How Hitler Almost Won The War
His evil philosophy still embraced today.18 total reviews
Comment from CD Richards
Extremely well researched, Sally. Terrific detail has been put into this. Some of the parallels with more recent events are quite chilling.
I hope you won't mind me pointing out a couple of very minor spag issues, as fixing them will make a terrific piece even better...
I will re-examine three of his fundamental strategies, and how it proved most effective in perpetrating one of the most evil plans known to mankind.
["strategies" is plural, so it should be "they", rather than "it"]
six million Jews anhilated
[annihilated]
Hitler's step by step plan in it's simplest form--
[there shouldn't be an apostrophe in its]
Also, quoting sources is a mark of good writing, and there are numerous ways to go about it, but the way you've employed doesn't make it immediately obvious which footnote goes with which quote in the body. Readers need to count and match for themselves. Perhaps you could use matching numbers, e.g:
"...And this time, naturally, there is no lack of money." [1]
Once again, good job.
Craig
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Extremely well researched, Sally. Terrific detail has been put into this. Some of the parallels with more recent events are quite chilling.
I hope you won't mind me pointing out a couple of very minor spag issues, as fixing them will make a terrific piece even better...
I will re-examine three of his fundamental strategies, and how it proved most effective in perpetrating one of the most evil plans known to mankind.
["strategies" is plural, so it should be "they", rather than "it"]
six million Jews anhilated
[annihilated]
Hitler's step by step plan in it's simplest form--
[there shouldn't be an apostrophe in its]
Also, quoting sources is a mark of good writing, and there are numerous ways to go about it, but the way you've employed doesn't make it immediately obvious which footnote goes with which quote in the body. Readers need to count and match for themselves. Perhaps you could use matching numbers, e.g:
"...And this time, naturally, there is no lack of money." [1]
Once again, good job.
Craig
Comment Written 08-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review review and critiques. I have them repaired except for footnotes. Since I am blind, it may take me a bit to number them. I originally had the sources in the text, but my husband said they took away from my piece. I will tidy that up today with numbers as you have suggested. Thank you, again. So glad you liked it.
All my best to you and yours,
Sal :+)
Comment from LynSys
Good history lesson Sally...we could almost just change the names and the dates and voila...here we are. You know, I watched a documentary that showed Hitler's slogan was "Make Germany Great Again"....do I hear the twilight theme song?
There's a really good book out entitled "My Grandfather Would Have Shot Me" by Nikola Sellmair. She's a black woman and it's her true story of walking into a Hamburg book store and seeing her mother's picture on the cover of a book. In getting the book, she finds out that her Grandfather was Amon Goeth who was portrayed in the movie Schindler's List (he's the one that stood on his balcony and just shot Jews just to watch them die).
Anyway, it's a very interesting book (I thought it might interest you since you too are interested in history).
I apologize for this being so long ;o)
Lynda
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Good history lesson Sally...we could almost just change the names and the dates and voila...here we are. You know, I watched a documentary that showed Hitler's slogan was "Make Germany Great Again"....do I hear the twilight theme song?
There's a really good book out entitled "My Grandfather Would Have Shot Me" by Nikola Sellmair. She's a black woman and it's her true story of walking into a Hamburg book store and seeing her mother's picture on the cover of a book. In getting the book, she finds out that her Grandfather was Amon Goeth who was portrayed in the movie Schindler's List (he's the one that stood on his balcony and just shot Jews just to watch them die).
Anyway, it's a very interesting book (I thought it might interest you since you too are interested in history).
I apologize for this being so long ;o)
Lynda
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insight. I remember very vividly, Amon Goeth from Schindler?s List. And yes, no one knew Hitler?s real agenda as he preyed upon the war torn nation of German and their repayment of war reparations from WWI. He was steeped in anti-Semitism and the hatred of Jews long before he was chancellor though. He was deeply involved in the occult, too. So glad you could stop by, Lynda.
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment from Miss Sherry
You have written just what I have been working on in another venue where I have allies. "The rough beast, its time come round again, slouches toward Bethlehem to be born". We are in deep trouble and the citizens must be made aware. You have written this history out to perfection. "All it takes for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing". Bless you for your courage in presenting this. It is so timely.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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You have written just what I have been working on in another venue where I have allies. "The rough beast, its time come round again, slouches toward Bethlehem to be born". We are in deep trouble and the citizens must be made aware. You have written this history out to perfection. "All it takes for evil to triumph is for good men to do nothing". Bless you for your courage in presenting this. It is so timely.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the excellent review and insightful comments, dear Sherry. I appreciate your encouragement in all my work as you do so faithfully. You mean so much to me.
All my best,
Sally
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I appreciate your kindness, Sally. You are special to me...I admire your work and your sweetness. Be blessed, dear one!
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for this sobering reminder of how satan used people to devise such evil plans in WWII. I can't imagine why people deny this happened. I also could not convince my Jewish college friends that the Nazis were NOT Christians!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you for this sobering reminder of how satan used people to devise such evil plans in WWII. I can't imagine why people deny this happened. I also could not convince my Jewish college friends that the Nazis were NOT Christians!
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and wise insight. No, the Nazis made Pastors, Priests and Clergy profess an oath of allegiance to the fuehrer to remain open for business and it was required that they lead the congregation in the same oath according to the writings of Detreick Bonhoeffer. Sick. He actually led an underground church who refused to do such a thing.
So glad you stand up in your faith, dear Helen. Hang on...more is coming in the days to come.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A factual and damning write about the Nazi regime and how it spread like a weed among the German people. Unfortunately they didn't take much persuading because there was hatred among Germans for the Jewish people. When Hitler first came to power he brought structure to society and encouraged the people to work towards a better Germany for all. Obviously Hitler had a secret agenda and no one could quite believe what was happening at first. But long before Hitler took full power, there were whispers of what was coming. Churchill knew and key people in the political world knew and many Jews fled earlier. But no one could know the scale or the horror of the death camps, it still seems unbelieveable that such a thing could happen. I shall look out for your next post Sally, love Dolly x
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A factual and damning write about the Nazi regime and how it spread like a weed among the German people. Unfortunately they didn't take much persuading because there was hatred among Germans for the Jewish people. When Hitler first came to power he brought structure to society and encouraged the people to work towards a better Germany for all. Obviously Hitler had a secret agenda and no one could quite believe what was happening at first. But long before Hitler took full power, there were whispers of what was coming. Churchill knew and key people in the political world knew and many Jews fled earlier. But no one could know the scale or the horror of the death camps, it still seems unbelieveable that such a thing could happen. I shall look out for your next post Sally, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2019
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Thank you Dolly, for the excellent review and insight. I always appreciate your sage British insight. You know I adore Winston Churchill, and will be featuring him in part two. It takes a special person to stand up to evil and say no. He surely loved England despite his somewhat caustic manner.
All my best,
Sal xo
Comment from Ben Colder
Today resembles the times. and yes, as a young boy I remember the hardships we all suffered. I was raised on a military installation during the hour while my brothers fought the Nazi regime for survival, Your story is right on and the one who is determined to continue spinning the web once again is the little Nazi boy , who is now billionaire Scores. God placed Trump in office and God will see us through. He that blesses Israel, I will bless. Good one Sally.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Today resembles the times. and yes, as a young boy I remember the hardships we all suffered. I was raised on a military installation during the hour while my brothers fought the Nazi regime for survival, Your story is right on and the one who is determined to continue spinning the web once again is the little Nazi boy , who is now billionaire Scores. God placed Trump in office and God will see us through. He that blesses Israel, I will bless. Good one Sally.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the outstanding review and encouraging support. I knew my historians would like this, especially my Christians. George Soros is a Hitler remake. He seeks to destroy God?s people Jew and Gentile. He is funding many evil endeavors. President Mudaro of Venezuela is another one. He blocked humanitarian aid just today from his country. Unbelievable. How do you have a country if everyone s dead? A mad man just like Hitler!
So glad you stopped by. Thank you so much.
Sal :~)
Comment from Sugarray77
Very well written, Sally. Your research, organization and presentation of the subject matter are stellar and well written. I am looking forward to readin part 2. I know it will be just as interesting.
Melissa
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Very well written, Sally. Your research, organization and presentation of the subject matter are stellar and well written. I am looking forward to readin part 2. I know it will be just as interesting.
Melissa
Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Dear Melissa, I am so glad you were able to take this all in and review it. I appreciate the outstanding marks so much. This article took was a bit longer for me. Just to find the right picture was an ordeal. As soon as I saw it, I knew. I am so glad you get me. Already started on part two.
All my best,
Sal :+)
Comment from 24chas
This was a very interesting read, Sally Law. It was well written and presented a lot of facts that no one can deny. It seems like mankind seems doomed to keep repeating ourselves. We just never learn. Great job.
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This was a very interesting read, Sally Law. It was well written and presented a lot of facts that no one can deny. It seems like mankind seems doomed to keep repeating ourselves. We just never learn. Great job.
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Comment Written 07-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and insightful comments. I appreciate the time it took to read this, it?s a bit long. I had a lot to say burning in my heart.
All my best to you and yours.
Sally :+)
