Thoughts About Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Armour "My Collection of Love Poetry
12 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well written heartfelt poem. Sometimes we need protection so that we don't get hurt, especially our vulnerable heart needs armour to shield it from heart ache caused by careless people around us.
Typo
However strong your external amour(armour) is
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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A very well written heartfelt poem. Sometimes we need protection so that we don't get hurt, especially our vulnerable heart needs armour to shield it from heart ache caused by careless people around us.
Typo
However strong your external amour(armour) is
Comment Written 12-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Thanks for reviewing,
hugs Trisha
Comment from Darlene Franklin
An interesting twist on the concept of chivalry. Not fighting on behalf of his lady love, but rather fighting falling in love. In which case, cupid's arrows are made to pierce that armor.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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An interesting twist on the concept of chivalry. Not fighting on behalf of his lady love, but rather fighting falling in love. In which case, cupid's arrows are made to pierce that armor.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is a beautifully penned piece of poetic art, my friend. I enjoyed the theme of knights in their armor as the days of chivalry always lend themselves well to the theme of love. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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This is a beautifully penned piece of poetic art, my friend. I enjoyed the theme of knights in their armor as the days of chivalry always lend themselves well to the theme of love. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Chivalry is waning, I think the modern term would be fear of commitment! Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
the armour picture is stunning. I enjoyed your poem even though you mentioned dragons; to keep the spirit and soul in a dungeon like hell. Sounds like a battle that's going to take place. Good writing.
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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the armour picture is stunning. I enjoyed your poem even though you mentioned dragons; to keep the spirit and soul in a dungeon like hell. Sounds like a battle that's going to take place. Good writing.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2019
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2019
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Your reviews are always appreciated, thank you so much
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I like the comparison of the Knight's armour to the armour we sometimes put around ourselves to hide from hurt, but which ultimately hurts us more.
the dragon of fear which lurks so deep - like that. Great comparisons and a great free verse Trisha enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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I like the comparison of the Knight's armour to the armour we sometimes put around ourselves to hide from hurt, but which ultimately hurts us more.
the dragon of fear which lurks so deep - like that. Great comparisons and a great free verse Trisha enjoyed it.
cheers,
valda
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2019
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Thanks, Pearl. This was spurned from a friends situation. I?m so glad you enjoyed reading the poem, and thanks for a great review
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I think you took yourself into a fantasy world here of knights, maidens and dragons Trisha! Perhaps you were hoping for your knight to come to you? A fun read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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I think you took yourself into a fantasy world here of knights, maidens and dragons Trisha! Perhaps you were hoping for your knight to come to you? A fun read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2019
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It?s a long story, part perception, an intriguing trail of real life events.Many thanks for reviewing, Dolly .
Hugs,Trisha
Comment from QC Poet
This is a Slayer of Hearts. Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses fit perfectly with the attached photo .Also makes an interesting Love poem type of entry great free verse.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This is a Slayer of Hearts. Excellent concept and Well thought out visual picturesque verses fit perfectly with the attached photo .Also makes an interesting Love poem type of entry great free verse.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks for a wonderful review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from BrooklynnPreston
I absolutely adore this! I love how the armor symbolizes the walls we build around our mental selves to keep us safe. The fear and love dragons were such creative ideas! I love how you use the 'maiden' as a way of saying you can still fall in love even if you're scared. Also the line 'as dragons can also be slayed at night' was an amazing metaphor. Passion overcomes terror after all. I can not get enough of how creative this idea is! Amazing work! Definitely worth six stars. I have no doubt about it.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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I absolutely adore this! I love how the armor symbolizes the walls we build around our mental selves to keep us safe. The fear and love dragons were such creative ideas! I love how you use the 'maiden' as a way of saying you can still fall in love even if you're scared. Also the line 'as dragons can also be slayed at night' was an amazing metaphor. Passion overcomes terror after all. I can not get enough of how creative this idea is! Amazing work! Definitely worth six stars. I have no doubt about it.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks for a wonderful review!
Hugs, Trisha
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is a very intriguing write, Trisha, and I can't help but wonder if you wrote it specifically for a particular (your??) knight who hides his battles/emotions down deep behind the armor....either way, it is beautiful and I thank you for sharing it (him??) with all of us! :) ;) Yvette :)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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This is a very intriguing write, Trisha, and I can't help but wonder if you wrote it specifically for a particular (your??) knight who hides his battles/emotions down deep behind the armor....either way, it is beautiful and I thank you for sharing it (him??) with all of us! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Keep wondering, a girl has to have some secrets! Thanks for a wonderful review!
Hugs, Trisha
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Yes, she most certainly does, Lady T! :) :) You take care this week! ;) ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very good image and presentation, Trisha.
-A good comparison to a knight in armor
trying to slay dragons, and the challenges of
falling in love.
-The imagery is good, and you show his
dilemma very well:
"Love creeps into each crevice of armour plate."
-Good advice and conclusion.
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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-Very good image and presentation, Trisha.
-A good comparison to a knight in armor
trying to slay dragons, and the challenges of
falling in love.
-The imagery is good, and you show his
dilemma very well:
"Love creeps into each crevice of armour plate."
-Good advice and conclusion.
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2019
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Thanks for a wonderful review!
Hugs, Trisha
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You are very welcome, Trisha.
