Floating Legacies
Bet you never knew, did you?19 total reviews
Comment from Polarpanda
Ooh I love this. What a wonderful image! You have captured, in a perfect economy of space, a piece of feral childhood running around in the world. Beautiful.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Ooh I love this. What a wonderful image! You have captured, in a perfect economy of space, a piece of feral childhood running around in the world. Beautiful.
Comment Written 17-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2019
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Wow, Polarpanda!! Thanx so much for these wonderful comments and especially for the honor of those beautiful stars...love the comment of 'feral childhood...might have to use that some time! :) ;) Be sure to drop by again sometime! :) ;) May you have a wonderful weekend reconstructing rainbows of your own! :) :) Yvette :)
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Writing a sensible poem in nine syllables--that is a tall order! You have effectively used vivid imagery and thought-provoking whimsy in this charming entry.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Writing a sensible poem in nine syllables--that is a tall order! You have effectively used vivid imagery and thought-provoking whimsy in this charming entry.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you very much for your wonderful review, Janice -- here's wishing you a week ahead filled with reconstructing rainbows of your own design! :) :) Yvette
Comment from Spitfire
Perfect picture to compliment the poem. The changing colors within the words pick up the rainbows in the bubbles. Nice use of alliteration with the b sound throughout.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Perfect picture to compliment the poem. The changing colors within the words pick up the rainbows in the bubbles. Nice use of alliteration with the b sound throughout.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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Thank you so very much for your wonderful review, Spitfire -- I do so appreciate your dropping by today! :) Please know that you're welcome to stop in anytime! :) ;) Take care and have a wonderful week ahead reconstructing rainbows of your own delight! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from LisaMay
I loved your presentation, very skillfully done, and a nice verbal concept to play with. I get that bubbles have rainbow colours but somehow I didn't connect with the "wild" and "shattered" as they seem a bit harsh and angular for the roundness of bubbles floating gently.
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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I loved your presentation, very skillfully done, and a nice verbal concept to play with. I get that bubbles have rainbow colours but somehow I didn't connect with the "wild" and "shattered" as they seem a bit harsh and angular for the roundness of bubbles floating gently.
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2019
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noted. :)
Comment from BeasPeas
No matter how old we are, it seems we never tire of our fascination with bubbles. The rainbow caught inside an orb. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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No matter how old we are, it seems we never tire of our fascination with bubbles. The rainbow caught inside an orb. Nicely done. Good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Marilyn - much appreciated! :) :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Uh, actually I did know, Anonymous Poet.
The process that creates such a pretty prism is known as refraction.
You see, light comes in then bounces off of...Oh, never mind. You already know...
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Uh, actually I did know, Anonymous Poet.
The process that creates such a pretty prism is known as refraction.
You see, light comes in then bounces off of...Oh, never mind. You already know...
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx for the rainbow explanation, Sir Dean -- so good to hear from you! :) Have a wonderful week ahead reconstructing rainbows of your own! ;) ;)
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My pleasure, Yvette...
~Dean
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What an wonderful concept: bubbles as shattered rainbows. :) I love your topic and your title "Floating Legacies"... a great little 2-5-2 and a excellent contest entry. Good luck.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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What an wonderful concept: bubbles as shattered rainbows. :) I love your topic and your title "Floating Legacies"... a great little 2-5-2 and a excellent contest entry. Good luck.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx for your wonderful comments, Cindy -- always appreciated! :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about bubbles floating on the air in the garden looking like little rainbows floating everywhere. A beautiful presentation as well.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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A very well-written 2-5-2 poem about bubbles floating on the air in the garden looking like little rainbows floating everywhere. A beautiful presentation as well.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx so much for your review, Sandra - much appreciated! :) Have a wonderful week reconstructing rainbows of your own! :)
Comment from Miss Sherry
Very pretty!! Love bubbles - they are like floating dreams. I enjoyed this so very much. Your visual and words knit together into a pretty little gem!
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Very pretty!! Love bubbles - they are like floating dreams. I enjoyed this so very much. Your visual and words knit together into a pretty little gem!
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Thanx so much for your wonderful comments, Sherry -- much appreciated!:) Have a wonderful week ahead reconstructing rainbows of your own! :) ;)
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Not So Mysterious Mystery Writer Writer! :) :) :)
Oh! How I love the thought of bubbles being pieces of "shattered rainbows!"
What a unique thought! And one that is absolutely delightful!
Here's to many more bubbles and rainbows!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Hello Not So Mysterious Mystery Writer Writer! :) :) :)
Oh! How I love the thought of bubbles being pieces of "shattered rainbows!"
What a unique thought! And one that is absolutely delightful!
Here's to many more bubbles and rainbows!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 14-Jan-2019
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2019
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Well, you managed to make me smile on a Monday, Diane -- kudos and many,many thanx to you! :) :) Here's wishing for you a week filled with reconstructing some rainbows for brighter colors in the future! :) ;)
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I do my best...even on a Monday! :)
