Comment from BWReal

Good

Okay. Now I won't go out into the forest at night!
Good wordplay depicting something as gory...which is really nature acting out its own instincts. It's survival of the fittest in a well-written 100-word play.
Nice job!

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks for reading and interesting comments zanya

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Hi mystery writer. This is written in an almost poetic fashion. An interesting divergence from the norm. Nicely accompanied by a colourful picture. This could do well in the competition. Good luck. Mel.

 Comment Written 21-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks for those encouraging words -much appreciated zanya

Comment from Janice Canerdy

Excellent

Your narrative is very well-written--well-plotted, coherent, logical,
and suspenseful. Word choices are vividly descriptive. Looks as if both
will starve unless another animal shows up.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

Thanks for a superb review zanya

Comment from Teresa Alford

Excellent

It is impressive how much you have said in such few words. Your story is very descriptive, which enables the reader to easily visualize the story. Good job! TA. ";-)

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2019

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2019

And superb review zanya