I, Sea
Timeless tide.8 total reviews
Comment from Shirley McLain
a Very visual picture with your poem. Great Job. I have been there and I am. You did a great job. I wish you Good luck in the contest and have a blessed day.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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a Very visual picture with your poem. Great Job. I have been there and I am. You did a great job. I wish you Good luck in the contest and have a blessed day.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Shirley.
Comment from LisaMay
I got a chuckle out of this... it is very relateable. I like poetry that is accessible, relevant, universal, humorous, so this ticks those boxes for me.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I got a chuckle out of this... it is very relateable. I like poetry that is accessible, relevant, universal, humorous, so this ticks those boxes for me.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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Thank you, LisaMay!
Comment from Mark Valentine
I love the idea of us old folks having an affinity with other ancient things. That, plus the wonderful alliteration you so naturally fit in here should make this a contender in the 20 syllable contest - good luck!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I love the idea of us old folks having an affinity with other ancient things. That, plus the wonderful alliteration you so naturally fit in here should make this a contender in the 20 syllable contest - good luck!
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2019
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I appreciate it, Mark!
Comment from victor 66
Perspective as one gets older is everything. If a person is positive about aging, as it is written in your poem, you can take it with a sense of humor as you accept and enjoy it. People who are negative, die a very slow death. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Perspective as one gets older is everything. If a person is positive about aging, as it is written in your poem, you can take it with a sense of humor as you accept and enjoy it. People who are negative, die a very slow death. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the read and review, Victor!
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You are most welcome.
Comment from moongirlwriter
OMGsh does this poem take me to many places. Whoa. . .I do love the connection of how the universe works in this poem. I also love your choice for the artwork.
Thanks for sharing this with us. . .good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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OMGsh does this poem take me to many places. Whoa. . .I do love the connection of how the universe works in this poem. I also love your choice for the artwork.
Thanks for sharing this with us. . .good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thanks again. Moongirl!
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:)
Comment from phill doran
Ah yes Anon - the sea refuses no river.
This piece is a very pleasant and thoughtful use of the format. The words do not jar (which sometimes happens with the small formats) and your conclusion is a wonderful declaration of our oneness with all things.
I wish you well with this piece and your further writing.
cheers
phill
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Ah yes Anon - the sea refuses no river.
This piece is a very pleasant and thoughtful use of the format. The words do not jar (which sometimes happens with the small formats) and your conclusion is a wonderful declaration of our oneness with all things.
I wish you well with this piece and your further writing.
cheers
phill
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much, Phill!
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-I like your title, too.
-Effective alliteration with
the '-s' sound.
-I also like "ancient silt"
and how you reference
it in your ending, which
is a good one.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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-Nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
and the imagery is effective.
-I like your title, too.
-Effective alliteration with
the '-s' sound.
-I also like "ancient silt"
and how you reference
it in your ending, which
is a good one.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Many thanks, Pam!
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You are very welcome.
Comment from 24chas
This was an enjoyable read, unknown poet. I really liked the flow of it and the way you summed it up was perfect. Nice use of the artwork as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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This was an enjoyable read, unknown poet. I really liked the flow of it and the way you summed it up was perfect. Nice use of the artwork as well. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
