Beautiful Mare
A mare that loved humans so much16 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
I am glad there is a happy ending for this horse. She obviously had so much to give and deserved a loving home. It is so horrible how badly some animals are treated. Excellent story.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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I am glad there is a happy ending for this horse. She obviously had so much to give and deserved a loving home. It is so horrible how badly some animals are treated. Excellent story.
Comment Written 18-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2019
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Thanks once again for reading my poem. She was beautiful. Nothing to look at but her heart was filled with love. XXK.
Comment from SLMorrical
I like this very much. I can picture the mare just nuzzling and saying help me. The Mare is not defeated, but freed. Her life has changed for the better. This very good. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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I like this very much. I can picture the mare just nuzzling and saying help me. The Mare is not defeated, but freed. Her life has changed for the better. This very good. Very well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Glad you liked the little story of the mare. She was amazing and much loved by me. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Donka Kristeva
A beautiful and inspiring story! Your notes were helpful to understand where this mare was coming from. Horses love humans and like all domestic animal respond to love.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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A beautiful and inspiring story! Your notes were helpful to understand where this mare was coming from. Horses love humans and like all domestic animal respond to love.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Donka, Thanks so much for your wonderful review. Glad you enjoyed. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from kiwijenny
Oh, Aussie you are so great. We had two horses. It was great for the kids to be around them. I love hippo therapy it's amazing
Well penned flash fiction...flash fact-ion...lol I coined a new form
God bless
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Oh, Aussie you are so great. We had two horses. It was great for the kids to be around them. I love hippo therapy it's amazing
Well penned flash fiction...flash fact-ion...lol I coined a new form
God bless
Comment Written 16-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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So you used to horse around eh? Yes, horses have much to give and teach. My mare was in a terrible state when I bought her. Took me months and many vet bills to get her back to health.
Want a heatwave? We are so fed up with the weather! Love, Kay.
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Ours is cold dreary and drizzly. I teach 4 year olds and when they can?t get outside you can tell..lol
Comment from tfawcus
I do like a story with a happy ending! It's good to hear that your old mare was able to live out the remainder of her days in peace, after having had such a hard life.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I do like a story with a happy ending! It's good to hear that your old mare was able to live out the remainder of her days in peace, after having had such a hard life.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you my friend. She had a beautiful nature and a sense of humor. Took me ages to feed her up and lots of vet checks. I know she loved all who sat on her back, a rare horse. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, Beautiful Mare, fulfills the word limit requirement and describes a life rescued from cruelty. Thanks for writing this.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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This dribble, Beautiful Mare, fulfills the word limit requirement and describes a life rescued from cruelty. Thanks for writing this.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Hello Bill, Thanks for reading and glad you enjoyed the story. Blessings, Kay.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Aussie, with your contest entry and message in your prose writing story. I enjoyed reading it. I am happy the horse found better owners that appreciated her. Thanks for sharing and caring. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Good job, Aussie, with your contest entry and message in your prose writing story. I enjoyed reading it. I am happy the horse found better owners that appreciated her. Thanks for sharing and caring. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Hello Jan, Thanks so much for reading. She was a wonderful mare with no vices. I loved her dearly. Bless you, Kay.
Comment from BigPoppaJrock
Great story, fit the contest criteria very well. Very descriptive and explanatory in such few words. I enjoyed the read and got a vocab lesson with the word flogged. nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Great story, fit the contest criteria very well. Very descriptive and explanatory in such few words. I enjoyed the read and got a vocab lesson with the word flogged. nicely done. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Hello new friend, Yes, our language can be very different to yours; glad you enjoyed. Cheers, Kay from Oz!
Comment from Gloria ....
K this is a beautiful story. You managed to write in the character, the setting, conflict and resolution in a mere 50 words which I know is not an easy thing to do.
Fantastic and I wish you great luck with the contest committee.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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K this is a beautiful story. You managed to write in the character, the setting, conflict and resolution in a mere 50 words which I know is not an easy thing to do.
Fantastic and I wish you great luck with the contest committee.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Sweetie-Pie, How's the frost down on the pumpkin? I needed to write about Lassie, she was a blithe spirit that had to be set free. I fed her up, loved her dearly, she in return gave me a new life with her companion horses. She never missed a beat. I rode her in an endurance ride (in the rain) we even got a medal that day. The little crippled girl that adored her; finally took her home to a property with heaps of grass and lots of love. Amen. Thanks for reading. Blessings, K.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
K, it always saddens and infuriates me when I see or learn of animal cruelty - or child cruelty for that matter. My daughter's favourite book growing up was Black Beauty. I enjoyed this Dribble Flash Fiction story entry. A happy ending for horse and new owner. ~DD
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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K, it always saddens and infuriates me when I see or learn of animal cruelty - or child cruelty for that matter. My daughter's favourite book growing up was Black Beauty. I enjoyed this Dribble Flash Fiction story entry. A happy ending for horse and new owner. ~DD
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello DD, Thanks so much for your kind review. We have to protect animals, they are like children; most vulnerable. Love Kay.
