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Act of Endurance

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Dawn of Chaos

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Comment from Earl Corp
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My takeaway is you have a very dim view of mankind and his impact on this planet. I was under the impression God created man before the animals and then gave him dominion over them.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    King James at least in Genesis relates animals then man, viewing man, male and female, being family: nuts. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.
Comment from QC Poet
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Conceptually interesting and thought provoking. A believe a review for possible grammatical issues will improve this fine work, great thought provoking poetry.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
    Appreciate the heads up do suffer pits in my write, revisions prompted by reviewers like you aid my efforts. Thanking you for your generous rate and warm sentiments.