Spring Surprise
5-7-5 contest entry12 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Spring Surprise, has the right set up and opens up the possibilities of new friends wandering into your life and taking it over.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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This 5-7-5, Spring Surprise, has the right set up and opens up the possibilities of new friends wandering into your life and taking it over.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Indeed Spring suggests new friends wandering into our lives. Many thanks for sharing SPRING SURPRISE, Bill.
Comment from Kerry Foley
Awe... This is such a cute little 5-7-5, Rod. I'm in the process of moving and plan to get a puppy once I'm settled in, A great Spring pup. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Awe... This is such a cute little 5-7-5, Rod. I'm in the process of moving and plan to get a puppy once I'm settled in, A great Spring pup. lol Good luck! ~Kerry
Comment Written 25-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I wish you luck with the new spring pup, Kerry. Many thanks for sharing SPRING SURPRISE and your kind praise. Rod
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Author,
Your wonderful thoughts and story lift me! Puppies in springtime warm our hearts as the springtime temperatures warm the rest of us! A perfect choice of picture for your poem about a puppy's wish to "nose" in one's lap! My best in this contest, Deborah
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Dear Author,
Your wonderful thoughts and story lift me! Puppies in springtime warm our hearts as the springtime temperatures warm the rest of us! A perfect choice of picture for your poem about a puppy's wish to "nose" in one's lap! My best in this contest, Deborah
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I am so pleased my ?puppy poem? gave you a lift, Deborah. Many thanks for your kind praise. Rod
Comment from Dean Kuch
Awww, what a wonderful surprise it would be too, especially for a child.
Dogs weren't named man's best friend for nothing.
A dog's biggest joy in life comes from pleasing its owner and they live for no other reason than to serve our needs.
There is a very good reason that D-O-G spelled backward reads God.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Awww, what a wonderful surprise it would be too, especially for a child.
Dogs weren't named man's best friend for nothing.
A dog's biggest joy in life comes from pleasing its owner and they live for no other reason than to serve our needs.
There is a very good reason that D-O-G spelled backward reads God.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Dean, for sharing SPRING SURPRISE.
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Sure, anytime...
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
So true and you will wake one morning to a tulip poking through the snow and you will know that spring has sprung, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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So true and you will wake one morning to a tulip poking through the snow and you will know that spring has sprung, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2019
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I am definitely looking forward to seeing that tulip. Many thanks for sharing SPRING SURPRISE, Dolly.
Comment from victor 66
Puppies and kittens, like little gremlins, looking so interested and serious. And then, there's their curiously. For being so young and so small, it's amazing what they can get into. At the same time they chew or claw up a two thousand dollar couch, they still look so adorable. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Puppies and kittens, like little gremlins, looking so interested and serious. And then, there's their curiously. For being so young and so small, it's amazing what they can get into. At the same time they chew or claw up a two thousand dollar couch, they still look so adorable. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you, victor, for sharing SPRING SURPRISE.
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You are most welcome.
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
Spring is very much like the joy a new found pup
as everything is young and growing once more
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
Spring is very much like the joy a new found pup
as everything is young and growing once more
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed my metaphor for Spring. Many thanks, RS, for your kind praise.
Comment from kiwijenny
Ooo I hope Spring is more permanent than a stray pup...we do have a stray cat that follows us everywhere... I digress. Springer spaniel? Nick name that pup Spring... if it had a red coat.. Rusty Spring...
God bless
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Ooo I hope Spring is more permanent than a stray pup...we do have a stray cat that follows us everywhere... I digress. Springer spaniel? Nick name that pup Spring... if it had a red coat.. Rusty Spring...
God bless
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I really like your suggestion of ?Spring(er) Spaniel? as a name for the pup. Many thanks for sharing my 5-7-5.
Comment from bhogg
Met the contest requirements and I think a pretty good mental image with your post. Accompanied with appropriate artwork. It all seems to work. Good luck! Bill
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Met the contest requirements and I think a pretty good mental image with your post. Accompanied with appropriate artwork. It all seems to work. Good luck! Bill
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you, Bill, for your positive comments about my 5-7-5.
Comment from Michele Harber
What a fun, interesting and very unique metaphor for spring. You're right that, after a long hard winter, the arrival of spring can certainly take you by surprise, like the touch of an unexpected stray puppy. I like the specificity of the description of the puppy "nos[ing] into your lap." Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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What a fun, interesting and very unique metaphor for spring. You're right that, after a long hard winter, the arrival of spring can certainly take you by surprise, like the touch of an unexpected stray puppy. I like the specificity of the description of the puppy "nos[ing] into your lap." Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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I am delighted you enjoyed my metaphor for Spring. Many thanks, Michele, for your kind praise.
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You're very welcome.
