Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 46 "Cosmic Love"My Collection of Love Poetry
11 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
How very wonderful on the cosmic scale!! :) ;) A great and original offering for the contest! :) :) **Sorry so far behind....gave up trying to catch my tail 'cuz I got too dizzy....now I'm just trying to get through the days (got to add 'family emergency to the list of life...ugh). Take care! :) ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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How very wonderful on the cosmic scale!! :) ;) A great and original offering for the contest! :) :) **Sorry so far behind....gave up trying to catch my tail 'cuz I got too dizzy....now I'm just trying to get through the days (got to add 'family emergency to the list of life...ugh). Take care! :) ;) Yvette
Comment Written 04-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Again, Thanks very much for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Heather Knight
Very beautiful story, Trisha. It's funny the moon is the one that radiates warmth.
The artwork is also wonderful.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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Very beautiful story, Trisha. It's funny the moon is the one that radiates warmth.
The artwork is also wonderful.
Thanks so much for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 01-May-2019
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I?m confused! it?s the girl who radiates warmth, not the moon (as you wrote) Thanks for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
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I understood the girl was the moon and the boy the sun...
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No problem!
? the girl radiated warmth?
Thank you
Comment from JudyE
This is very cleverly written and makes a great dribble flash fiction entry. I don't have anything to suggest that would improve it and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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This is very cleverly written and makes a great dribble flash fiction entry. I don't have anything to suggest that would improve it and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks very much for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sally Law
Love this, as I love the heavens, stars and moon. It's the grandest show every night. This was set up to deliver a sweet punch at the end. Romantic, too.
My best to you and in the Dribble Flash Fiction Contest.
Sally :+)
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Love this, as I love the heavens, stars and moon. It's the grandest show every night. This was set up to deliver a sweet punch at the end. Romantic, too.
My best to you and in the Dribble Flash Fiction Contest.
Sally :+)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks very much for your great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written dribblet flash fiction about the cosmic relationship with the moon and stars. They work together and light up the skies wherever they like to go.
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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A very well-written dribblet flash fiction about the cosmic relationship with the moon and stars. They work together and light up the skies wherever they like to go.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 05-May-2019
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Thanks very much for your great review Sandra
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great description of the coming together of like-minded souls and likening it to cosmos love gives this write some magic, best wishes . . . . Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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A great description of the coming together of like-minded souls and likening it to cosmos love gives this write some magic, best wishes . . . . Love Dolly x
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thanks for a positive review
hugs Trisha
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
What a cute dribble flash fiction entry for the contest. Leading us to think it is an exchange of factory workers and then to the passing of the day and night.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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What a cute dribble flash fiction entry for the contest. Leading us to think it is an exchange of factory workers and then to the passing of the day and night.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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That was exactly my goal! This is one of my rare attempts at flash fiction. Thank you for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Excellent flash fiction. The metaphors for sun and sea and moon are clear in the exchange between the woman and the man. The artwork is lovely and adds realism to the piece. I love the title, "Cosmic Love." Well done and enjoyable to read.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Excellent flash fiction. The metaphors for sun and sea and moon are clear in the exchange between the woman and the man. The artwork is lovely and adds realism to the piece. I love the title, "Cosmic Love." Well done and enjoyable to read.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you Jesse, Im honored to get your complimentary review.
Hugs Trisha
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You're welcome, Trisha.
Jesse
Comment from LisaMay
What a pity they are destined to have a platonic relationship, only meeting when they change shifts even though it could be a marriage made in heaven. I liked the personification; a nicely written little story.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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What a pity they are destined to have a platonic relationship, only meeting when they change shifts even though it could be a marriage made in heaven. I liked the personification; a nicely written little story.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I really like this one. It's a great little play on cosmic love. The characterisation and personification works very well, especially given the short word allowance.
this could well I think.
GMG
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Hi there,
I really like this one. It's a great little play on cosmic love. The characterisation and personification works very well, especially given the short word allowance.
this could well I think.
GMG
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2019
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Thank you, I appreciate your complimentary review!
Hugs, Trisha
