals how big his job is or how weak he is.
Phillip
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I'm assuming that Sonny is the president of the United States who is a nervous wreck and he should be. The job is enormous. The peek into how well the president does under pressure reveals how big his job is or how weak he is.
Phillip
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 04-May-2019
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I hope to keep him and his staff busy.
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Great.
Phillip
