Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "My Love"My Collection of Love Poetry
8 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
You've managed your heart shape poem beautifully with this, very appropriate, love poem, talking of the emotional, physical and spiritual side of love. Nice one Trish,
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
You've managed your heart shape poem beautifully with this, very appropriate, love poem, talking of the emotional, physical and spiritual side of love. Nice one Trish,
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 23-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 25-Mar-2019
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Thanks so much for your kind review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your shape poem contest entry, Bucketlist. Your words are precise and readers can feel their intensity. The color scheme is perfect. Your words make a beautiful shape of a heart. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
I enjoyed your shape poem contest entry, Bucketlist. Your words are precise and readers can feel their intensity. The color scheme is perfect. Your words make a beautiful shape of a heart. Thanks for sharing and best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 20-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your very positive review, Jan. I?m glad you enjoyed reading my poem
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Wow...now there is not only a poem with deep feeling but one that is borne of patience to find just the right words to make that lovely heart-shape! :) Wonderful job, Trish -- it is beautiful! :) Best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Wow...now there is not only a poem with deep feeling but one that is borne of patience to find just the right words to make that lovely heart-shape! :) Wonderful job, Trish -- it is beautiful! :) Best of luck in the contest! :) Yvette
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is delightful Trisha, and the presentation is a beautiful heart, I liked the: "gentle physical sensation". Passions raging and with desire, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
This is delightful Trisha, and the presentation is a beautiful heart, I liked the: "gentle physical sensation". Passions raging and with desire, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review, Dolly
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Bucket,
Awwwww - this is an absolutely beautiful love poem and a superb contest entry, right down to the shape of your verse! Best of luck in the competition. Nothing here that I can see for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
Hi Bucket,
Awwwww - this is an absolutely beautiful love poem and a superb contest entry, right down to the shape of your verse! Best of luck in the competition. Nothing here that I can see for me to suggest you consider improving upon. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review, Jan
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written shape poem about the love we have for another in the shape of a heart which is very well-done and the heart form is clearly visible and it looks beautiful.
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
A very well-written shape poem about the love we have for another in the shape of a heart which is very well-done and the heart form is clearly visible and it looks beautiful.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 23-Mar-2019
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Thank you for your complimentary review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I think these are things that people should be looking for. I loved the heart you created in your writing and you did a great job. No one should ever settle for anything less than they deserve. Great job
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
I think these are things that people should be looking for. I loved the heart you created in your writing and you did a great job. No one should ever settle for anything less than they deserve. Great job
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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I agree, but I think a lot of people settle for far less. Thank you for your kind review.
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from 24chas
This was a creative and unique piece, Bucketlist. I liked the form you used and the wording was perfect for the message. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
This was a creative and unique piece, Bucketlist. I liked the form you used and the wording was perfect for the message. Nice job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2019
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2019
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Your kind review was much appreciated
Hugs, Trisha